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cspdinc · 10-15-2005, 11:36 AM

I tried something kinda different yet the same on http://www.pregoplanet.com

I went for a more bold type graphic look. You guys can be brutal so tell me whats right or wrong.

I made it in my trailer on my spare time.... and yes I'd move back to LA. Lens. haha.........

cspdinc · 10-15-2005, 11:55 AM

that wierd or bad then? Or is it all surfers here now?

llporter · 10-15-2005, 11:57 AM

wtf is that Star Wars robot doing buzzing around?

TheMob · 10-15-2005, 11:57 AM

http://www.pregoplanet.com/tourpanel...PPlanet_04.gif

8 Characters · 10-15-2005, 11:59 AM

looks kinda amateurish, which might be a help or not. (fonts don't look great)

Also, that bright red circle reminds me a lot of the japanese flag for some reason.

is that font ms comic or something

cspdinc · 10-15-2005, 12:11 PM

the japanese are a huge piece of prego memberships. I was originally goin gto place a real "planet there instead. but got to thinking. as far as the starwars looking thingie, its a 3DS POSER software item out for free on the web. It has less arms than the real one so its not a copy directly.

Um the whole site is set comic book style. the font is the best I can do with nothing available. It is comic ms font. I'm self taught so unless someone comes over and sits down withme for a few weeks, its tough to learn everything. As it is I'm still mastering 3d modeling offline. and I hope to make a mini movie -pregostyle soon. (If we have enough hard drive space that is.) but thats good I wanted feedback.

pornguy · 10-15-2005, 12:16 PM

I would get rid of the menu on the top. Looks like shit up there.

AaronM · 10-15-2005, 12:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cspdinc

I tried something kinda different yet the same on http://www.pregoplanet.com

I went for a more bold type graphic look. You guys can be brutal so tell me whats right or wrong.

I made it in my trailer on my spare time.... and yes I'd move back to LA. Lens. haha.........

Personally, I don't care for it.

I fully understand what you are doing here though and it's cool to see somebody try different things like that. With the niche you are using, as long as you have decent content and can get targeted traffic then you may still do pretty well.

Good luck.

phasic · 10-15-2005, 12:56 PM

349907853 ~ good prices on tours, hit me up

amalekite · 10-15-2005, 02:51 PM

I like the tour and the bold colors!

My only piece of advice would be what previous posters wrote... the fonts and the font colors look like old default colors from 1998 geocities free pages...

It's not necessarily a bad thing to have that kind of "homepage" feel in the tour of a paysite (for me it converts really well)

What's bad is how recognizeably dated those fonts combined with background colors are to the surfer... It usually subconciously translates as "HASN'T BEEN UPDATED SINCE 1998" or "ANCIENT CONTENT"

other than that, I really like your site... it's cool.. I wish I could design graphics that well

cspdinc · 10-16-2005, 01:48 AM

well, I might try to set a different type then. I made the art work so I CAN swap words and sayings without complete reworking. All I have for fonts are whats available on D-4... any suggestions then?
BTW todays site traffic was a all time high since the twinner of last year. I will give the upper menu a day off on top to see if it helps out. Everything, well 80%, there is all shot and made custom by us, We only have 3 girls who we had to buy.

I did NOT want it to look like another everyday "proper" pron site. Its not.. but we really need some help in marketing a few other sites we're making. we'll let those go as soon as we have their tours up as well here so you can give me a few ideas.

We love our members, we try to update daily. And we try to add a new girl every month. As it is we have prego gals out my ears. we just cant pay em all. that sucks.

DesignWise · 10-16-2005, 02:15 AM

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10-15-2005, 11:36 AM	#1
cspdinc Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: USA land of the oppressed Posts: 724	can you look at my new tour experiment? I tried something kinda different yet the same on http://www.pregoplanet.com I went for a more bold type graphic look. You guys can be brutal so tell me whats right or wrong. I made it in my trailer on my spare time.... and yes I'd move back to LA. Lens. haha.........

10-15-2005, 11:55 AM	#2
cspdinc Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: USA land of the oppressed Posts: 724	well? that wierd or bad then? Or is it all surfers here now?

10-15-2005, 12:11 PM	#6
cspdinc Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: USA land of the oppressed Posts: 724	red dot the japanese are a huge piece of prego memberships. I was originally goin gto place a real "planet there instead. but got to thinking. as far as the starwars looking thingie, its a 3DS POSER software item out for free on the web. It has less arms than the real one so its not a copy directly. Um the whole site is set comic book style. the font is the best I can do with nothing available. It is comic ms font. I'm self taught so unless someone comes over and sits down withme for a few weeks, its tough to learn everything. As it is I'm still mastering 3d modeling offline. and I hope to make a mini movie -pregostyle soon. (If we have enough hard drive space that is.) but thats good I wanted feedback.

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10-15-2005, 02:51 PM	#10
amalekite Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 162	I like the tour and the bold colors! My only piece of advice would be what previous posters wrote... the fonts and the font colors look like old default colors from 1998 geocities free pages... It's not necessarily a bad thing to have that kind of "homepage" feel in the tour of a paysite (for me it converts really well) What's bad is how recognizeably dated those fonts combined with background colors are to the surfer... It usually subconciously translates as "HASN'T BEEN UPDATED SINCE 1998" or "ANCIENT CONTENT" other than that, I really like your site... it's cool.. I wish I could design graphics that well

10-16-2005, 01:48 AM	#11
cspdinc Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: USA land of the oppressed Posts: 724	well, I might try to set a different type then. I made the art work so I CAN swap words and sayings without complete reworking. All I have for fonts are whats available on D-4... any suggestions then? BTW todays site traffic was a all time high since the twinner of last year. I will give the upper menu a day off on top to see if it helps out. Everything, well 80%, there is all shot and made custom by us, We only have 3 girls who we had to buy. I did NOT want it to look like another everyday "proper" pron site. Its not.. but we really need some help in marketing a few other sites we're making. we'll let those go as soon as we have their tours up as well here so you can give me a few ideas. We love our members, we try to update daily. And we try to add a new girl every month. As it is we have prego gals out my ears. we just cant pay em all. that sucks. Last edited by cspdinc; 10-16-2005 at 01:49 AM..

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