What do you think of my first gallery? - GoFuckYourself.com

BT · 09-18-2005, 02:54 AM

Would it pass for submission?

http://www.drunkasballs.com/tgp/teen/gmp_katy/7.html

09-18-2005, 03:14 AM

Looks good. Maybe remove one link to the sponsor. 2 is enough.

Ross · 09-18-2005, 03:17 AM

In some of the pics I can still see the watermark. Get rid of them.

phonesex · 09-18-2005, 03:19 AM

clean layout

marttali · 09-18-2005, 03:22 AM

I'm no gallery expert but i know dis'n'dat about marketing and advertising. The ads kinda don't stand out enough, probably because of the picture boarders being the same color. You also missing the call to action. Ok example for you: Instead of writing "Beautiful babes spreading their pussies, pissing, fisting and putting large objects deep inside them" try " I bet you like to watch crisp and clear videos of Beautiful babes spreading their pussies, pissing, fisting and putting large objects deep inside them. What the heck are you waiting for, CLICK HERE !

BT · 09-18-2005, 09:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ross

In some of the pics I can still see the watermark. Get rid of them.

Probably cuss my cum is still on the screen

ItBurnsWhenIpee · 09-18-2005, 09:41 AM

I love it.... 4000 posts and he's never made a gallery before :-)

Pete-KT · 09-18-2005, 09:45 AM

Wont convert, your showing too muich to the surfer they dont need anymore then that to wack off to

Babagirls · 09-18-2005, 09:50 AM

i dont like it.
your gallery is saying all kinds of different things to me...

at first, i thought the gallery was called "Drunk as Balls" but all i saw was pussy, then out of confusion, i re-read the title (Drunk as Balls Presents...) so you're advertising both your website & givemepink.com ..not good.

the text didnt stick out, all the text (even the recip links) are the same color & it all just blends in together & its too much to read & its all over the place.

theres no link at the bottom of the pics, the surfer would have to scroll back up a little bit to find somewhere to click.

just my advice, take it or leave it.

The Captain · 09-18-2005, 10:12 AM

no one will read the text, pictures are good

AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE · 09-18-2005, 10:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NichePay_PeteKT

Wont convert, your showing too muich to the surfer they dont need anymore then that to wack off to

Sosa · 09-18-2005, 10:40 AM

doesn't look bad. I'm sure it woudl get accepted most of the places.

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09-18-2005, 03:14 AM	#2
Gasper Guest Posts: n/a	Looks good. Maybe remove one link to the sponsor. 2 is enough.

09-18-2005, 03:17 AM	#3
Ross Ik ben een aap Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Traffic Force Towers, Canada! Posts: 18,874	In some of the pics I can still see the watermark. Get rid of them.

09-18-2005, 03:22 AM	#5
marttali Confirmed User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 265	I'm no gallery expert but i know dis'n'dat about marketing and advertising. The ads kinda don't stand out enough, probably because of the picture boarders being the same color. You also missing the call to action. Ok example for you: Instead of writing "Beautiful babes spreading their pussies, pissing, fisting and putting large objects deep inside them" try " I bet you like to watch crisp and clear videos of Beautiful babes spreading their pussies, pissing, fisting and putting large objects deep inside them. What the heck are you waiting for, CLICK HERE !

09-18-2005, 09:41 AM	#7
ItBurnsWhenIpee Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: The Beach, SoCal Posts: 1,288	I love it.... 4000 posts and he's never made a gallery before :-)

09-18-2005, 09:45 AM	#8
Pete-KT Workin With The Devil Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: West Bloomfield, MI Posts: 51,532	Wont convert, your showing too muich to the surfer they dont need anymore then that to wack off to

09-18-2005, 10:12 AM	#10
The Captain Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 1,558	no one will read the text, pictures are good

09-18-2005, 10:40 AM	#12
Sosa In Tushy Land Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Nebraska Posts: 40,149	doesn't look bad. I'm sure it woudl get accepted most of the places.