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harvey · 09-12-2002, 04:32 PM

About to put this online, just a little feedback before doing it
http://www.fdsign.com/splash-final.html

fnet · 09-12-2002, 04:49 PM

Eye catching page. Fire good.

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logo part doesn't look right to me.

harvey · 09-12-2002, 06:44 PM

thanx for the feedback! Anyone else please?

reddawg · 09-12-2002, 06:53 PM

To me it appears rushed, spend more time on your design.

Logo flows rough to smooth and back again. Not even, hard to look at, I don't like white pixels in upper coner, to distractive and out of place, give it a solid smoother look and you will be there, just my two cents, I ain't no designer

koko · 09-12-2002, 08:20 PM

Love it!

The second page is better than splash, that 3D scape and flash is something serious. However, I think it's too over the edge for adult biz. And for prices, you'd ask more, you look like a pro and then you charge that little? Sounds fishy, maybe you'd take off the price list. But I won't hire you, so don't pay me attention

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harvey · 09-12-2002, 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by koko
And for prices, you'd ask more, you look like a pro and then you charge that little? Sounds fishy, maybe you'd take off the price list. But I won't hire you, so don't pay me attention

Fishy? Why, if it's true? I'm looking to make a bigger portfolio, that's why I'm giving it so unexpensive, but only on September, this won't last forever. So if you need to hire a designer at a very unexpensive rate, here's your chance, you can also have your own pay site! ;) After all, Lawrence Connor has his own domain!

harvey · 09-13-2002, 12:30 AM

and Lawrence is the name for "that touch" of style!

09-12-2002, 04:32 PM	#1
harvey Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: 127.0.0.1 Posts: 9,266	How is it? About to put this online, just a little feedback before doing it http://www.fdsign.com/splash-final.html __________________ This post is endorsed by CIA, KGB, MI6, the Mafia, Illuminati, Kim Jong Il, Worldwide Ninjas Association, Klingon Empire and lolcats. Don't mess around with it, just accept it and embrace the truth

09-12-2002, 04:49 PM	#2
fnet Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,721	Eye catching page. Fire good. The d F D S i g n o com t logo part doesn't look right to me. __________________ the sound of one hand googlewhacking

09-12-2002, 06:44 PM	#3
harvey Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: 127.0.0.1 Posts: 9,266	thanx for the feedback! Anyone else please? Last edited by harvey; 09-12-2002 at 06:46 PM..

09-12-2002, 06:53 PM	#4
reddawg Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Paradise Posts: 1,837	To me it appears rushed, spend more time on your design. Logo flows rough to smooth and back again. Not even, hard to look at, I don't like white pixels in upper coner, to distractive and out of place, give it a solid smoother look and you will be there, just my two cents, I ain't no designer __________________ ICQ 146104506 <p> <a href="http://sexsentry.com"</a><img src="http://sexsentry.com/pics/sentry2.gif" alt="All new Sentry. More options and more exposure and more ways to make even more money by using Sentry Elite and try our new create your own custom entrance script and so many more features, many are still in development, but awesome changes are going on at Sex Sentry!"> </p>

09-13-2002, 12:30 AM	#7
harvey Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: 127.0.0.1 Posts: 9,266	and Lawrence is the name for "that touch" of style! __________________ This post is endorsed by CIA, KGB, MI6, the Mafia, Illuminati, Kim Jong Il, Worldwide Ninjas Association, Klingon Empire and lolcats. Don't mess around with it, just accept it and embrace the truth

09-12-2002, 08:20 PM	#5
koko Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 112	Love it! The second page is better than splash, that 3D scape and flash is something serious. However, I think it's too over the edge for adult biz. And for prices, you'd ask more, you look like a pro and then you charge that little? Sounds fishy, maybe you'd take off the price list. But I won't hire you, so don't pay me attention ----------------------- Bass player wanted!