id like some feedback on my first blog - GoFuckYourself.com

sweetpiece · 03-05-2006, 12:13 AM

hullo

i recently started my first freesite, http://www.dirty-diary.com

i was wondering if anybody had any constructive criticism for me. content, design, whatever i can improve on, i'm still learning the ropes

and if you'd like to trade let me know

thanks dudes and dudettes

Young · 03-05-2006, 12:13 AM

Nice clean layout. I like it. No criticisms here.

CyberHustler · 03-05-2006, 12:14 AM

its pretty good...that girl on the front with the lip pierce is cute. I definitley like ya color scheme. GOOD JOB HOMEBOY ...YOU SHOULD TRADE LINKS WITH ME http://www.xfactoryonline.com/LinkMan/form.html

sweetpiece · 03-05-2006, 12:16 AM

I'M the girl on the front with the lip piercing, hehehe, so thank you

chadglni · 03-05-2006, 12:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sweetpiece

I'M the girl on the front with the lip piercing, hehehe, so thank you

Hawt! The blog looks good too.

Darkhorse · 03-05-2006, 03:57 AM

Very nice clean layout, I have a few blogs if you want to trade hardlinks ICQ or email me.

ICQ: 170890891

email pinkjunky'at'gmail.com

JD · 03-05-2006, 04:04 AM

looks hawt. lmk if you need help growing it I'm always up for helping a hottie

HomerSimpson · 03-05-2006, 04:50 AM

well done.... now all you need is some quality traffic...

Mutt · 03-05-2006, 04:59 AM

very nice job! and one my favorite Fontalicious fonts

twan · 03-05-2006, 05:22 AM

Lovely, one of the best looking blogs since some time.
I'm going to accept it this evening

Keep up the good work!

Martin3 · 03-05-2006, 05:40 AM

Looks good. I got one we can setup a trade with if you want, icq = 264543302

Dshady · 03-05-2006, 05:47 AM

Nice clean layout. Looks Great!

adonthenet · 03-05-2006, 05:59 AM

looks good

Lifer · 03-05-2006, 06:04 AM

Very Nice!! Congratulations!!

mikeet · 03-05-2006, 06:08 AM

Wow, looks great. I like the domain as well.

Juilan · 03-05-2006, 07:08 AM

nicely done! for seo you may want to change the permalink and url structure to something like:

/%postname%/

Roper69 · 03-05-2006, 07:39 AM

Overall, it is a great site.

The design is nice. I do think the top is a little cluttered and distracting with so many photos. I was not sure where to look. I did end up looking at your profile as it is what the first visitors to your site are going to want to see.

I would play up the 'About Ashleigh' area and maybe downplay the ad to start. With blogs you can get a lot of return traffic with good content and a clean design. Your play is unique in the sense you are on the site and you are also showcasing other people's photos.

I also love the idea of putting news in the blog also. I would actually play this up a little more. The post about Jessica Alba is great and if you can make a rule of having at least 1 out of 4 posts have a news type piece you can make people feel the blog is not just a commercial. It also will build trust with the reader.

The main thing I would promote in the short term is who you are and why you are doing this. The right hand box is great and you might want to give it a little more real estate for the short term. Maybe turn the blog into 2 columns versus 3 for the short term, or put your text links up on the left and shrink the size to give more to your profile. You can also provide ad links below your profile on the right side of the blog.

The photos are great in the content. You have a good eye for what draws attention. The body of the blog is great. The text is not too long, but long enough to tell a story. The more you can make this first person the better. If you can talk about your experiences and what you think of these girls that will create a unique value. I agree the font is nice, but with a sans serif, you will need to be careful not to put too much text in a paragraph. It becomes hard to read without breaks.

Overall the blog looks great. It is clear you have worked hard on it and it shows. I look forward to an RSS feed or even an email sign-up as I am creating a database of all the big adult blogs and how much traffic they are getting.

Let me know if I can help.

Take care.

candyflip · 03-05-2006, 09:08 AM

Two thumbs up here.

marketsmart · 03-05-2006, 09:15 AM

germanrevenue · 03-05-2006, 09:21 AM

Nice work, clean and fresh design

QualityMpegs · 03-05-2006, 09:25 AM

Have you submitted it to these blog directories yet?
http://www.promotingporn.com/sex-blog-directories.html

sweetpiece · 03-05-2006, 03:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Roper69

Overall, it is a great site.

The design is nice. I do think the top is a little cluttered and distracting with so many photos. I was not sure where to look. I did end up looking at your profile as it is what the first visitors to your site are going to want to see.

I would play up the 'About Ashleigh' area and maybe downplay the ad to start. With blogs you can get a lot of return traffic with good content and a clean design. Your play is unique in the sense you are on the site and you are also showcasing other people's photos.

I also love the idea of putting news in the blog also. I would actually play this up a little more. The post about Jessica Alba is great and if you can make a rule of having at least 1 out of 4 posts have a news type piece you can make people feel the blog is not just a commercial. It also will build trust with the reader.

