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FierceHost · 08-01-2002, 12:34 PM

http://www.fiercehost.com/lsu/1.html

JFPdude · 08-01-2002, 12:38 PM

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Tauney is a LSU cheerleader, and has been chearing since her freshman year. She now cheers for varsity, and loves doing it. Her hobbies on the weekend include, partying, hanging out with her fellow friends, and chatting online.

Hmmm so she's been cheerleading for 14 years or so ?

She looks very old for a cheerleader and the thumbs are blurry.

Other than that looks good.

FierceHost · 08-01-2002, 12:42 PM

i should clerify that, meant since freshman in college

Dopy · 08-01-2002, 12:48 PM

Its a good gallery dont change it

Snake Doctor · 08-01-2002, 01:11 PM

From your gallery.

You can see more of her at the LSU website. Where their are pictures of her and her friends in the membership area. Tauney and her friends try to make money off their experiences, so of course it's not completly free but almost! Three days for only 6.95 , their are over 40,000 pictures of me and my classmates, having fun and showing our sexy cheerleading bodies off.

In the first 2 sentences you're selling the site in the third person. IE "hey I'm a guy just like you and this is where I go to jerk off"
In the 3rd sentence you're talking in the first person "Hi I'm Tauney see more of me here"

Pick one theme for the page and stick with it. Either have the whole page as the model talking to the surfer or the whole page as you talking to the surfer.

I'd put LightSpeedUniversity in parenthesis after LSU just in case the folks from Louisiana State stumble across your page.

I'd probably use different sales text altogether, but that's just me. Overall its a decent layout, it should get you a few signups

FierceHost · 08-01-2002, 01:19 PM

thanx, doing some editing.

G Sharp · 08-01-2002, 01:21 PM

Use a better looking model.

The bio box at the top "cuts off" your sales pitch, you may want to fold this info to the rest of the layout.

Fine tune your message--what is it about cheerleaders that make them sexy? Why buy it from LSU? What other features are at LSU?

Sell it, baby, sell it!

hahmike · 08-01-2002, 01:24 PM

are there any guys in there thread?

it is pretty hard to understand unless you have a dick - but shorten that text shit up. sell by all means, there is too much text, it's too small... i'm not in the mood to read an essay when i'm jerkin' but a few big juicy links may grab my attention. i'm not going to click unless you give me a reason to... "More Information Here" means, to me, more essay... i just want to look at porn, bro.

secondly, that chick is too old. guys that click on a link from a site that says "teen gallery" want to see real young chicks, expect see 18 to 19 year olds at the most, not 30-somethings. most guys want to look at young chicks. it reflects badly on your sponsor... anyone who clicks is probably wanting to see more of those 30 somethings, instead they're going to end up gawking at tawnee stone, who looks like 16.

those box banners are pretty pointless. the text is just too small to read. as most places won't list you with a big ass banner, just get rid of them.

the thumbnails are also shitty quality... and 8k per thumb? ahahaha

clean up, good luck...

RW316 · 08-01-2002, 01:25 PM

nice set of pictures

Martin · 08-01-2002, 01:29 PM

She looks to old to be a cheerleader..

dirtyone · 08-01-2002, 03:43 PM

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Originally posted by Martin
She looks to old to be a cheerleader..

It's all about the fantasy man.

08-01-2002, 12:34 PM	#1
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08-01-2002, 12:42 PM	#3
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08-01-2002, 01:11 PM	#5
Snake Doctor I'm Lenny2 Bitch Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: On top of my soapbox Posts: 13,449	From your gallery. You can see more of her at the LSU website. Where their are pictures of her and her friends in the membership area. Tauney and her friends try to make money off their experiences, so of course it's not completly free but almost! Three days for only 6.95 , their are over 40,000 pictures of me and my classmates, having fun and showing our sexy cheerleading bodies off. In the first 2 sentences you're selling the site in the third person. IE "hey I'm a guy just like you and this is where I go to jerk off" In the 3rd sentence you're talking in the first person "Hi I'm Tauney see more of me here" Pick one theme for the page and stick with it. Either have the whole page as the model talking to the surfer or the whole page as you talking to the surfer. I'd put LightSpeedUniversity in parenthesis after LSU just in case the folks from Louisiana State stumble across your page. I'd probably use different sales text altogether, but that's just me. Overall its a decent layout, it should get you a few signups __________________ sig too big

08-01-2002, 01:19 PM	#6
FierceHost Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Indiana Posts: 424	thanx, doing some editing. __________________ 250$ 1000GB / Mo - 2000mb space - 10 domains - .26 per gig overage <font color="#00FF00">ICQ 132871574</font>

08-01-2002, 01:24 PM	#8
hahmike So Fucking Banned Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 2,488	are there any guys in there thread? it is pretty hard to understand unless you have a dick - but shorten that text shit up. sell by all means, there is too much text, it's too small... i'm not in the mood to read an essay when i'm jerkin' but a few big juicy links may grab my attention. i'm not going to click unless you give me a reason to... "More Information Here" means, to me, more essay... i just want to look at porn, bro. secondly, that chick is too old. guys that click on a link from a site that says "teen gallery" want to see real young chicks, expect see 18 to 19 year olds at the most, not 30-somethings. most guys want to look at young chicks. it reflects badly on your sponsor... anyone who clicks is probably wanting to see more of those 30 somethings, instead they're going to end up gawking at tawnee stone, who looks like 16. those box banners are pretty pointless. the text is just too small to read. as most places won't list you with a big ass banner, just get rid of them. the thumbnails are also shitty quality... and 8k per thumb? ahahaha clean up, good luck... Last edited by hahmike; 08-01-2002 at 01:25 PM..

08-01-2002, 12:48 PM	#4
Dopy Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Puerto Del Carmen, Lanzarote, Canary Islands Posts: 1,572	Its a good gallery dont change it

08-01-2002, 01:21 PM	#7
G Sharp So Fucking Banned Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 1,343	Use a better looking model. The bio box at the top "cuts off" your sales pitch, you may want to fold this info to the rest of the layout. Fine tune your message--what is it about cheerleaders that make them sexy? Why buy it from LSU? What other features are at LSU? Sell it, baby, sell it!

08-01-2002, 01:25 PM	#9
RW316 Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 1,103	nice set of pictures

08-01-2002, 01:29 PM	#10
Martin "Assassins" Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: At home Posts: 17,277	She looks to old to be a cheerleader..