I like the tour and the bold colors!
My only piece of advice would be what previous posters wrote... the fonts and the font colors look like old default colors from 1998 geocities free pages...
It's not necessarily a bad thing to have that kind of "homepage" feel in the tour of a paysite (for me it converts really well)
What's bad is how recognizeably dated those fonts combined with background colors are to the surfer... It usually subconciously translates as "HASN'T BEEN UPDATED SINCE 1998" or "ANCIENT CONTENT"
other than that, I really like your site... it's cool.. I wish I could design graphics that well