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MrPinks · 09-20-2006, 04:13 PM

I uploaded my latest design a few days ago. Just looking to get some opinions on it and feedback. Take a moment a check it out, http://www.mrpinks.com/entrance.html

5pm · 09-20-2006, 04:26 PM

it looks great ! NOW LEAVE IT ALONE!

Just teasin MrPink .. but you've had it done a few times .. this ones a winner ;)

MrPinks · 09-20-2006, 04:32 PM

Sales have been slow so I was just wondering if it was from my traffic or the design. Yes, I change my design about as often as Puff Daddy changes his name.

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Originally Posted by 5pm

it looks great ! NOW LEAVE IT ALONE!

Just teasin MrPink .. but you've had it done a few times .. this ones a winner ;)

AsianDivaGirlsWebDude · 09-20-2006, 04:38 PM

The design is nice, although it only consists of the toon at the top. You might comsider a repeating color or pattern on the side borders. Also, if you include a thumb/screenshot for each site, that will add more to the site graphically speaking.

You call your site a review site, but I didn't see any serious critques of any of the sites in my quick perusal. Therefore it seems like just a traffic portal for you to collect commissions on.

If you check some of the Review sites, they actually do critical reviews which provide some benefit to the surfer. The main benefit I saw on your site was that in some instances surfers could get discounts, although that may be true on the other review sites as well.

Anyway, good luck with your site.

ADG Webmaster

MrPinks · 09-20-2006, 04:39 PM

Would like more opnions

Bump because the truth is out there

alan-l · 09-20-2006, 04:40 PM

I like it a lot

Cyber Fucker · 09-20-2006, 04:41 PM

actually I liked your previous desing more (that one with beautiful angel chick) but this is more suitable for adult site I think

Ace_luffy · 09-20-2006, 04:42 PM

simple...........

betabomb · 09-20-2006, 04:51 PM

u r bootyful

topshelfdesign · 09-20-2006, 04:55 PM

the toons look good!

MrPinks · 09-20-2006, 04:56 PM

Thanks

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Originally Posted by topshelfdesign

the toons look good!

squishypimp · 09-20-2006, 05:24 PM

very clean design, nice site man

donross · 09-20-2006, 05:44 PM

nice site with a nice toon..

CaptainHowdy · 09-20-2006, 06:21 PM

Too much text

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blackdog · 09-20-2006, 06:39 PM

as said CaptainHowdy too mush text here
maybe that's good for SEO, but looks not very readyable

msan · 09-20-2006, 07:54 PM

Needs more pics.

pornpf69 · 09-20-2006, 08:29 PM

it loks really nice!!

ImLost · 09-20-2006, 08:32 PM

it looks good to me

fris · 09-20-2006, 08:33 PM

simple yet efffective

munki · 09-20-2006, 08:34 PM

Dig it... simple and clean.

Shaze · 09-20-2006, 08:34 PM

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Originally Posted by MrPinks

I uploaded my latest design a few days ago. Just looking to get some opinions on it and feedback. Take a moment a check it out, http://www.mrpinks.com/entrance.html

honestly, i think you keep changing your design..i think you do it every month or two months....maybe concentrate more on generating traffic for the site...

looks good though..clean and simple...u need more visually popping images though...not necessarily added into the design but maybe some sponsor banners or images...check out www.perfectgonzo.com sites. see how tits and ass are just popping out at you in every picture???? it keeps the visitor wanting to stay at your site and look more around the site.

PAR · 09-20-2006, 08:44 PM

nice site
nice toon
but something is missing cant put my finger on it but I think its the text... it doesnt stand out.. maybe some screen images of the site would help brake it up a little.. or something.. Any ways all and all nice site...

09-20-2006, 04:13 PM	#1
MrPinks Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: FL Posts: 1,767	New Design Critique I uploaded my latest design a few days ago. Just looking to get some opinions on it and feedback. Take a moment a check it out, http://www.mrpinks.com/entrance.html

09-20-2006, 04:26 PM	#2
5pm Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 282	it looks great ! NOW LEAVE IT ALONE! Just teasin MrPink .. but you've had it done a few times .. this ones a winner ;) __________________ baby Jesus never sleeps when you're being a sinner, yeah he'll eat you for dinner

09-20-2006, 04:38 PM	#4
AsianDivaGirlsWebDude Purveyor, Fine Asian Porn Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: San Francisco Bay Area Posts: 38,323	The design is nice, although it only consists of the toon at the top. You might comsider a repeating color or pattern on the side borders. Also, if you include a thumb/screenshot for each site, that will add more to the site graphically speaking. You call your site a review site, but I didn't see any serious critques of any of the sites in my quick perusal. Therefore it seems like just a traffic portal for you to collect commissions on. If you check some of the Review sites, they actually do critical reviews which provide some benefit to the surfer. The main benefit I saw on your site was that in some instances surfers could get discounts, although that may be true on the other review sites as well. Anyway, good luck with your site. ADG Webmaster __________________ Asian Diva Girls - Exclusive Photos and Videos Asian Diva Girls Affiliate Program (50% ccBill Revshare)

09-20-2006, 04:41 PM	#7
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09-20-2006, 04:42 PM	#8
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09-20-2006, 04:39 PM	#5
MrPinks Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: FL Posts: 1,767	Would like more opnions Bump because the truth is out there

09-20-2006, 04:40 PM	#6
alan-l Confirmed User Join Date: May 2003 Location: look behind you Posts: 2,477	I like it a lot

09-20-2006, 04:51 PM	#9
betabomb Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 777	u r bootyful __________________

09-20-2006, 04:55 PM	#10
topshelfdesign Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 930	the toons look good!

09-20-2006, 05:24 PM	#12
squishypimp PostMaster General Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 10,781	very clean design, nice site man __________________ Signature For Sale

09-20-2006, 05:44 PM	#13
donross Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,295	nice site with a nice toon.. __________________ Email: [email protected] \| Skype: ross.alcazar

09-20-2006, 06:21 PM	#14
CaptainHowdy Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Happy in the dark. Posts: 93,580	Too much text ...

09-20-2006, 06:39 PM	#15
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09-20-2006, 07:54 PM	#16
msan Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 1,336	Needs more pics. __________________ CUSTOM TOONS, BLOG THEMES and DESIGNS \| toonyshack AT gmail.com

09-20-2006, 08:29 PM	#17
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09-20-2006, 08:32 PM	#18
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09-20-2006, 08:33 PM	#19
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09-20-2006, 08:34 PM	#20
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09-20-2006, 08:44 PM	#22
PAR Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1,835	nice site nice toon but something is missing cant put my finger on it but I think its the text... it doesnt stand out.. maybe some screen images of the site would help brake it up a little.. or something.. Any ways all and all nice site...