what do you think of this design?
 

the original here http://www.asian-deepthroat.com

the new one we just did is here http://http://www.asian-deepthroat.com/test

thanks
Deb

A bit better. But, it seems very outdated looking. Hit me up on ICQ. Maybe, I can do something for you. :thumbsup

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outdated? I dont get it.

Better hire a real designer?

that render->lens flare doesn't really hide that the rest looks sucks ass

I could design better when I was 14 years old.

No offense.

mmmmmmmmmm...k

Funny thing is, the last designer I hired I post the work here and got the same response.......So I guess the big question is.....How in the heck do I get the perfect design?

Doesn't load in Ontario Canada

Just try out and see how it converts though. I've seen some of the crappiest looking designs convert very well while other great looking designs don't sell at all.

Good graphics don't mean shit :)

i messed up the link when i posted
its http://www.asian-deepthroat.com/test

Your photo cutouts are done with a blurry Eraser this is not nice looking.. Most tour pages got razor sharp photo cutouts.. If you want to use blurry cutouts then do those in the background and make some sharp cutouts jump out.. This way the blurry cutouts don't become so apparant.. And are more of a background then the main subject.

(cutouts are almost half the work of a good tour page keep that in mind )

Try to use 2 or 3 colors and use only these colors in different shades..
In general its even better to use only web 2.0 colors.. (Google for them:P)

Choose a font type and stick with its size.. Dont stretch every text in a different way.. If you need it smaller or bigger use a bigger or smaller font size, but don't start scaling the text it makes it look very ugly and amateur...

Dont use glows in different color over texts.. It makes the texts look blurry and unreadable.. Anyway in general its not good to use glows. Try to keep your text sharp like a razor :) Only use glow in text on for example on a logo and just to accent a small part a little.. Dont overdo glow never.. and if you have to use it try to use it in the same color as the object its glowing around.. If you use a glow different color then the object it will make it look very unnatural. But anyway for a beginner designer a good advice is to not use them at all as glow effects take a very fine eye to see where they fit and not fit...

Get rid of that standard lens flare effect it really shows you did not put any effort in this design..

Same goes for those ugly paintbrushed pixelated borders around your pictures they totally conflict with the rest of the design and really look like they have just been stick on there instead of their part of the design..

I hope these tips help you :)

And anyway like some said before ugly design doesn't nesceraly mean it wont sell.. Some sites work better because of their amateur look :)

you need help? heh :)

hmmmm... :)

Looks a bit better than the last one, but still looks like it belongs in the early 90's.

I like it mate!!

Good work!:thumbsup

the second link leads to a german game

Looks like you couldn't handle the critique because the page is now 404 :1orglaugh

I'll say this, both tours need the enter and exit links swapped. "enter" should always be on the right side.

As for the rest of the design.. :censored

I'd change the photo on the warning page as she looks like a tranny there.

The design is ok, nothing special, doesn't jump out at you. You need much bigger pictures of her showing off that talent.

seems weak

If yew happi me is Happeye

my thoughts are if you are trying to convince surfers the site is amateur you shouldnt make it look like a "corporate site"

that was my first thought...remember KISS methodology Keep It Simple Stupid

better, but still lame

you have no idea of what a design is..

you have never opened photoshop in your life.. even considering you are using non licensed software and FBI is going to knock at your door.

NOBODY knows you.. Unknown bastard.

Deb can you contact me!

It's pretty good. Always refreshing to see an honest site and not one of those overloaded bullshit designs

not loading for me but the original was very 90's

who is the designer?

sorry man, but there is no design at all

as said above very early 90s feel and look