The main thing I would promote in the short term is who you are and why you are doing this. The right hand box is great and you might want to give it a little more real estate for the short term. Maybe turn the blog into 2 columns versus 3 for the short term, or put your text links up on the left and shrink the size to give more to your profile. You can also provide ad links below your profile on the right side of the blog.

The photos are great in the content. You have a good eye for what draws attention. The body of the blog is great. The text is not too long, but long enough to tell a story. The more you can make this first person the better. If you can talk about your experiences and what you think of these girls that will create a unique value. I agree the font is nice, but with a sans serif, you will need to be careful not to put too much text in a paragraph. It becomes hard to read without breaks.

Overall the blog looks great. It is clear you have worked hard on it and it shows. I look forward to an RSS feed or even an email sign-up as I am creating a database of all the big adult blogs and how much traffic they are getting.

Let me know if I can help.

Take care.

i'm not sure what you mean by downplaying the ad. could you clarify?

i think i will add a little more to the about ashleigh side, i wasn't quite sure if i should keep it short in case it was distracting and i tend to babble, haw ;p

i try to add celebrity news while keeping it sexy, because i'm a girl and i actually do read a lot of it. i also will be adding more links on the right side, under 'great sites', possibly with very small pics. the reason i haven't yet is becacuse i don't have very many sites to link, lol

thanks very much for the huge reply

glad everyone digs it

Sosa · 03-05-2006, 05:01 PM

looks great!

soapland · 03-05-2006, 06:03 PM

nice bright design, well-themed + tempting links to follow up.

dooglas · 03-05-2006, 06:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BuySexProducts

its pretty good...that girl on the front with the lip pierce is cute. I definitley like ya color scheme. GOOD JOB HOMEBOY ...YOU SHOULD TRADE LINKS WITH ME http://www.xfactoryonline.com/LinkMan/form.html

Yeah that chick is pretty hot. She should model nude.

Great work homie..fo shizzle mah nizzle!

PixeLs · 03-05-2006, 07:20 PM

Well made page there.

Donny · 03-05-2006, 07:23 PM

I like it. Who created the template for you?

bary · 03-05-2006, 07:31 PM

nice template

sweetpiece · 03-05-2006, 08:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Donny

I like it. Who created the template for you?

http://www.egosconnesso.net/wordpres...essodotnet-10/

took this, made it pink, replaced the headers

KRL · 03-05-2006, 08:22 PM

Looks Fantastic!!!

Martin3 · 03-05-2006, 09:43 PM

tried to reply to your icq sweetpiece and it told me "this user is using a client that doesn't support offline message's"

annalisa · 06-06-2006, 09:56 AM

Oh my god Ash,
I love it!!! it makes everything easier for me LOL!!!!
The only feedback I have is that it doesn't have enough pictures of yourself!!..

Whatever happened to your website anyhow?

xoxo.
lisa

Paul · 06-08-2006, 10:50 AM

Ash goodluck in getting your paysite up and running again, a girl as hot as you needs to have a site running !

jacked · 06-08-2006, 10:53 AM

real nice looking blog good job

testpie · 06-08-2006, 10:59 AM

Certainly bits the crap out of my blog

thaifan99 · 06-08-2006, 11:01 AM

very very nice!

Paul · 06-08-2006, 11:39 AM

Btw folks this thread is over a month old, lol !

elitegirls · 06-08-2006, 12:54 PM

i hope you'll get shitloads of traffic ;)

i like your blog *thumbsup*

wanna trade links?

Andiz · 06-08-2006, 01:18 PM

I like it, but don't be a douche bag and add the friggin' link to the website of the maker of the theme back.

sweetpiece · 06-08-2006, 02:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by annalisa

Oh my god Ash,
I love it!!! it makes everything easier for me LOL!!!!
The only feedback I have is that it doesn't have enough pictures of yourself!!..

Whatever happened to your website anyhow?

xoxo.
lisa

thanks

my website was (TEMPORARILY) taken down due to some legal hoohah. basically, i had a website before sweetpieceofash.com. i was 16 at the time and it was just a little cam site. there were bare ass pics and apparently that's considered nudity here. police confiscated all my computers, cameras and even my ipods and i was told to take down EVERYTHING, including my members section.. so, basically, chargebacks galore for everyone and i hope it doesn't stop people from promoting my future website. it WILL happen, and it'll be a hell of a lot sexier

glad everyone likes the blog, i'm pr4 now yay

martin3, i don't use icq, just aim. aaand elitegirls, i emailed you

if anyone else would like to exchange links lemme know

ps, i wasn't TRYING to be an asshole! the thing must've gotten deleted when i took all the text out of the sidebars to add those little thumbnails. i'll fix it i sweaaar

03-05-2006, 12:13 AM	#1
sweetpiece Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: bc, canada Posts: 108	id like some feedback on my first blog hullo i recently started my first freesite, http://www.dirty-diary.com i was wondering if anybody had any constructive criticism for me. content, design, whatever i can improve on, i'm still learning the ropes and if you'd like to trade let me know thanks dudes and dudettes __________________ Sweet piece of Ash

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sweetpiece Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: bc, canada Posts: 108	I'M the girl on the front with the lip piercing, hehehe, so thank you __________________ Sweet piece of Ash

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