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Va2k · 04-10-2002, 10:52 AM

http://www.givenhead.com/true/
If ya can tell me what ya think also is there any missspellings how it loads etc..... Thank you
TOM

ldinternet · 04-10-2002, 10:55 AM

sorry, but...

thats the ugliest site i've ever seen

i've said before, hire a pro designer.

pornJester · 04-10-2002, 10:59 AM

i have a name for the design... given headache

Va2k · 04-10-2002, 11:20 AM

Gosh is it really that bad <whines> Or did I pick a bad day to ask for help????

buster · 04-10-2002, 12:33 PM

that text in the middle fucks with my eye balls tom

TDF · 04-10-2002, 12:41 PM

aol friendly because its looks like it was done with aol homepage....

ZoiNk · 04-10-2002, 12:44 PM

First off, it loaded nice and fast. Start to finish was about 4 seconds on my DSL line up here in good old Canada. Second, I wouldn't change the words "fuck me" with "join me". I like how you do make that move, it does draw attention to it, but I would have the "join now" change slightly to draw the same attention to it. Maybe change from a white to an eggshell color or light yellow. I would get rid of "Cum watch while I pull..." and replace that with 2-3 small thumb images of other models you can find in the site, clickable to a join page or second tour page.
Just my $0.02 canadian, worth 1/100 of a US penny.

ZoiNk

mule · 04-10-2002, 12:53 PM

OK, I'm no designer, I'm just gonna tell you what bothers me:

Tom, can you do something about the pixelation around the text in the middle? It makes me squint

Also, the fish-eye effect just makes it hard to read, same with the text to the right of it.

The URL in white is practically illegible. Actually you could probably just delete it as well as the "gutter sluts" on the same line. In that case, make the text in the top line contrast more with the background.

The whatsits on the main text (heh, what the hell do you call those things? reflections? sunbursts? Anyway, the starry features) are a bit too obtrusive...they detract from the whole picture.

The animation: there is too much happening in it. I'd say dump the horizontal barn-door effect, just have it alternating between the two texts.

Somehow there seems something unbalanced about the bottom line...perhaps move "members" to the left and "free tour" to the right.

Va2k · 04-10-2002, 02:07 PM

Hehe I see what ya all saying on my computer it dosent look bad went to my moms house and it looks like shit Ole well Ill redo it now the text part that is hehe Peace and thanks for your inputs

Cogitator · 04-16-2002, 08:32 PM

Nowadays you need more than just one shot of head action going on per screen shot. Get a number of really hard dicks and hot chicks circling the whole page.

dirtymonkey · 04-16-2002, 08:38 PM

Less LENS flare - I think we have all learned the lesson of horribly applied photoshop effects. Try to use more html vs. graphics... It loads to funky with all those graphics.

If you don't build websites regularly though, not bad! Keep it up and play with more ideas. Check out what other people are doing and why you like their shit... You will see what i mean by the use of html and background images, etc... Don't try to solve everything with a big graphic!

Good Luck! and more CUMSHOTS!

Sly_RJ · 04-16-2002, 09:09 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by dirtymonkey
Good Luck! and more CUMSHOTS!

Are you volunteering?

ZatCHICKPIXXX · 04-16-2002, 09:17 PM

va2k.......remember me???

looks grest, big improvement, should be proud of youself

chickpixxx!!! from newbie**************,ccom

burn · 04-16-2002, 09:19 PM

Teeth kinda look like a vampire

Dreamman010 · 04-16-2002, 09:25 PM

looks like she hasn't brushed her teeth in a while

viewmaster · 04-16-2002, 09:33 PM

I think it looks fine...maybe you changed it from when I just
looked, but...

eh...what do I know?

