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bibabi · 08-04-2002, 01:56 PM

Hey eveyone-

This is an important advertisment my company is doing and I am not sure on it, can you please give my some feed back on the design.

http://www.xxxlance.com/test/jenna/index1.html

Thank you.

Fletch XXX · 08-04-2002, 01:59 PM

yummy.

Beastiepoo · 08-04-2002, 02:01 PM

Not too shabby. Cute and almost cartoony in a good way.

bibabi · 08-04-2002, 02:03 PM

thanks, I was worried about it

jimmy3way · 08-04-2002, 02:04 PM

Is today Jenna Spam Day? Hmmmn where'd I put my porn holiday calendar...I wanna make sure I tune in on Stephanie Swift Spam Day.

Fletch XXX · 08-04-2002, 02:05 PM

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Originally posted by bibabi
thanks, I was worried about it

Were you really? So far the critiques are "yummy" and "cute and cartoony" now you're resting easy? hehehe

Gimmy · 08-04-2002, 02:06 PM

Nice design, looks good

Bobo · 08-04-2002, 02:18 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by jimmy3way
Is today Jenna Spam Day? Hmmmn where'd I put my porn holiday calendar...I wanna make sure I tune in on Stephanie Swift Spam Day.

Hehehehe

bibabi · 08-04-2002, 02:37 PM

Everyday should be Jenna Day =) She is Yummy he he he he

Just a design post, hes nothing to do with her, just feedback on the design is all I am looking for, or a way to improve it is all. Having designers critique your work is a good thing, it makes you a better designer.

Thanks for the feedback it is appreciated.

gothweb · 08-04-2002, 02:45 PM

I love the design. Since nobody seems to have any criticism, I will chime in... The thing I see wrong with it is that the actual message of the design gets lost in the glitz. The only thing that catches the eye is Jenna, and the name logo. The message "WIN A DATE" is so flat, and clearly in the background, that it doesn't really get the message apart.

bibabi · 08-04-2002, 03:01 PM

thanks for feedback, I see what your saying. Appreciate it greatly

EscortBiz · 08-04-2002, 03:11 PM

I think dell would sell more PC's if they would give you a chance to win a date instead of the stupid 50K giveaway

bibabi · 08-04-2002, 05:15 PM

LMAO- I do to. HA HA HA HA

Beastiepoo · 08-04-2002, 05:18 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by gothweb
I love the design. Since nobody seems to have any criticism, I will chime in... The thing I see wrong with it is that the actual message of the design gets lost in the glitz. The only thing that catches the eye is Jenna, and the name logo. The message "WIN A DATE" is so flat, and clearly in the background, that it doesn't really get the message apart.

Wow, he's right. I didn't even see the WIN A DATE thing until he mentioned it.

gothweb · 08-04-2002, 05:21 PM

Of *course* the "WIN A DATE" is visible... but is such classical ad imagery, that people filter it right out. Mentally, you aren't sending the fact that they can win a date right to the midbrain. ;) The main problem is that it is flat, and the picture and logo jump right out-- they force it into the background by creating a feeling of space.

bibabi · 08-04-2002, 06:16 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by gothweb
Of *course* the "WIN A DATE" is visible... but is such classical ad imagery, that people filter it right out. Mentally, you aren't sending the fact that they can win a date right to the midbrain. ;) The main problem is that it is flat, and the picture and logo jump right out-- they force it into the background by creating a feeling of space.

http://www.xxxlance.com/test/jenna/index1.html

Now look at it some changes were made to it, is that better you think?

08-04-2002, 01:56 PM	#1
bibabi Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 181	Feedback Please Hey eveyone- This is an important advertisment my company is doing and I am not sure on it, can you please give my some feed back on the design. http://www.xxxlance.com/test/jenna/index1.html Thank you. __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

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08-04-2002, 02:03 PM	#4
bibabi Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 181	thanks, I was worried about it __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

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08-04-2002, 02:37 PM	#9
bibabi Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 181	Everyday should be Jenna Day =) She is Yummy he he he he Just a design post, hes nothing to do with her, just feedback on the design is all I am looking for, or a way to improve it is all. Having designers critique your work is a good thing, it makes you a better designer. Thanks for the feedback it is appreciated. __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

08-04-2002, 02:45 PM	#10
gothweb Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Back in the USSA Posts: 8,849	I love the design. Since nobody seems to have any criticism, I will chime in... The thing I see wrong with it is that the actual message of the design gets lost in the glitz. The only thing that catches the eye is Jenna, and the name logo. The message "WIN A DATE" is so flat, and clearly in the background, that it doesn't really get the message apart. __________________ Photos by Ian X.: Distinctive photos of goth babes. Blood Money:Your traffic, my sites, our money. MojoHost: Still the best.

08-04-2002, 03:01 PM	#11
bibabi Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 181	thanks for feedback, I see what your saying. Appreciate it greatly __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

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08-04-2002, 05:15 PM	#13
bibabi Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 181	LMAO- I do to. HA HA HA HA __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

08-04-2002, 05:21 PM	#15
gothweb Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Back in the USSA Posts: 8,849	Of course the "WIN A DATE" is visible... but is such classical ad imagery, that people filter it right out. Mentally, you aren't sending the fact that they can win a date right to the midbrain. ;) The main problem is that it is flat, and the picture and logo jump right out-- they force it into the background by creating a feeling of space. __________________ Photos by Ian X.: Distinctive photos of goth babes. Blood Money:Your traffic, my sites, our money. MojoHost: Still the best.