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Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life · 11-05-2006, 07:36 PM

i'm currently in the process of converting all my blogs over to wordpress, and have been considering a few changes on my blogs. I want to do everything i can to make them appealing, and of course profitable. so hit me up with some criticism, and don't hold back. if something sucks, it needs changed...

right now my main concerns are my blog posts, is my text decent enough, or is there something i can do to perfect this? should i post more text? i am also a little worried about overdoing my linklists, i don't want it to get too out of control. i'm considering losing alot of blogdir links which aren't sending much traffic, and saving the few that are turning traffic out for me, to make room for better hardlink trades to other blogs.

check out http://www.youngerhoneys.com http://www.idealpink.com and http://wwwpunkhotties as these are my current sites.

all suggestions will be taken into account. thanks...

xecutech · 11-06-2006, 12:53 AM

Damn, I think those look great! Some of the best looking adult blogs i have seen so far. Do you design these, or do you have a designer you could refer me to?

Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life · 11-06-2006, 01:20 AM

i design them...

xecutech · 11-06-2006, 01:22 AM

What do you charge to do one?

Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life · 11-06-2006, 02:45 AM

haven't really put that much thought into doing any work for othe people yet, hit me up on icq and maybe we can work something out...

rigrunner · 11-06-2006, 04:13 AM

nice blogs, but you might want to add a little more text/se spider food to each post.

great designs! Wish i could do that kinda stuff

charlie g · 11-06-2006, 08:39 AM

You've got talent bro. These are really nice looking designs!

Darkhorse · 11-06-2006, 04:30 PM

I think you also need to do a bit more text per-post, also try linking up your keywords.

DjSap · 11-06-2006, 05:15 PM

i like the design and i would suggest having more text with each post....the amount of links out is also somewhat too high...

Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life · 11-09-2006, 02:29 AM

ok, so after some conversing with a few professional designers, doing some reading or design and sales psychology, etc etc, i did a redesign of Younger Honeys, which can be viewed at http://www.filthreport.com/portfolio/younger_honeys_v2/ and i am happy to say i think this design kills the present one! i am going to overhaul this entire site for a relaunch hopefully next week. i'm going to be hosting all my own image galleries soon, thickening up the text (considering paying for outside help for a while), posting 4x more galleries a day, and adding in some extra content to the site.

if anyone has any comments or revisions hey see that they think should be made, let me know before launch day! the design is in xlabors hands for wordpress conversion at the moment...

munki · 11-09-2006, 03:31 AM

Great design... great text, you got the formula down.

rigrunner · 11-10-2006, 06:13 AM

nice to see more text going on the second version - you can really improve that sales text at the top. Porn surfers want dirty not something your grandma could read and not feel bothered about!

I'm not keen on the honeycomb background but I guess that one is just personal preference.
Get alt tags on the images, particularly the header ones - think about the first things the search engines crawl..

But nice work!

Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life · 11-10-2006, 06:25 AM

anyone got any tips on perving up a solo girl ad? i mean, there's not very many of these girls who take their work far enough for me to perv on, lol. its hard for me to start talking about fucking, and sucking, fingering, sluts and so on, when alot of these girls barely take their clothing off! kind of false advertising, or should I even care about this? i'll take another shot at it later anyways...

Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life · 11-10-2006, 07:21 AM

ok, i gave filthing my ad spot up a bit a shot, dropped the honeycomb to a less intrusive blue gradient, and have gotten started on a shitload of text writing for futue posts. keep the suggestions coming!

Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life · 11-10-2006, 07:42 AM

almost forgot the alt-tags on images. will have them all in place for the final release. should my tags be a bunch of keyword jibberish? (eg alt=sexy teen teens hot young pussy fuck sex, etc) or more understandable (eg alt=free sexy young teens and hot solo girl pussy") type of thing?

11-05-2006, 07:36 PM	#1
Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life (felis madjewicus) Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In Mom & Dad's Basement Posts: 20,368	critique my blogs i'm currently in the process of converting all my blogs over to wordpress, and have been considering a few changes on my blogs. I want to do everything i can to make them appealing, and of course profitable. so hit me up with some criticism, and don't hold back. if something sucks, it needs changed... right now my main concerns are my blog posts, is my text decent enough, or is there something i can do to perfect this? should i post more text? i am also a little worried about overdoing my linklists, i don't want it to get too out of control. i'm considering losing alot of blogdir links which aren't sending much traffic, and saving the few that are turning traffic out for me, to make room for better hardlink trades to other blogs. check out http://www.youngerhoneys.com http://www.idealpink.com and http://wwwpunkhotties as these are my current sites. all suggestions will be taken into account. thanks...

