Please review my site - GoFuckYourself.com

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 01:45 PM

Okay I've had my site redone and it is converting very well,on the little traffic that I have (average 1:200).
What I want to know is do you guys think it's too hard to navigate for the average "stupid" surfer to navigate?

Any other comments,constructive criticism is welcome.
neatspot.net

Undutchable · 11-08-2002, 01:47 PM

Looks very nice, kudos on a job well done ;)

Eric · 11-08-2002, 01:47 PM

Nice... I like that it is different then a lot of the other sites you see out there. And the pay for one get 11 always is a nice draw. Very good job Pink

multisexsite · 11-08-2002, 01:50 PM

I really liked the design, made me wanna join and see the rest

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 01:53 PM

Thanks guys

Me and my bf designed it. Do you see anything wrong with it? I mean is it easy to navigate?
I sometimes get surfers who can't find the "join" button.

McAttack · 11-08-2002, 02:02 PM

First off, Nice site.

As for navigation. I'm a lazy surfer, I admit it. I scan through sites and normally filter out a lot of crap. Flashing stuff never works with me. Bland text also turns me off. I find there is a bit too much text, which seems to clutter up a bit of the space, but I also see why the text is there. It is a good sales tool in this case. And the flashing join button. Maybe use a larger font on the JOIN? If you're having problems with people finding it, then make MINOR change to it. Maybe you can box it in or something.

p|mpdog · 11-08-2002, 02:03 PM

you need to link all your images to the join page..
but other than that, id do you fo sho

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 02:24 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by multisexsite
I really liked the design, made me wanna join and see the rest

Thats what I want,thank you

SleazyDream · 11-08-2002, 02:26 PM

God I hate popups

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 02:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by pink_in_the_middle

Thats what I want,thank you

Btw if anyone decides to join the members area it's under construction so you might want to wait a bit

And nobody flame me I've already had two sign-ups from gfy'ers in the past,so you never know

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 02:28 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by SleazyDream
God I hate popups

You only get them if you don't go to the join page.
Don't try and make it sound like it's a cj2 or something.
You get ONE pop up thats it.

Minte · 11-08-2002, 02:31 PM

You did a great job on the site..the main graphics really look good!

SleazyDream · 11-08-2002, 02:32 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by pink_in_the_middle

You only get them if you don't go to the join page.
Don't try and make it sound like it's a cj2 or something.
You get ONE pop up thats it.

I HATE ALL POPUPS.

that's the same as saying - if you don't pay me I'm gona fuck with you for not paying me.

frankfortuna · 11-08-2002, 02:33 PM

Personally I would make the "join now" feature a bit more visible by adjusting its size and perhaps adding a bit more contrast.

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 02:38 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by SleazyDream

I HATE ALL POPUPS.

that's the same as saying - if you don't pay me I'm gona fuck with you for not paying me.

No it's called if you don't pay me I'm going to make the most of the bandwidth you use and pop an exit in your face.

RATBOY · 11-08-2002, 02:41 PM

Check with an attorney on sample pic #3. Could be an issue for your local athorities. Thumbnail them and liknk them to your join.

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 02:43 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by RATBOY
Check with an attorney on sample pic #3. Could be an issue for your local athorities. Thumbnail them and liknk them to your join.

Sorry I must be missing something with that pic...what are you talking about????

Fletch XXX · 11-08-2002, 02:44 PM

Why do you have your "join" using a ccbill refer like an affiliate would? Just link the button to your join html.

http://refer.ccbill.com/cgi-bin/clic...pot.net/ccbill

You dont need a referral code in there

;)

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 02:46 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Fletch XXX
Why do you have your "join" using a ccbill refer like an affiliate would? Just link the button to your join html.

http://refer.ccbill.com/cgi-bin/clic...pot.net/ccbill

You dont need a referral code in there

;)

I need a referral link because it's the way my site is set up with those other 12 sites.

CowboyAtHeart · 11-08-2002, 02:49 PM

Site looked good from the page or two I saw.
Although the popup IMO is annoying. (Normally I have them turned off, but was just reviewing galleries)

RATBOY · 11-08-2002, 02:49 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by pink_in_the_middle

Sorry I must be missing something with that pic...what are you talking about????

