looks ok but the background is kinda depressing, or just not appropriate for an adult paysite

Originally Posted by Anna_O
lol.
Here's something else to laugh at the designer your laughiung at's design got a higher design scores then yours at The Best Porn. Also I'm asking for designers objective opinion to get an outside view the site still converts well but I'm trying to perfect it and open to opinions.

I agree to me it looks more like ablum art or something maybe I took it a little too far in that direction don't know. See my broblem isn't whether I think a good amount of people in their 20's will like it but I'm need people of all ages and ethnic groups to like it.

your background conflicts with the actual content way too much, make a shaded background or something much lighter... dont stretch your pics to fit, take your time to make them the right size... more 'real text' less graphic text...

harvey is a good designer and can hook it up swift like...

I didn't stretch the pics. Unfortuately I can't afford to purchase the photos for all the scenes I own so I kind of had to make do with what I had.

I hate live text you have a limited choice of fonts

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The background has to go:2 cents:

what about this one http://www.lezboland.com/leznewalternate.htm

Much improved but still needs work. I know you mentioned you don't like live text but really using CSS it's pretty workable. The copy is still hard to read and honestly you aren't using some exotic or brand font so why bother with a text graphic?

bad tour for SE optimization if you keep all text as image.

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whos thread is this?


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keep laughing I still got a higher design ranking then yours
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Well to sum that up and add two cents:

1) the font is too hard to read - most likely everyone will give up
2) the introduction text is all picture - will suck SE
3) the background is like from a personal depressed blog site or something - way too off the adult site and completely changes the first impression towards cold
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Ok now I refreshed that and it looks way better but:

1) the top menu is faded out too much
2) I would not push "contact" and "support" up to the top menu as it's unrelevant to the free surfer and rather add something as "bonus"
3) still lots of graphical text no SE option
4) "join now" link should be more transparent and dominate each block
5) I assume the textwork is not final yet because it uses so many webmaster slang words so it's almost like to persuade the webmasters to sign up


JOIN PAGE:

1) I would put the description text below the payment options
2) the best value options should stand out way more, also to make it like a poll (what do you choose?) would actually encourage more to CHOOSE and pay instead of esthetic but quite faded away links

That's my 2 cents well I only hope I will be smart enough to kick our brand new site to killer conversions..