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DVTimes 03-05-2008 08:14 PM

the new re-vamped AltDoll.com
 
the new re-vamped AltDoll.com

what do you think?

www.AltDoll.com

DVTimes 03-06-2008 01:03 AM

bump.........................................

Mr Pheer 03-06-2008 01:53 AM

I dont get it

VDB-Design 03-06-2008 02:38 AM

Header looks good, the box movie preview design could use some work.

john_63 03-06-2008 03:17 AM

3 weeks ago you were looking for designers. if this is what you got you should ask for a refund.

do not try to make something yourself, please find a real designer. it will pay off.

commonsense 03-06-2008 03:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by allanuk (Post 13877733)
the new re-vamped AltDoll.com

what do you think?

www.AltDoll.com

Are you selling a membership site with 9 photo sets on it and no video? That's what it looks like. And with the sample pics chosen it looks like the photo sets are tiny as well. There's no mention of the photo sizes inside, videos(?), the amount of sets, different girls, etc.


Beef up the text, right now it's lame and doesn't even fill the frame.

"Nina - Wow. Hot 18 year old doll shows all.. "
"Kelly - Hot blond as you can tell"
"Emma - These were taken at her farm farm."



Replace these photos from the tour, they ain't doing anyone no favors...

http://www.altdoll.com/picsets/e/1.jpg

http://www.altdoll.com/picsets/g/2.jpg

http://www.altdoll.com/picsets/a/2.jpg

http://www.altdoll.com/picsets/i/2.jpg

DVTimes 03-06-2008 04:59 AM

updated.................

Steve Awesome 03-06-2008 05:27 AM

1. The 18 ENTER/LEAVE page has the links below the fold. That's annoying for the surfer.

2. The descriptions still suck. "Wow. Hot 18 year old doll shows all." Right.

3. The dark blue links are hard as shit to see /read against dark red and black. Try white instead.

4. No 2257 link on most pages. When it does appear it just says 2257 when it should say "18 U.S.C. 2257 Record-Keeping Requirements Compliance Statement" -- yes I realize you aren't in the U.S. but if you're going to make the effort might as well do it right.

5. $29.95 US for 1 site? Try a trial offer option or experiment with a lower price.

6. Your TITLE tag is the same for every page. You're losing a lot of SEO opportunities by not including pertinent alternative keywords.

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&s...&btn G=Search

7. You've got fat chicks mixed in there. Why bother showing them? It's like a programmer bragging on his resume that he knows FORTRAN.

Cutest chick winner (my opinion only):
http://www.altdoll.com/big/IMG_0015.jpg

DVTimes 03-06-2008 06:04 AM

some good tips.

i will be adding two more sites in the next month or so, just shooting the content. they will be part of this site as in, join this site and you access the others.

sexuallyhealed 03-06-2008 06:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by allanuk (Post 13877733)
the new re-vamped AltDoll.com

what do you think?

www.AltDoll.com

I think it needs a re-vamp by a professional designer :winkwink:

darkfairy7 03-06-2008 06:16 AM

I don't see nothing wrong with a little Meat on the Bones but the 2257 on the bodom you really do need to put "18 U.S.C. 2257 Record-Keeping Requirements Compliance Statement"


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