Critics wanted
 

for the new design of my paysite
http://www.gaybdsmclub.com
Please don't be descreet in your sentences :)

Pay me and I'll be your critic!

It was pleasant to me, rather interesting site! :)
Good luck!

Sorry, I dont click on links with "gay" and "bdsm" in the link. :1orglaugh

Just joking, the site looks good. :thumbsup

Well done!

:thumbsup

:rasta

Looks damn good :thumbsup

Only problem for me is that it looks like the same two guys all over the tour. Maybe diversify a little...

I like the graphic design a lot, but you could use some copy editing.

"Fetish plays" -> "Hot Fetishes" (or something like that; "Fetish plays" definitely doesn't work)

"Today Story" -> "Today's Story"

"Wanna see the lust and voluptuousness at its true sight?" -> ?

"Please visit iBill, our authorized MERCHANT, for accest to GayBDSMClub.com To cancel subscription, please visit"
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"Please visit iBill, our authorized MERCHANT, for access to GayBDSMClub.com. To cancel your subscription, please visit"

"Sign up to get an ultimate access to this astonishing site with lots of high-resolution images and qualitative videos, tons of stories. Constant updates and perfect support service will do its best to give you the maximum of pleasure and conveniences. Become a member of this tremendous extreme GAY-BDSM CLUB site"
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"Sign up to get complete access to this astonishing site with lots of high-resolution images, quality videos, and tons of stories. Our constant updates and first-rate customer support make GAY-BDSM CLUB incredibly sexy and easy to use. Become a member of our extreme GAY-BDSM CLUB today!"

...or something like that.

Cheers
-b

Respect :thumbsup

looks... gay :winkwink:

Nice Design :thumbsup

Your has a lot of potential. Good Luck!

check your css, your html tables are all broken up

Thank you very much for very useful answer
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Looks nice to me:thumbsup

Great thanks for your opinions :thumbsup
but up, up...
Critics, please more critic :)

Site looks awesome! That stuff should sell extremely well.

Thank you... I sell it good enough, ~1:90 from mixed LL, SE and TGP traffic. But I've not so much traffic. Revsharers needed.

looks nice, should do very well :)

Up! Up!
Site is tuned now, and critique still needed!
http://www.gaybdsmclub.com

buttons on the join page are placed too confusing...
the rest looks good:thumbsup

Same thing here....

Well first off I went to click the image and it isn't linked up. I'd suggest making your front image be COMPLETELY clickable and link through to either your join page (if you're confident that they will want to purchase straight away) or to your tour page so they can get a better feel for what they're going to buy before purchasing.

I would also recommend you feature the tour more prominently on the front page.. "HARDCORE BDSM footage, click here for a free tour"

Your tour pages are good, but they are not interconnected. I clicked tour and was taken to a page, then on that page I also clicked tour and was taken to a different page. This means you have more than one tour page to your tour, yet you're not displaying that information.. perhaps insert some 'More>>>" or 'Continue with Tour>>>" buttons on those pages and then a call to action with a larger 'sign up now'.

The surfer needs to be directed to what to do. You can't just expect them to arrive at your site and do things you want them to. They need prompts to go in the direction you want (to your join page). Remember where the surfer is at...

WHAT'S IN IT FOR ME????

You must give them a reason to buy, so show them your content (which looks like it's good), and then call them to do something. Force the issue.

Anyway, you wanted critical advice, that's what I've got.. soft sell can work on some things, but this is also a BDSM site, and when you're being BDSM you may as well take a dominant selling standpoint for your site. Likelihood is you'll get some takers when you tell them what they need to do.

Good luck.. BDSM rocks!! :cool-as-a

Thank you. Seems your post is very useful :thumbsup