The vibrator is penetrating you on the free portion of your site. Not likely you would get burned on it, but if any feds got it in thier heads you needed to go down, better safe than sorry, right?

gothweb · 11-08-2002, 02:52 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by RATBOY
Check with an attorney on sample pic #3. Could be an issue for your local athorities. Thumbnail them and liknk them to your join.

Which pic? I don't see anything questionable.

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 02:52 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by RATBOY

The vibrator is penetrating you on the free portion of your site. Not likely you would get burned on it, but if any feds got it in thier heads you needed to go down, better safe than sorry, right?

Maybe I'll slap a star over it

RATBOY · 11-08-2002, 02:53 PM

And just so you know, that is an awesome pic. You have that nasty girl-next-door-just-got-caught look on your face. Talented. I am trying to get Petite LiL Flower to give me the same effect.

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 02:55 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by RATBOY
And just so you know, that is an awesome pic. You have that nasty girl-next-door-just-got-caught look on your face. Talented. I am trying to get Petite LiL Flower to give me the same effect.

Well thank you

When will your site be up?

RATBOY · 11-08-2002, 02:57 PM

<img src="http://www.neatspot.net/blueroom/images/blueroom0028.JPG">

That pic Gothweb. It's a tough call, not exactly seeing the insertion. Most lawyers reccomend no hardcore on the tour pages.

RATBOY · 11-08-2002, 02:58 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by pink_in_the_middle

Well thank you
When will your site be up?

January 1st. (tentatively).

Bobo · 11-08-2002, 03:46 PM

Is there a tour on the site?

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 03:58 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Bobo
Is there a tour on the site?

No we're are trying something diffrent that seems to be working for us. But I'm just asking for suggestions as to changes that would lead to even better conversions.

Fletch XXX · 11-08-2002, 04:00 PM

Man since all those thumbs etc at the bottom link that refer code your ratios must be hell to compare.

RATBOY · 11-08-2002, 04:02 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Bobo
Is there a tour on the site?

nevermind

RATBOY · 11-08-2002, 04:05 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by pink_in_the_middle

No we're are trying something diffrent that seems to be working for us. But I'm just asking for suggestions as to changes that would lead to even better conversions.

ICQ me? 164717763

KRL · 11-08-2002, 04:54 PM

Hi Pink, It looks nice. You might want to contrast some of the naviagation buttons it bit more. Also why are you calling it the NeatSpot. Neat isn't too sexual sounding. Maybe the WetSpot or the GSpot for example.

pink_in_the_middle · 11-08-2002, 05:00 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by KRL
Hi Pink, It looks nice. You might want to contrast some of the naviagation buttons it bit more. Also why are you calling it the NeatSpot. Neat isn't too sexual sounding. Maybe the WetSpot or the GSpot for example.

We're working on the colours.
Actually I had a friend give me the doman name as a gift

I like to be a little diffrent from everything out there...if possible lol
rather then having wetspot or gspot,you know what I mean not very original.

frankfortuna · 11-08-2002, 05:04 PM

On second thought, in order to properly critique the site, we'll need to see some of the content.

flashfreak · 11-08-2002, 05:09 PM

it looks good ... in fact is one of the best amatuer paysite designs I've seen...
however I don't like that scrolling stuff... it's too eyecatching and it becomes annoying...

Plat · 11-08-2002, 05:28 PM

unique

Honeyslut · 11-08-2002, 05:51 PM

Looks sweet ! You are very pretty, Pink !

Hey guys,

<---------------- You like my new title ?

at Pink !

I like the glasses pic on the other thread !

Corona · 11-09-2002, 02:19 AM

Real nice looking site.

Keeping in mind I have never designed a paysite, why do you have all those links to other places on your Tour page?

(Top 100, pickablonde, ect...)

Seems like a lot of other places for the horny wanker to go other than your join page. Just my 2

If my wife would let me have the credit card I would sign-up

Master_Yoba · 11-09-2002, 06:39 AM

Ask Jeppe from adultreviews.net about professional review.

As for me it's mediocre design (fonts and flowers like on thousands sites) but the content deserve better..

Voodoo · 11-09-2002, 06:42 AM

Looks good pinky!

