Hi, Penetrator.
Your English isn't so bad
1) I think you should tone those colors down. All those pastels on that mustard background are a little tough on the eyes. It makes the site look unfriendly.
2) The site looks like a scam because of the top-down, banner-links-banner layout. When I first clicked your link, I almost closed the site right away because I expected it to be spam banner farm. You might want to try a more refined layout and cut back a bit on the banners, especially if the site is new.
3) Those colors are ugly.
4) Having everything centered one-on-top-of-the-other makes the page seem a little cookie-cutter. It is lacking a personality. You might try adding some graphics for things like "click here to bookmark" and other bits of text on the page. I'd also consider not centering everything.
5) You really ought to do something about those colors.
Due to extensive corneal damage suffered while looking at the powder-blue-on-mustard text, I can not continue to critique your site. Perhaps some others will have some advice for you.
Anyway, good luck
It isn't too bad if you're new at this and I am sure you'll get plenty of help from other webmasters, here.
SpaceAce