please review my poem
 

women have holes and they getfilled
women have holes and we want to fill them
If women had no holes we would want to dig them
we still try

women drool out of their holes
sometimes its runny sometimes its thick
sometimes its red
so they go to walmart to buy a new pair
of underwear

Some women get fucked in the ass
they get paid money to do it
guys like it
because its degrading
these women do it because they like enemas filled with cash
and the cocaine

In japan they like to be shit on
in russia the pony cock is fine
in germany there is piss and fists
but all over the world
there are rumours
of the snuff

filmed with 8mm film
some rich American pays the satanist
promises are made to an innercity youth
rape
her face is hooded
and her neck is cut

This is said to happen in L.A
yet no one has ever really seen the tapes

Talented :Hollering

Far from Shakespeare tho...

:1orglaugh :1orglaugh

you are disturbed.
seek help.

keats has nothing compared to you

Wow that changed my life.










For the worse.

:Graucho :helpme

There once was a man from Nantucket...

put alot of thought into that, huh?

why am i disturbed?

Blood Mistress

The night belongs to many creatures that hunt by the moonlight
But there is one who is holds fear even among those creatures.
Her true name is never spoken by those who are bright
And those who whisper of this woman call her the Blood Mistress.

Her hair is the color of a midnight and her eyes are crimson
But her skin is without color and is cold to the touch.
Her voice is but a whisper speaking of unspeakable sin
And with a kiss, she can steal your very soul.

I have seen this Blood Mistress but once in my short life
For she chose me to be her mate so very long ago.
When I refused her advances saying that I did not want a wife,
She left her mark upon the side of my neck and never returned.

Now I lay dying in a room of white and all I want is her
For I know that nothing awaits save an empty void.
She has taken my blood, my soul, and her I no longer fear
And I await the grim reaper with closed arms.

very... deep!:1orglaugh

Very nice. I would have liked to see a haiku version too!

holes should be the subject of your poem