Congrats!

pink_in_the_middle · 11-09-2002, 03:00 PM

Better?
We made a few minor adjustments, let me know what you think

Libertine · 11-09-2002, 03:38 PM

To be completely honest, I don't really like the design. It's too crowded, and not really easy to navigate. It looks a bit cluttered in my opinion. You might want to consider splitting it up into several pages, each of which focuses on a smaller portion of your site. Also, the graphic under the "buy time" scrolling thing is linked, but the link does nothing.
Besides that, the "Join" button could indeed be a bit more obvious - even though it is rather big and flashy, somehow it is pretty easy to miss.

Just an idea: Divide the top part (Stephanie's neatspot), the middle part (Live web cam shows) and the bottom part (access to friends' sites) over three different pages. That would give more time to captivate your surfer and seduce him to your join page.

Bobo · 11-09-2002, 04:26 PM

I have no idea what's good or not. I don't think like a surfer

I don't think there is a porn site on the net worth $20/month.

I guess I've just been lucky using trial and error.

Aza · 11-09-2002, 08:28 PM

nice design, looks good!
maybe a little too cluttered and over fussy though
drop the pop ups

Chapter7 · 11-09-2002, 08:34 PM

Looks really good.
I like the scrolling payment options, and the big option to pay by paypal. It is a little wild but not messy

11-08-2002, 01:45 PM	#1
pink_in_the_middle Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: O Canada Posts: 4,503	Please review my site Okay I've had my site redone and it is converting very well,on the little traffic that I have (average 1:200). What I want to know is do you guys think it's too hard to navigate for the average "stupid" surfer to navigate? Any other comments,constructive criticism is welcome. neatspot.net

11-08-2002, 01:53 PM	#5
pink_in_the_middle Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: O Canada Posts: 4,503	Thanks guys Me and my bf designed it. Do you see anything wrong with it? I mean is it easy to navigate? I sometimes get surfers who can't find the "join" button. Last edited by pink_in_the_middle; 11-08-2002 at 01:54 PM..

11-08-2002, 02:02 PM	#6
McAttack Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Montreal Posts: 625	First off, Nice site. As for navigation. I'm a lazy surfer, I admit it. I scan through sites and normally filter out a lot of crap. Flashing stuff never works with me. Bland text also turns me off. I find there is a bit too much text, which seems to clutter up a bit of the space, but I also see why the text is there. It is a good sales tool in this case. And the flashing join button. Maybe use a larger font on the JOIN? If you're having problems with people finding it, then make MINOR change to it. Maybe you can box it in or something. __________________ You know Teen Kelly converts like crazy.

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11-08-2002, 01:47 PM	#2
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11-08-2002, 01:47 PM	#3
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11-08-2002, 01:50 PM	#4
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11-08-2002, 02:33 PM	#14
frankfortuna Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,504	Personally I would make the "join now" feature a bit more visible by adjusting its size and perhaps adding a bit more contrast.

11-08-2002, 02:41 PM	#16
RATBOY Confirmed User Join Date: May 2002 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 1,592	Check with an attorney on sample pic #3. Could be an issue for your local athorities. Thumbnail them and liknk them to your join.

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11-08-2002, 04:54 PM	#33
KRL Entrepreneur Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 31,429	Hi Pink, It looks nice. You might want to contrast some of the naviagation buttons it bit more. Also why are you calling it the NeatSpot. Neat isn't too sexual sounding. Maybe the WetSpot or the GSpot for example.

11-08-2002, 05:04 PM	#35
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Libertine sex dwarf Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 17,860	To be completely honest, I don't really like the design. It's too crowded, and not really easy to navigate. It looks a bit cluttered in my opinion. You might want to consider splitting it up into several pages, each of which focuses on a smaller portion of your site. Also, the graphic under the "buy time" scrolling thing is linked, but the link does nothing. Besides that, the "Join" button could indeed be a bit more obvious - even though it is rather big and flashy, somehow it is pretty easy to miss. Just an idea: Divide the top part (Stephanie's neatspot), the middle part (Live web cam shows) and the bottom part (access to friends' sites) over three different pages. That would give more time to captivate your surfer and seduce him to your join page. __________________ /(bb\|[^b]{2})/

11-09-2002, 04:26 PM	#44
Bobo Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 2,253	I have no idea what's good or not. I don't think like a surfer I don't think there is a porn site on the net worth $20/month. I guess I've just been lucky using trial and error.

11-09-2002, 08:28 PM	#45
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11-09-2002, 08:34 PM	#46
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