MarkTiarra

Jim, I finished listening to your song.

Production: The recording is clean and well balanced. The vocal is a little dry in the mix for my taste. The tone of the singer's voice is decent and he has no pitch problems.

Rhythm section: For this type of song it does it's job well. Nothing stand out here but a good solid performance.

Guitars: I like the sounds you chose. Very classic rock and I like the lead split off to a side. The performance is nothing we haven't heard before but neither is 99% of what's on the radio.

The song itself: It doesn't grab me on first llisten like it's a single but it might come out as a second single on a CD with another more compelling track. The early part of the song I wasn't quite digging it but by the end I got more into it. As I mentioned above, it's not anything we haven't heard before but that's fine. You've got a secondary single here in my opinion.

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