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DebsDeep · 02-11-2008, 04:46 AM

the original here http://www.asian-deepthroat.com

the new one we just did is here http://http://www.asian-deepthroat.com/test

thanks
Deb

skrog · 02-11-2008, 04:52 AM

A bit better. But, it seems very outdated looking. Hit me up on ICQ. Maybe, I can do something for you.

qxm · 02-11-2008, 04:58 AM

............no comments...............

DebsDeep · 02-11-2008, 05:12 AM

outdated? I dont get it.

ro8in · 02-11-2008, 05:16 AM

Better hire a real designer?

that render->lens flare doesn't really hide that the rest looks sucks ass

JamesK · 02-11-2008, 05:16 AM

I could design better when I was 14 years old.

No offense.

DebsDeep · 02-11-2008, 05:18 AM

mmmmmmmmmm...k

DebsDeep · 02-11-2008, 05:21 AM

Funny thing is, the last designer I hired I post the work here and got the same response.......So I guess the big question is.....How in the heck do I get the perfect design?

Chef86 · 02-11-2008, 05:21 AM

Doesn't load in Ontario Canada

JamesK · 02-11-2008, 05:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by debsdeepthroat

mmmmmmmmmm...k

Just try out and see how it converts though. I've seen some of the crappiest looking designs convert very well while other great looking designs don't sell at all.

Good graphics don't mean shit

DebsDeep · 02-11-2008, 05:34 AM

i messed up the link when i posted
its http://www.asian-deepthroat.com/test

ro8in · 02-11-2008, 06:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by debsdeepthroat

i messed up the link when i posted
its http://www.asian-deepthroat.com/test

Your photo cutouts are done with a blurry Eraser this is not nice looking.. Most tour pages got razor sharp photo cutouts.. If you want to use blurry cutouts then do those in the background and make some sharp cutouts jump out.. This way the blurry cutouts don't become so apparant.. And are more of a background then the main subject.

(cutouts are almost half the work of a good tour page keep that in mind )

Try to use 2 or 3 colors and use only these colors in different shades..
In general its even better to use only web 2.0 colors.. (Google for them:P)

Choose a font type and stick with its size.. Dont stretch every text in a different way.. If you need it smaller or bigger use a bigger or smaller font size, but don't start scaling the text it makes it look very ugly and amateur...

Dont use glows in different color over texts.. It makes the texts look blurry and unreadable.. Anyway in general its not good to use glows. Try to keep your text sharp like a razor

Only use glow in text on for example on a logo and just to accent a small part a little.. Dont overdo glow never.. and if you have to use it try to use it in the same color as the object its glowing around.. If you use a glow different color then the object it will make it look very unnatural. But anyway for a beginner designer a good advice is to not use them at all as glow effects take a very fine eye to see where they fit and not fit...

Get rid of that standard lens flare effect it really shows you did not put any effort in this design..

Same goes for those ugly paintbrushed pixelated borders around your pictures they totally conflict with the rest of the design and really look like they have just been stick on there instead of their part of the design..

I hope these tips help you

And anyway like some said before ugly design doesn't nesceraly mean it wont sell.. Some sites work better because of their amateur look

theS2O · 02-11-2008, 07:20 AM

you need help? heh

Ace_luffy · 02-11-2008, 01:22 PM

hmmmm...

st0ned · 02-11-2008, 01:25 PM

Looks a bit better than the last one, but still looks like it belongs in the early 90's.

Michaelious · 02-11-2008, 01:25 PM

I like it mate!!

Good work!

bobby666 · 02-11-2008, 02:44 PM

the second link leads to a german game

Dennis Rodman · 02-11-2008, 02:47 PM

Looks like you couldn't handle the critique because the page is now 404

1off · 02-11-2008, 04:30 PM

I'll say this, both tours need the enter and exit links swapped. "enter" should always be on the right side.

As for the rest of the design..

HairToStay · 02-11-2008, 04:38 PM

I'd change the photo on the warning page as she looks like a tranny there.

The design is ok, nothing special, doesn't jump out at you. You need much bigger pictures of her showing off that talent.

tony286 · 02-11-2008, 05:12 PM

seems weak

Eriic · 02-11-2008, 06:10 PM

If yew happi me is Happeye

mikesouth · 02-11-2008, 06:28 PM

my thoughts are if you are trying to convince surfers the site is amateur you shouldnt make it look like a "corporate site"

that was my first thought...remember KISS methodology Keep It Simple Stupid

D Ghost · 02-11-2008, 07:59 PM

better, but still lame

Lamis · 02-13-2008, 07:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dennis Rodman

Looks like you couldn't handle the critique because the page is now 404

you have no idea of what a design is..

you have never opened photoshop in your life.. even considering you are using non licensed software and FBI is going to knock at your door.

NOBODY knows you.. Unknown bastard.

Tanker · 02-13-2008, 07:42 PM

Deb can you contact me!

pornask · 02-13-2008, 07:44 PM

It's pretty good. Always refreshing to see an honest site and not one of those overloaded bullshit designs

Fap · 02-13-2008, 08:20 PM

not loading for me but the original was very 90's

Tanker · 02-13-2008, 08:29 PM

who is the designer?

traffic_buy · 02-13-2008, 08:30 PM

sorry man, but there is no design at all

RTP · 02-13-2008, 08:33 PM

as said above very early 90s feel and look

02-11-2008, 04:46 AM	#1
DebsDeep Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 2,649	what do you think of this design? the original here http://www.asian-deepthroat.com the new one we just did is here http://http://www.asian-deepthroat.com/test thanks Deb __________________ http://www.gothamscreenprinting.com Cheapest T's Online. $5 tshirts printed, no minimums, no fees of anykind!!!!

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02-11-2008, 05:21 AM	#8
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02-11-2008, 02:47 PM	#18
Dennis Rodman So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 1,060	Looks like you couldn't handle the critique because the page is now 404

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02-11-2008, 04:38 PM	#20
HairToStay Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Southcoast, Mass. Posts: 1,521	I'd change the photo on the warning page as she looks like a tranny there. The design is ok, nothing special, doesn't jump out at you. You need much bigger pictures of her showing off that talent. __________________ Make bank by giving your surfers free pics every day and it costs you NOTHING! Use POTD Sponsors to find adult sponsors in more than 75 niches who offer a POTD feature!

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tony286 lurker Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: atlanta Posts: 57,021	seems weak

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mikesouth Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: My High Horse Posts: 6,334	my thoughts are if you are trying to convince surfers the site is amateur you shouldnt make it look like a "corporate site" that was my first thought...remember KISS methodology Keep It Simple Stupid __________________ Mike South It's No wonder I took up drugs and alcohol, it's the only way I could dumb myself down enough to cope with the morons in this biz.

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D Ghost null Industry Role: Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 9,820	better, but still lame

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02-13-2008, 07:44 PM	#27
pornask So Fucking Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: 253-233-241 Posts: 6,518	It's pretty good. Always refreshing to see an honest site and not one of those overloaded bullshit designs

02-13-2008, 08:20 PM	#28
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02-13-2008, 08:30 PM	#30
traffic_buy Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 95	sorry man, but there is no design at all __________________ ZzzZZZzzZZZzzz Last edited by traffic_buy; 02-13-2008 at 08:30 PM.. Reason: typos

02-13-2008, 08:33 PM	#31
RTP aka Jimmy James Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Newport Posts: 1,335	as said above very early 90s feel and look __________________ Jimmy James ATKingdom/AMK Empire Since 1996 - My Movies Home of ATKGirlfriends - Where we take pornstars on trips...and fuck them. Connect with me on LinkedIn