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DVTimes · 03-05-2008, 08:14 PM

the new re-vamped AltDoll.com

what do you think?

www.AltDoll.com

DVTimes · 03-06-2008, 01:03 AM

bump.........................................

Mr Pheer · 03-06-2008, 01:53 AM

I dont get it

VDB-Design · 03-06-2008, 02:38 AM

Header looks good, the box movie preview design could use some work.

john_63 · 03-06-2008, 03:17 AM

3 weeks ago you were looking for designers. if this is what you got you should ask for a refund.

do not try to make something yourself, please find a real designer. it will pay off.

commonsense · 03-06-2008, 03:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by allanuk

the new re-vamped AltDoll.com

what do you think?

www.AltDoll.com

Are you selling a membership site with 9 photo sets on it and no video? That's what it looks like. And with the sample pics chosen it looks like the photo sets are tiny as well. There's no mention of the photo sizes inside, videos(?), the amount of sets, different girls, etc.

Beef up the text, right now it's lame and doesn't even fill the frame.

"Nina - Wow. Hot 18 year old doll shows all.. "
"Kelly - Hot blond as you can tell"
"Emma - These were taken at her farm farm."

Replace these photos from the tour, they ain't doing anyone no favors...

DVTimes · 03-06-2008, 04:59 AM

updated.................

Steve Awesome · 03-06-2008, 05:27 AM

1. The 18 ENTER/LEAVE page has the links below the fold. That's annoying for the surfer.

2. The descriptions still suck. "Wow. Hot 18 year old doll shows all." Right.

3. The dark blue links are hard as shit to see /read against dark red and black. Try white instead.

4. No 2257 link on most pages. When it does appear it just says 2257 when it should say "18 U.S.C. 2257 Record-Keeping Requirements Compliance Statement" -- yes I realize you aren't in the U.S. but if you're going to make the effort might as well do it right.

5. $29.95 US for 1 site? Try a trial offer option or experiment with a lower price.

6. Your TITLE tag is the same for every page. You're losing a lot of SEO opportunities by not including pertinent alternative keywords.

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&s...&btn G=Search

7. You've got fat chicks mixed in there. Why bother showing them? It's like a programmer bragging on his resume that he knows FORTRAN.

Cutest chick winner (my opinion only):

DVTimes · 03-06-2008, 06:04 AM

some good tips.

i will be adding two more sites in the next month or so, just shooting the content. they will be part of this site as in, join this site and you access the others.

sexuallyhealed · 03-06-2008, 06:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by allanuk

the new re-vamped AltDoll.com

what do you think?

www.AltDoll.com

I think it needs a re-vamp by a professional designer

darkfairy7 · 03-06-2008, 06:16 AM

I don't see nothing wrong with a little Meat on the Bones but the 2257 on the bodom you really do need to put "18 U.S.C. 2257 Record-Keeping Requirements Compliance Statement"

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Steve Awesome Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Mid-West! Posts: 1,575	1. The 18 ENTER/LEAVE page has the links below the fold. That's annoying for the surfer. 2. The descriptions still suck. "Wow. Hot 18 year old doll shows all." Right. 3. The dark blue links are hard as shit to see /read against dark red and black. Try white instead. 4. No 2257 link on most pages. When it does appear it just says 2257 when it should say "18 U.S.C. 2257 Record-Keeping Requirements Compliance Statement" -- yes I realize you aren't in the U.S. but if you're going to make the effort might as well do it right. 5. $29.95 US for 1 site? Try a trial offer option or experiment with a lower price. 6. Your TITLE tag is the same for every page. You're losing a lot of SEO opportunities by not including pertinent alternative keywords. http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&s...&btn G=Search 7. You've got fat chicks mixed in there. Why bother showing them? It's like a programmer bragging on his resume that he knows FORTRAN. Cutest chick winner (my opinion only): __________________ *The AbbieCash Porn Network. Billing processing by CCBILL. Join our affiliate program today*. RealDollSex \| AbbieTeen \| GamerChicks \| ModelTexans \| HottieCams Nintendo 3DS Porn Blog \| Steve's Adult Industry Blog \| Abbie Bueller's Porn Blog

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Mr Pheer So Fucking Banned Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 22,083	I dont get it

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john_63 Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 517	3 weeks ago you were looking for designers. if this is what you got you should ask for a refund. do not try to make something yourself, please find a real designer. it will pay off.

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DVTimes xxx Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: UK Posts: 31,615	some good tips. i will be adding two more sites in the next month or so, just shooting the content. they will be part of this site as in, join this site and you access the others. __________________ My Sites

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darkfairy7 Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: USA Posts: 37	I don't see nothing wrong with a little Meat on the Bones but the 2257 on the bodom you really do need to put "18 U.S.C. 2257 Record-Keeping Requirements Compliance Statement"