11-06-2006, 04:13 AM	#6
rigrunner Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: UK Posts: 877	nice blogs, but you might want to add a little more text/se spider food to each post. great designs! Wish i could do that kinda stuff __________________ Get Nasty - Make Bank Here

11-06-2006, 05:15 PM	#9
DjSap Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 3,869	i like the design and i would suggest having more text with each post....the amount of links out is also somewhat too high... __________________ Blog Themes, TGP Design, Writing Services, Grunt Work ICQ: 66871495

11-09-2006, 03:31 AM	#11
munki Do Fun Shit. Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: OC Posts: 13,393	Great design... great text, you got the formula down. __________________ “I have the simplest tastes. I am always satisfied with the best.” -Oscar Wilde

11-10-2006, 06:13 AM	#12
rigrunner Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: UK Posts: 877	nice to see more text going on the second version - you can really improve that sales text at the top. Porn surfers want dirty not something your grandma could read and not feel bothered about! I'm not keen on the honeycomb background but I guess that one is just personal preference. Get alt tags on the images, particularly the header ones - think about the first things the search engines crawl.. But nice work! __________________ Get Nasty - Make Bank Here

11-06-2006, 12:53 AM	#2
xecutech Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Nashville Posts: 349	Damn, I think those look great! Some of the best looking adult blogs i have seen so far. Do you design these, or do you have a designer you could refer me to?

11-06-2006, 01:20 AM	#3
Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life (felis madjewicus) Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In Mom & Dad's Basement Posts: 20,368	i design them...

11-06-2006, 01:22 AM	#4
xecutech Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Nashville Posts: 349	What do you charge to do one?

11-06-2006, 02:45 AM	#5
Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life (felis madjewicus) Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In Mom & Dad's Basement Posts: 20,368	haven't really put that much thought into doing any work for othe people yet, hit me up on icq and maybe we can work something out...

11-06-2006, 08:39 AM	#7
charlie g Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Center of the Universe Posts: 2,759	You've got talent bro. These are really nice looking designs!

11-06-2006, 04:30 PM	#8
Darkhorse Horsing Around Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: AU Posts: 5,867	I think you also need to do a bit more text per-post, also try linking up your keywords.

11-09-2006, 02:29 AM	#10
Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life (felis madjewicus) Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In Mom & Dad's Basement Posts: 20,368	ok, so after some conversing with a few professional designers, doing some reading or design and sales psychology, etc etc, i did a redesign of Younger Honeys, which can be viewed at http://www.filthreport.com/portfolio/younger_honeys_v2/ and i am happy to say i think this design kills the present one! i am going to overhaul this entire site for a relaunch hopefully next week. i'm going to be hosting all my own image galleries soon, thickening up the text (considering paying for outside help for a while), posting 4x more galleries a day, and adding in some extra content to the site. if anyone has any comments or revisions hey see that they think should be made, let me know before launch day! the design is in xlabors hands for wordpress conversion at the moment...

11-10-2006, 06:25 AM	#13
Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life (felis madjewicus) Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In Mom & Dad's Basement Posts: 20,368	anyone got any tips on perving up a solo girl ad? i mean, there's not very many of these girls who take their work far enough for me to perv on, lol. its hard for me to start talking about fucking, and sucking, fingering, sluts and so on, when alot of these girls barely take their clothing off! kind of false advertising, or should I even care about this? i'll take another shot at it later anyways...

11-10-2006, 07:21 AM	#14
Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life (felis madjewicus) Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In Mom & Dad's Basement Posts: 20,368	ok, i gave filthing my ad spot up a bit a shot, dropped the honeycomb to a less intrusive blue gradient, and have gotten started on a shitload of text writing for futue posts. keep the suggestions coming!

11-10-2006, 07:42 AM	#15
Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life (felis madjewicus) Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In Mom & Dad's Basement Posts: 20,368	almost forgot the alt-tags on images. will have them all in place for the final release. should my tags be a bunch of keyword jibberish? (eg alt=sexy teen teens hot young pussy fuck sex, etc) or more understandable (eg alt=free sexy young teens and hot solo girl pussy") type of thing?