04-10-2002, 10:52 AM	#1
Va2k I’m still alive barley. Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Va Posts: 10,060	It's Sorta done anyone want... http://www.givenhead.com/true/ If ya can tell me what ya think also is there any missspellings how it loads etc..... Thank you TOM __________________

04-10-2002, 10:59 AM	#3
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04-10-2002, 11:20 AM	#4
Va2k I’m still alive barley. Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Va Posts: 10,060	Gosh is it really that bad <whines> Or did I pick a bad day to ask for help???? __________________

04-10-2002, 12:41 PM	#6
TDF Triple OG nigga on GFY Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: in the BP4L family compound Posts: 27,296	aol friendly because its looks like it was done with aol homepage.... __________________ Sig heil

04-10-2002, 12:44 PM	#7
ZoiNk Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Canada Posts: 2,370	First off, it loaded nice and fast. Start to finish was about 4 seconds on my DSL line up here in good old Canada. Second, I wouldn't change the words "fuck me" with "join me". I like how you do make that move, it does draw attention to it, but I would have the "join now" change slightly to draw the same attention to it. Maybe change from a white to an eggshell color or light yellow. I would get rid of "Cum watch while I pull..." and replace that with 2-3 small thumb images of other models you can find in the site, clickable to a join page or second tour page. Just my $0.02 canadian, worth 1/100 of a US penny. ZoiNk __________________ "People can have the Model T in any color - so long as it's black." - Henry Ford

04-10-2002, 10:55 AM	#2
ldinternet Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 8,245	sorry, but... thats the ugliest site i've ever seen i've said before, hire a pro designer.

04-10-2002, 12:33 PM	#5
buster Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 459	that text in the middle fucks with my eye balls tom

04-10-2002, 12:53 PM	#8
mule Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: hamsterdam Posts: 6,085	OK, I'm no designer, I'm just gonna tell you what bothers me: Tom, can you do something about the pixelation around the text in the middle? It makes me squint Also, the fish-eye effect just makes it hard to read, same with the text to the right of it. The URL in white is practically illegible. Actually you could probably just delete it as well as the "gutter sluts" on the same line. In that case, make the text in the top line contrast more with the background. The whatsits on the main text (heh, what the hell do you call those things? reflections? sunbursts? Anyway, the starry features) are a bit too obtrusive...they detract from the whole picture. The animation: there is too much happening in it. I'd say dump the horizontal barn-door effect, just have it alternating between the two texts. Somehow there seems something unbalanced about the bottom line...perhaps move "members" to the left and "free tour" to the right. __________________ Converting like a mofo

04-10-2002, 02:07 PM	#9
Va2k I’m still alive barley. Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Va Posts: 10,060	Hehe I see what ya all saying on my computer it dosent look bad went to my moms house and it looks like shit Ole well Ill redo it now the text part that is hehe Peace and thanks for your inputs __________________

04-16-2002, 08:32 PM	#10
Cogitator Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Florida Posts: 672	Nowadays you need more than just one shot of head action going on per screen shot. Get a number of really hard dicks and hot chicks circling the whole page.

04-16-2002, 08:38 PM	#11
dirtymonkey Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: San Diego, CA Posts: 128	Less LENS flare - I think we have all learned the lesson of horribly applied photoshop effects. Try to use more html vs. graphics... It loads to funky with all those graphics. If you don't build websites regularly though, not bad! Keep it up and play with more ideas. Check out what other people are doing and why you like their shit... You will see what i mean by the use of html and background images, etc... Don't try to solve everything with a big graphic! Good Luck! and more CUMSHOTS!

04-16-2002, 09:17 PM	#13
ZatCHICKPIXXX Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 257	va2k.......remember me??? looks grest, big improvement, should be proud of youself chickpixxx!!! from newbie*************,ccom __________________ www.chickpixxx.com NEW QUALITY AMATEUR CONTENT www.5starprod.com FIVE STAR PRODUCTIONS, INC. Last edited by ZatCHICKPIXXX; 04-16-2002 at 09:18 PM..*

04-16-2002, 09:19 PM	#14
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04-16-2002, 09:33 PM	#16
viewmaster Registered User Join Date: May 2001 Location: cyberspace Posts: 64	I think it looks fine...maybe you changed it from when I just looked, but... eh...what do I know? __________________ View Master