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bibabi

08-04-2002 01:56 PM

Feedback Please

Hey eveyone-

This is an important advertisment my company is doing and I am not sure on it, can you please give my some feed back on the design.

http://www.xxxlance.com/test/jenna/index1.html

Thank you.

Fletch XXX

08-04-2002 01:59 PM

yummy.

Beastiepoo

08-04-2002 02:01 PM

Not too shabby. Cute and almost cartoony in a good way.

bibabi

08-04-2002 02:03 PM

thanks, I was worried about it

jimmy3way

08-04-2002 02:04 PM

Is today Jenna Spam Day? Hmmmn where'd I put my porn holiday calendar...I wanna make sure I tune in on Stephanie Swift Spam Day.

Fletch XXX

08-04-2002 02:05 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by bibabi
thanks, I was worried about it

Were you really? So far the critiques are "yummy" and "cute and cartoony" now you're resting easy? hehehe

:glugglug

Gimmy

08-04-2002 02:06 PM

Nice design, looks good :thumbsup

Bobo	08-04-2002 02:18 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by jimmy3way
Is today Jenna Spam Day? Hmmmn where'd I put my porn holiday calendar...I wanna make sure I tune in on Stephanie Swift Spam Day.

Hehehehe

bibabi

08-04-2002 02:37 PM

Everyday should be Jenna Day =) She is Yummy he he he he

Just a design post, hes nothing to do with her, just feedback on the design is all I am looking for, or a way to improve it is all. Having designers critique your work is a good thing, it makes you a better designer.

Thanks for the feedback it is appreciated.

gothweb

08-04-2002 02:45 PM

I love the design. Since nobody seems to have any criticism, I will chime in... The thing I see wrong with it is that the actual message of the design gets lost in the glitz. The only thing that catches the eye is Jenna, and the name logo. The message "WIN A DATE" is so flat, and clearly in the background, that it doesn't really get the message apart.

bibabi

08-04-2002 03:01 PM

thanks for feedback, I see what your saying. Appreciate it greatly

EscortBiz

08-04-2002 03:11 PM

I think dell would sell more PC's if they would give you a chance to win a date instead of the stupid 50K giveaway

bibabi

08-04-2002 05:15 PM

LMAO- I do to. HA HA HA HA

Beastiepoo

08-04-2002 05:18 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by gothweb
I love the design. Since nobody seems to have any criticism, I will chime in... The thing I see wrong with it is that the actual message of the design gets lost in the glitz. The only thing that catches the eye is Jenna, and the name logo. The message "WIN A DATE" is so flat, and clearly in the background, that it doesn't really get the message apart.

Wow, he's right. I didn't even see the WIN A DATE thing until he mentioned it.:helpme

gothweb

08-04-2002 05:21 PM

Of *course* the "WIN A DATE" is visible... but is such classical ad imagery, that people filter it right out. Mentally, you aren't sending the fact that they can win a date right to the midbrain. ;) The main problem is that it is flat, and the picture and logo jump right out-- they force it into the background by creating a feeling of space.

bibabi

08-04-2002 06:16 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by gothweb
Of *course* the "WIN A DATE" is visible... but is such classical ad imagery, that people filter it right out. Mentally, you aren't sending the fact that they can win a date right to the midbrain. ;) The main problem is that it is flat, and the picture and logo jump right out-- they force it into the background by creating a feeling of space.

http://www.xxxlance.com/test/jenna/index1.html

Now look at it some changes were made to it, is that better you think?

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