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MarkTiarra · 01-30-2008, 04:51 PM

http://chloedove.com/chloeslut/chloetrailer-high.wmv

Just want some opinions please...

emjay · 01-30-2008, 05:02 PM

Hi Mark

Nice, I felt it had the slightly un-polished Gonzo fly-on-the-wall feel to it that the Brits seem to like so much

Less Hollywood, more Hull lol

MarkTiarra · 01-30-2008, 07:56 PM

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Originally Posted by emjay

Hi Mark

Nice, I felt it had the slightly un-polished Gonzo fly-on-the-wall feel to it that the Brits seem to like so much

Less Hollywood, more Hull lol

Cool. =] I think she does a great job with the attitude and such.

Spunky · 01-30-2008, 08:06 PM

Thirsty lil whore isn't she

RedShoe · 01-30-2008, 08:33 PM

nice Mark.. if I had done it, I would have tightened up the middle bit, maybe added some music. I really dig the intro and the end sequence. I think there needs to be more of that in trailers these days.

Nice cuts though.

MarkTiarra · 01-30-2008, 08:48 PM

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Originally Posted by RedShoe

nice Mark.. if I had done it, I would have tightened up the middle bit, maybe added some music. I really dig the intro and the end sequence. I think there needs to be more of that in trailers these days.

Nice cuts though.

Thanks man. You are THE man when it comes to video editing so any advice from you I'll gladly take!

Deej · 01-30-2008, 09:04 PM

hey redshoe, hit me up when you have a minute, i layed out my first decent trailer...

I want some words of wisdom...

NosMo · 01-30-2008, 09:52 PM

Ok I will start with it is very nice trailer.....But I think with a few little tweaks it could be a GREAT trailer.
1) During Chloe's open there are a few sound issues. Either work over the audio or reshoot to remove the background hum and echo.
2) Know your target. Surfers suffer from ADD bad. I would tighten up the scenes and add 1 more but still keep it at 1 minute.
3) NEVER put music on a trailer
4) Never put music on a trailer
5) Mix up your dissolve, I see a lot of cross dissolves, throw some smash zooms and dips to white in. It helps pick up the pace.

This is just my opinion. Others may feel otherwise, and opinions are like assholes everyone has one. I see something great in there.
Also Chloe is a real looker. You are a lucky man.

NosMo

RedShoe · 01-30-2008, 10:09 PM

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Originally Posted by NosMo

Ok I will start with it is very nice trailer.....But I think with a few little tweaks it could be a GREAT trailer.
1) During Chloe's open there are a few sound issues. Either work over the audio or reshoot to remove the background hum and echo.
2) Know your target. Surfers suffer from ADD bad. I would tighten up the scenes and add 1 more but still keep it at 1 minute.
3) NEVER put music on a trailer
4) Never put music on a trailer
5) Mix up your dissolve, I see a lot of cross dissolves, throw some smash zooms and dips to white in. It helps pick up the pace.

This is just my opinion. Others may feel otherwise, and opinions are like assholes everyone has one. I see something great in there.
Also Chloe is a real looker. You are a lucky man.

NosMo

Brother, you almost make we start a poll about the music issue.

NosMo · 01-30-2008, 10:22 PM

Hey redshoe, Really like your work. Nice tight, and clean.
On Music on a trailer...I have found that unless the client request music.....Not going to happen. Surfers like to hear the sounds of porn. It grabs them by the balls...but like I said this is my opinion. and only my opinion....Other people will feel otherwise. and that is what makes the world such a great place :P

NosMo

Deej · 01-30-2008, 10:25 PM

i beg to differ on music, its not a needed thing, but i think a good beat helps some scenes.... like brooke skyes trailer... or some collaging scene cuts... i see your point on having maybe a chopped single scene or something... but i think it adds a lot to some trailers....

its all about the type of trailer...

pornask · 01-30-2008, 10:32 PM

At her opening speech, she should look into the camera all the time. She takes her eyes away for a second, as if taking a look at her kids making sure they are not about to break something.

PS - don't like her pussy at all

NosMo · 01-30-2008, 10:41 PM

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Originally Posted by pornask

At her opening speech, she should look into the camera all the time. She takes her eyes away for a second, as if taking a look at her kids making sure they are not about to break something.

PS - don't like her pussy at all

Good catch on her eyes, but there is only so much you can do with talent.....

NosMo

RedShoe · 01-30-2008, 10:51 PM

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Originally Posted by NosMo

Hey redshoe, Really like your work. Nice tight, and clean.
On Music on a trailer...I have found that unless the client request music.....Not going to happen. Surfers like to hear the sounds of porn. It grabs them by the balls...but like I said this is my opinion. and only my opinion....Other people will feel otherwise. and that is what makes the world such a great place :P

NosMo

Well, then we seem to agree on that point. I think music is good, AND you should be able to hear fuck sounds. Check my site RedShoe.net and watch the "Just Fuckin' 2" Trailer. It has music and good strong fuck noises.

tony286 · 01-30-2008, 11:00 PM

I like to cut trailers with a beat in my head and do the cuts to it. To me it flows better that way.

