What do you designers think about this tour?
 

http://www.lezboland.com/leznewa.html

I personally don't like something about it but I'm not sure what. Any ideas? I'm a designer but for some reasom all my galleries and other sites look better for some reason to me. But this site gets all my traffic. I'm trying to accomplish something but to me something's off. Maybe the background? Look at the join page it actually looks better then the tour. Trying to boost conversion for XMas.

looks clean to me. i like it. the only thing i would change is the font on the paragraph of text up top. bold it, or up the size a bit, or change the font or something. it's kind of difficult to read. and maybe take down the amount of space between to pink bars a bit, 20px or so. looks rela nice, those are just my suggestions.

agreeing with above, find better fonts (nothing too kinky/curvy, just a bit more interesting but still clean and readable) and maybe make some parts of text pink-ish to stand out more.. or even make those linked playtrailer/joinnow parts as rounded rectangle liquid style buttons, if you can keep them clean/discrete enough.. I like the tour generally, nice & simple.

loads slowly due to too much image based text so the paragraphs need to be html in a vertical scaling table

the bg is atrocious, somehow it spawns memory allusions to rotating skull flashing gifs from the olden days

the spaces between girls are too tall and the right side of said girl based table cells are bland with graphical links that can't hope to fill the negative space due to the fonts slim profile and general lack of context

id make those cells and use html text in there too for more luring and detailed descriptions for each horizontal segment

Not too keen on the mushrooms with penis's

i kind of like where the look of it is going, but the background is a little intrusive. try opening it up in photoshop and raising the lightness around 50 points. looks a lil better. i'm also thinking you could knock the top margin to 0px.

I dont like it ! You must change font!

fucking awful.


delete it and start over

Not too fond of Christmas themed background. If you want to keep it for the upcoming season, only use it in the top part of the website and let it blend into while and leave the rest of it single colored with no pattern.

Agreed. :2 cents:

Hmm... I think theres another thread with the same question... I already commented on this exact site before and it still sucks right now - clearly this guy doesn't give a fuck what anyone thinks because the site is exactly the same 6 hours later.

Well you say it's fucking awful with no feedback on what you don't like about it. I'm frustrated with it myself.

What's the background? A cow with herpes?

saying it's awful though is a bit ridiculous.

I tried to do a XMas background but it doesn't look right I don't know. I don't know to me it looks good but too much like wrapping paper. lol.

The background sucks, there are to many styles of type. THAT prevents me from even looking at the girls which prevents me from getting aroused which prevents me from getting out my wallet and giving you money.

There is no warm fuzzy feel, start over.

haha.. whats with the hard to read, long paragraph? thats not a tour... its a homework assignment!

never put that much text as an image.

I'm starting over. I tried to do something abstract but I'm going back to blues and bevel effects, it converts better.

if you just changed the menu, paragraph and "play trailer"/"join now" links to be text links instead of images it would look alot cleaner and really pretty good. it's not good web design to make any of those images and i think it's what's throwing it off

If you want me to read that.. HAHA... yeah right!

Bigger text... bolder....

what he said :thumbsup

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font too small and hard to read ..
I dont like it

the background is too distracting

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Those episode boxes are cold. I'd expect to find that tour at IKEA. It's all style but no real substance.

I can't focus on the girls if you have that background, change the font (impossible to read that) and maybe use brighter colors

text is a bit hard to read for me

bigger thumbs, readable text and remove that shit from background

What would you think about to never make from text a image, google doesn't read images ;)

try a plainer back, that must help :)

if the body copy were text instead of a picture i could atleast copy and paste it into notepad so i could read it..but that might be too much work for a viewer

It reminds me of a slick magazine ad.
http://pissyourself.com/smilies/qqb003.gif

I think this tour will put your surfers to sleep. Its boring and unmemorable.
The girls in the top pic need to be airbrushed. They look chubby and have cellulite in that pic. Unless this is an amateur lesbians tour then keep it.
The rest I dont like. The pics are too small and you have to squint to see the action in them, which isnt that sizzling. The logo is boring and looks likeit was made in MS Word.

I wouldnt call it "high quality lesbian porn". some of the clips the lighting was a little dark. I would go with amateur lesbian porn myself.

And having the same large photo on each page of the tour is lazy and boring.

I woudnt have it on my sites...

I can see what you're trying to achieve, but as all other people said, there's a lot to change, starting by that almost unreadable img text (that should be "live" text). If you want, drop me a msg and I can't fix it keeping the style for cheaps

backround doesnt work.

it sounds crazy but I don't want live text it looks too pixelized.

Thanks you are the greatest ever. Congrats.