first tgp - review plzzz
 

Hey all

please review my first tgp site.

http://teen.jismfactory.com/

Yes, I know, tgp's aren't anything special. Just looking for some feedback
on the basics, and to make sure I haven't done anything reallllllly wrong.
I've got dating (fling) and affiliate links on same page, sooo ???
was also going to add AFF link, but WTF with aff slowwwwwwwwwwnnnnnnnesssss
today, so maybe later.

thx for the help.

it seems like none of your galleries are working

You have only Teentopanga on your site.. you ever clicked a thumb? Not a single gallery works. Congrats to the winners :)

ya, the galleries dont work so I rate it a 0, well 1 if you count that I got to see pics of teens for FREE, yay

1) I doubt you have permission to use those images in your header
2) Lose the peel ad
3) There are enough teen thumb tgps to last 1000 lifetimes

What everyone else said, AND, you have the click thru cash banner resized, which may be no big deal but it's enough of a reason for them to not have to pay you.

and I'm sure you plan to add more galleries but NEVER use so many galleries from one girl. Why would anyone join with all those free galleries?

Basically, it looks like you need to start over. It's all wrong atm.

My two cents is:
1) Loose the subdomain name. Find a good teen domain name and use that.
2) Get rid of the header. Takes up way too much space on top. You are not a paysite so loose it as well.
3) Add some more thumbs & make them bigger then 150x110.
4) Make an external CSS file.
5) Work on your SEO for the site. You have no description tag & your title tag is too general.

It always takes work!

its a great start :D keep going

U my friend are going to make A SHITLOAD of money...........GET READY!!

:1orglaugh

ok, where do i backup the truck up to???

many thanks for everyone's time.

the galleries do work, just not thru the sub

so this:
http://teen.jismfactory.com/

is actually here:
http://www.jismfactory.com/teen/teens_index.html


obviously I hadn't checked that properly ;-( my bad.
smart thumbs doesn't seem to like me moving things around.

so am I up to 2 yet??
how about a 3 for teen ass shots??
http://www.jismfactory.com/teen-grea...ens_index.html


the images are from a program, and the designer i used works in da biz
and said we should be fine???? but thanks for the heads up, I was going
to double check with the program ppl.

What's wrong with the peel?? do peel's convert for anyone??? other then it's a pull away to a dating / fuck me
site, and doesn't get them to follow the main purpose of the site.
that was originally my thought for the free stuff, stick it at the bottom ( i will
be lengthening the page) and the cheap prick that actually scrolls to the
bottom wasn't gonna buy anyway. So, get him to click a ppc for something!!!

enuf teen tgps - yaaa no doubt, this is basically my starting point. also, just want to get onthe full bus that's passing me by right now. I find the bus with lots of seats as we go ;-)

I wanted to break them down a bit.

great teen asses:
http://www.jismfactory.com/teen-grea...ens_index.html

and then get a list of niches, and start hittin them.



and thanks very much for the adivce on the banner resize, hadn't really thought that one thru.

also, the galleries in there right now are just from 2 sponsors, and i've just loaded it for testing.

I'm contemplating purging once the pages / site is working, and reloading the galleries.

Question, how many galleries should I have in each niche???? right now i'm at around 4200 or something like that? I think that might actually be pictures tho, not galleries. I'm still getting used to how smart thumbs breaks things down.

so again,
thanks very much for your input and your time.

No where near enough poo

I like poo

You're on the wrong board for TGP advice. :)

thanks for that, i'll try to get more...

i'll hit you up later, haven't time right now.

but....... do you really live on beaver isl???

a bumpidy