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jimthefiend · 11-10-2005, 03:48 PM

http://www.********************/mc.mp3

for real.

RayVega · 11-10-2005, 04:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jimthefiend

http://www.********************/mc.mp3

for real.

Honestly, not too bad...decent hook, Don't know that I'd buy it, not crazy about the sound of the vocals, but I did find myself tapping my foot to it so if it got radio play i could see it being catchy. Is it you?

jimthefiend · 11-10-2005, 04:41 PM

I'm involved. ;)

Free- is all that she could bleed
That?s why?ll she?ll never stay
White- bare naked in the night
Just lookin? for some play
Just another girl that wants to rule the world
Any time or place
And when she gets into your head
You know she?s there to stay

You want it
She?s got it
Molly?s Chambers gonna change your mind
She?s got your
Your pistol
Molly's chambers gonna change your mind

Slow- She?s burnin? in your soul
With whispers in your ear
It?s okay I?ll give it anyway
Just get me out of here
You?ll plead- you?ll get down on your knees
For just another taste
And when you think she?s let you in
That?s when she fades away

You want it
She?s got it
Molly?s Chambers gonna change your mind
She?s got your
Your pistol
Molly's chambers gonna change your mind
Molly's chambers gonna change your mind
(guitar)
You want it
She's got it
Molly's chambers gonna change your mind
She's got your
Your pistol

RayVega · 11-10-2005, 04:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jimthefiend

I'm involved. ;)

Free- is all that she could bleed
That?s why?ll she?ll never stay
White- bare naked in the night
Just lookin? for some play
Just another girl that wants to rule the world
Any time or place
And when she gets into your head
You know she?s there to stay

You want it
She?s got it
Molly?s Chambers gonna change your mind
She?s got your
Your pistol
Molly's chambers gonna change your mind

Slow- She?s burnin? in your soul
With whispers in your ear
It?s okay I?ll give it anyway
Just get me out of here
You?ll plead- you?ll get down on your knees
For just another taste
And when you think she?s let you in
That?s when she fades away

You want it
She?s got it
Molly?s Chambers gonna change your mind
She?s got your
Your pistol
Molly's chambers gonna change your mind
Molly's chambers gonna change your mind
(guitar)
You want it
She's got it
Molly's chambers gonna change your mind
She's got your
Your pistol

Good Luck, unique sound, but music is a tough biz, wish you the best.

DirtyRider · 11-10-2005, 05:24 PM

Its ok, a bit boring sounding to be honest. I've been listening to music all day and that kinda took me down a few notches.

wallst · 11-10-2005, 05:28 PM

i like sex cow a lot better.

Slick · 11-10-2005, 05:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DirtyRider

Its ok, a bit boring sounding to be honest. I've been listening to music all day and that kinda took me down a few notches.

I'm sorry to say, but I have to agree, it's just like blaah, there's nothing that really stands out in the song. It's a good effort though

badmunchkin · 11-10-2005, 05:32 PM

ummm... that's Kings of Leon

badmunchkin · 11-10-2005, 05:34 PM

LOL to everyone who thinks it's boring and would never sell. These guys are pretty popular and that song gets a ton of radio play here.

http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg...music&n=507846

nico-t · 11-10-2005, 05:35 PM

not the type of music i like, but it sounds ok

SilentKnight · 11-10-2005, 06:01 PM

Sounded somewhat like David Wilcox. The vocals need a little umphh.

Overall, not bad. Heard worse.

SilentKnight

MarkTiarra · 11-10-2005, 08:48 PM

Because of have a completely overblown ego I'm posting one of my songs here. It's an instrumental rock/jazz fusion thingy. Garageband.com is going to feature it next Wednesday as the Instrumental Rock song of the day. Woohoo.

http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSkaFSyam8

MarkTiarra · 11-10-2005, 09:17 PM

Jim, I finished listening to your song.

Production: The recording is clean and well balanced. The vocal is a little dry in the mix for my taste. The tone of the singer's voice is decent and he has no pitch problems.

Rhythm section: For this type of song it does it's job well. Nothing stand out here but a good solid performance.

Guitars: I like the sounds you chose. Very classic rock and I like the lead split off to a side. The performance is nothing we haven't heard before but neither is 99% of what's on the radio.

The song itself: It doesn't grab me on first llisten like it's a single but it might come out as a second single on a CD with another more compelling track. The early part of the song I wasn't quite digging it but by the end I got more into it. As I mentioned above, it's not anything we haven't heard before but that's fine. You've got a secondary single here in my opinion.