MarkTiarra · 01-31-2008, 02:23 AM

Thanks for all the comments guys. I'm gonna share this with Dave and see if he wants to play around with it some. She sure knows how to do naughty though huh?

KILL_FRENZY · 01-31-2008, 03:40 AM

nice trailer

SkeetSkeet · 01-31-2008, 07:44 AM

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NosMo · 01-31-2008, 10:09 AM

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Originally Posted by MarkTiarra

Thanks for all the comments guys. I'm gonna share this with Dave and see if he wants to play around with it some. She sure knows how to do naughty though huh?

Looking forward to seeing it.

NosMo

vidvicious · 01-31-2008, 10:14 AM

Ok I won't commetn on the actual video footage ...

for the edit .. a trailer of this tyoe needs to be faster .. tighter edits, you can even speed up the video by 30% to give it a more hardcore feel .. Personally I found the traielr to be quite soft. I didn't look at the whole thing because I lost interest in the first 20 seconds. Lastly MUSIC .. Umm YES PUT MUSIC IN YOUR TRAILER .. not Anything from the POP CHARTS .. but some original tunes that can give the momentum needed for the edits and the trailer.

Andy Servers4Less · 01-31-2008, 10:15 AM

Trailer looks good. I think music would help. Keep the moans etc boosted, but just throw a beat behind it. I think that would keep it flowing smoothly. Just my opinion

01-30-2008, 04:51 PM	#1
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01-30-2008, 05:02 PM	#2
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01-30-2008, 09:04 PM	#7
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01-30-2008, 09:52 PM	#8
NosMo Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Sin city Posts: 1,025	Ok I will start with it is very nice trailer.....But I think with a few little tweaks it could be a GREAT trailer. 1) During Chloe's open there are a few sound issues. Either work over the audio or reshoot to remove the background hum and echo. 2) Know your target. Surfers suffer from ADD bad. I would tighten up the scenes and add 1 more but still keep it at 1 minute. 3) NEVER put music on a trailer 4) Never put music on a trailer 5) Mix up your dissolve, I see a lot of cross dissolves, throw some smash zooms and dips to white in. It helps pick up the pace. This is just my opinion. Others may feel otherwise, and opinions are like assholes everyone has one. I see something great in there. Also Chloe is a real looker. You are a lucky man. NosMo __________________ All BBW * Sign up today and cash those fat checks! * All the time C H U B B Y C H E C K S BBW Porn Pass * Big & Brutal * Princess Lissa * Big Blow Job Chicks * Elizabeth Rollings * BBW Zine * Plumper TV

01-30-2008, 10:22 PM	#10
NosMo Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Sin city Posts: 1,025	Hey redshoe, Really like your work. Nice tight, and clean. On Music on a trailer...I have found that unless the client request music.....Not going to happen. Surfers like to hear the sounds of porn. It grabs them by the balls...but like I said this is my opinion. and only my opinion....Other people will feel otherwise. and that is what makes the world such a great place :P NosMo __________________ All BBW * Sign up today and cash those fat checks! * All the time C H U B B Y C H E C K S BBW Porn Pass * Big & Brutal * Princess Lissa * Big Blow Job Chicks * Elizabeth Rollings * BBW Zine * Plumper TV

01-30-2008, 10:25 PM	#11
Deej I make pixels work Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I live here... Posts: 24,386	i beg to differ on music, its not a needed thing, but i think a good beat helps some scenes.... like brooke skyes trailer... or some collaging scene cuts... i see your point on having maybe a chopped single scene or something... but i think it adds a lot to some trailers.... its all about the type of trailer... __________________ Deej's Designs n' What Not Hit me up for Design, CSS & Photo Retouching Icq#30096880

01-30-2008, 10:32 PM	#12
pornask So Fucking Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: 253-233-241 Posts: 6,518	At her opening speech, she should look into the camera all the time. She takes her eyes away for a second, as if taking a look at her kids making sure they are not about to break something. PS - don't like her pussy at all

01-30-2008, 11:00 PM	#15
tony286 lurker Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: atlanta Posts: 57,021	I like to cut trailers with a beat in my head and do the cuts to it. To me it flows better that way.

01-31-2008, 02:23 AM	#16
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01-31-2008, 10:14 AM	#20
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01-31-2008, 10:15 AM	#21
Andy Servers4Less Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 922	Trailer looks good. I think music would help. Keep the moans etc boosted, but just throw a beat behind it. I think that would keep it flowing smoothly. Just my opinion __________________ Andy Servers4Less www.ServersForLess.com ICQ: 412-203-056 DUAL QUAD CORES W/100 Mbps UNMETERED- $799/ month!!