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PenetratorXXL · 01-03-2003, 04:07 AM

hi,i have read the days befor that some people ask you to rate their sites!!
i am very new in the adult business and i would be very greatfully to hear your coments about how you like my site (it´s my first)!!
tell me please what i can do better!!!

http://www.xxl-tgp.com/html/main.html

thanks a lot!!!
(i know my english is very bad,sorry)

Best Regards
Penetrator

Mutt · 01-03-2003, 04:15 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by PenetratorXXL

(i know my english is very bad,sorry)

no problem

you are not alone!

what kind of waiter is your site on? virtual?

um..........i noticed that you are using the font 'Viner Hand ITC' all over your TGP.........not sure but i don't think the majority of surfers will have that on their system. But maybe it ships with WinXP?

ControlThy · 01-03-2003, 04:19 AM

Your site is loading a bit slow.

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SpaceAce · 01-03-2003, 04:19 AM

Hi, Penetrator.

Your English isn't so bad

1) I think you should tone those colors down. All those pastels on that mustard background are a little tough on the eyes. It makes the site look unfriendly.

2) The site looks like a scam because of the top-down, banner-links-banner layout. When I first clicked your link, I almost closed the site right away because I expected it to be spam banner farm. You might want to try a more refined layout and cut back a bit on the banners, especially if the site is new.

3) Those colors are ugly.

4) Having everything centered one-on-top-of-the-other makes the page seem a little cookie-cutter. It is lacking a personality. You might try adding some graphics for things like "click here to bookmark" and other bits of text on the page. I'd also consider not centering everything.

5) You really ought to do something about those colors.

Due to extensive corneal damage suffered while looking at the powder-blue-on-mustard text, I can not continue to critique your site. Perhaps some others will have some advice for you.

Anyway, good luck

It isn't too bad if you're new at this and I am sure you'll get plenty of help from other webmasters, here.

SpaceAce

ldinternet · 01-03-2003, 04:20 AM

Something for your webmaster page. You wrote:

Quote:

No script executing allowed
No cookies
No pages without thumbnails
Submitting to the proper category required
No endless list of banners and sponsorlinks or very large advertisements, keep it reasonable
No childporn, rape, real violence, bestiality or other immoral or illegal content
No pages without thumbnails
Changing a page after submitting is not allowed
8 Small Movies & 3 Big Movies minimum
No duplicate submissions even with new URL
No forwarding tags or something that sends you to another location
A thumb must link to the same movie
No blind links
We don´t accept text like : next,next page,next gallery,back,home...
On your gallery a link (recip) back is required
Use our banners,bottons or textlinks in a good spot on the gallery.
Serve the images from your own server. Don´t hotlink it from our server!
Mouseover not allowed
Any status line change is forbidden
No popup consoles Window moving is not allowed Window resizing is not allowed

It would be easier to write what you DO allow.

Change it to:

1. General TGP guidelines apply
2. Please give us a reciprocal link
3. For movie galleries, we don't list anything less than 8 small movies or 3 big movies

SandraWang · 01-03-2003, 04:55 AM

Hi Penetrator, welcome to the board! About your site, I think you should get rid of all the

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you know, it get pretty annoying ;)

Best of luck!

lagwagon · 01-03-2003, 05:25 AM

way to long and in a straight line.... take some time to fit it in the space that you are provided

Triple 6 · 01-03-2003, 05:26 AM

The site is ugly - because the text and all the rest of the colors dont mingle well with the background color. That background color is great, bright, woke me up like a cup of coffee, but the colors of the text and tables just simply dont work with it. Change one or the other.

little-me · 01-03-2003, 06:00 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by SpaceAce
Hi, Penetrator.

Your English isn't so bad

1) I think you should tone those colors down. All those pastels on that mustard background are a little tough on the eyes. It makes the site look unfriendly.

2) The site looks like a scam because of the top-down, banner-links-banner layout. When I first clicked your link, I almost closed the site right away because I expected it to be spam banner farm. You might want to try a more refined layout and cut back a bit on the banners, especially if the site is new.

3) Those colors are ugly.

4) Having everything centered one-on-top-of-the-other makes the page seem a little cookie-cutter. It is lacking a personality. You might try adding some graphics for things like "click here to bookmark" and other bits of text on the page. I'd also consider not centering everything.

5) You really ought to do something about those colors.

Due to extensive corneal damage suffered while looking at the powder-blue-on-mustard text, I can not continue to critique your site. Perhaps some others will have some advice for you.

Anyway, good luck It isn't too bad if you're new at this and I am sure you'll get plenty of help from other webmasters, here.

SpaceAce

I'm with you on all of it....

I have one more thing to add... Make sure that the page it self is centered... on my screen everything is on the left side and there is an awful lot of yellow on the right side....

But not bad for a newbie

Good luck with it and welcome to the wonderfull world og Porn

cash69 · 01-03-2003, 06:04 AM

if it had my sites banners on it.... i would have to give it a perfect 10

Fatum · 01-03-2003, 06:17 AM

Why do you start with a tgp ? If you arent trading with other sites you will end up with like 10 hits a day

Also with the current layout it looks like a spam page, tell surfers why they have to click your banners

01-03-2003, 04:07 AM	#1
PenetratorXXL Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 36	Can you rate my site?? hi,i have read the days befor that some people ask you to rate their sites!! i am very new in the adult business and i would be very greatfully to hear your coments about how you like my site (it´s my first)!! tell me please what i can do better!!! http://www.xxl-tgp.com/html/main.html thanks a lot!!! (i know my english is very bad,sorry) Best Regards Penetrator

01-03-2003, 04:19 AM	#4
SpaceAce Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Magrathea Posts: 6,493	Hi, Penetrator. Your English isn't so bad 1) I think you should tone those colors down. All those pastels on that mustard background are a little tough on the eyes. It makes the site look unfriendly. 2) The site looks like a scam because of the top-down, banner-links-banner layout. When I first clicked your link, I almost closed the site right away because I expected it to be spam banner farm. You might want to try a more refined layout and cut back a bit on the banners, especially if the site is new. 3) Those colors are ugly. 4) Having everything centered one-on-top-of-the-other makes the page seem a little cookie-cutter. It is lacking a personality. You might try adding some graphics for things like "click here to bookmark" and other bits of text on the page. I'd also consider not centering everything. 5) You really ought to do something about those colors. Due to extensive corneal damage suffered while looking at the powder-blue-on-mustard text, I can not continue to critique your site. Perhaps some others will have some advice for you. Anyway, good luck It isn't too bad if you're new at this and I am sure you'll get plenty of help from other webmasters, here. SpaceAce Last edited by SpaceAce; 01-03-2003 at 04:20 AM..

01-03-2003, 04:55 AM	#6
SandraWang Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Norway Posts: 309	Hi Penetrator, welcome to the board! About your site, I think you should get rid of all the !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you know, it get pretty annoying ;) Best of luck! __________________ UnrealBank Promote Micro-Niches that Convert Anything from bald to bizarre and squirting. CCBill 50% Revenue: www.UnrealBank.com

01-03-2003, 05:25 AM	#7
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01-03-2003, 06:04 AM	#10
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01-03-2003, 06:17 AM	#11
Fatum Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: 404 Posts: 459	Why do you start with a tgp ? If you arent trading with other sites you will end up with like 10 hits a day Also with the current layout it looks like a spam page, tell surfers why they have to click your banners