3M TA3 · 11-10-2005, 09:33 PM

sounds like a good orrigional soundtrac song for a med budget college movie.

has alot of potential but radio play is going to be tough. start looking for a sound producer, it's very flat sounding (even if you were going for that sound). if you are near vegas i can drop some names.

badmunchkin · 11-10-2005, 10:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BlueMoon

sounds like a good orrigional soundtrac song for a med budget college movie.

has alot of potential but radio play is going to be tough. start looking for a sound producer, it's very flat sounding (even if you were going for that sound). if you are near vegas i can drop some names.

I guess no one read my post - jimthefiend posted this I assume as a joke - it's a song from a band that's already is getting national airplay - Kings of Leon - but it's funny how everyone thinks it wouldn't do well when I hear it on the radio all the fucking time

MarkTiarra · 11-11-2005, 12:32 AM

At least I said I thought it would be a hit if it was positioned next to one on a CD. =]

I often wonder with the songs on Garageband what would happen if you could give everyone amnesia and slip in a platinum selling single. I'd be willing to bet you'd still get tons of people saying how it's ehh and needs this or that.

Quote:

Originally Posted by badmunchkin

I guess no one read my post - jimthefiend posted this I assume as a joke - it's a song from a band that's already is getting national airplay - Kings of Leon - but it's funny how everyone thinks it wouldn't do well when I hear it on the radio all the fucking time

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badmunchkin Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Los Angeles, CA Posts: 3,797	LOL to everyone who thinks it's boring and would never sell. These guys are pretty popular and that song gets a ton of radio play here. http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg...music&n=507846 __________________ Custom, Full Color Printing with BIG Discounts for GFY! ICQ 283197499

11-10-2005, 04:41 PM	#3
jimthefiend So Fucking Banned Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: icq: 121189 Posts: 18,889	I'm involved. ;) Free- is all that she could bleed That?s why?ll she?ll never stay White- bare naked in the night Just lookin? for some play Just another girl that wants to rule the world Any time or place And when she gets into your head You know she?s there to stay You want it She?s got it Molly?s Chambers gonna change your mind She?s got your Your pistol Molly's chambers gonna change your mind Slow- She?s burnin? in your soul With whispers in your ear It?s okay I?ll give it anyway Just get me out of here You?ll plead- you?ll get down on your knees For just another taste And when you think she?s let you in That?s when she fades away You want it She?s got it Molly?s Chambers gonna change your mind She?s got your Your pistol Molly's chambers gonna change your mind Molly's chambers gonna change your mind (guitar) You want it She's got it Molly's chambers gonna change your mind She's got your Your pistol

11-10-2005, 05:35 PM	#10
nico-t emperor of my world Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: nethalands Posts: 29,903	not the type of music i like, but it sounds ok

11-10-2005, 06:01 PM	#11
SilentKnight Megan Fox's fluffer Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: shooting pool in Elysium Posts: 24,818	Sounded somewhat like David Wilcox. The vocals need a little umphh. Overall, not bad. Heard worse. SilentKnight

11-10-2005, 08:48 PM	#12
MarkTiarra Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: NJ Posts: 3,833	Because of have a completely overblown ego I'm posting one of my songs here. It's an instrumental rock/jazz fusion thingy. Garageband.com is going to feature it next Wednesday as the Instrumental Rock song of the day. Woohoo. http://www.garageband.com/song?\|pe1\|S8LTM0LdsaSkaFSyam8 __________________ Retired Pornosticator

11-10-2005, 09:17 PM	#13
MarkTiarra Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: NJ Posts: 3,833	Jim, I finished listening to your song. Production: The recording is clean and well balanced. The vocal is a little dry in the mix for my taste. The tone of the singer's voice is decent and he has no pitch problems. Rhythm section: For this type of song it does it's job well. Nothing stand out here but a good solid performance. Guitars: I like the sounds you chose. Very classic rock and I like the lead split off to a side. The performance is nothing we haven't heard before but neither is 99% of what's on the radio. The song itself: It doesn't grab me on first llisten like it's a single but it might come out as a second single on a CD with another more compelling track. The early part of the song I wasn't quite digging it but by the end I got more into it. As I mentioned above, it's not anything we haven't heard before but that's fine. You've got a secondary single here in my opinion. __________________ Retired Pornosticator

11-10-2005, 09:33 PM	#14
3M TA3 Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: So Cal Posts: 2,972	sounds like a good orrigional soundtrac song for a med budget college movie. has alot of potential but radio play is going to be tough. start looking for a sound producer, it's very flat sounding (even if you were going for that sound). if you are near vegas i can drop some names. __________________ Dedicated and colo hosting: ICQ 291313057 "A problem cannot be solved from the same consciousness that created it. We must learn to see the world anew." - Albert Einstein