What do you think of my first gallery?
 

Would it pass for submission?

http://www.drunkasballs.com/tgp/teen/gmp_katy/7.html

Looks good. Maybe remove one link to the sponsor. 2 is enough. :2 cents:

In some of the pics I can still see the watermark. Get rid of them.

clean layout

I'm no gallery expert but i know dis'n'dat about marketing and advertising. The ads kinda don't stand out enough, probably because of the picture boarders being the same color. You also missing the call to action. Ok example for you: Instead of writing "Beautiful babes spreading their pussies, pissing, fisting and putting large objects deep inside them" try " I bet you like to watch crisp and clear videos of Beautiful babes spreading their pussies, pissing, fisting and putting large objects deep inside them. What the heck are you waiting for, CLICK HERE !

Probably cuss my cum is still on the screen

I love it.... 4000 posts and he's never made a gallery before :-)

Wont convert, your showing too muich to the surfer they dont need anymore then that to wack off to

i dont like it.
your gallery is saying all kinds of different things to me...

at first, i thought the gallery was called "Drunk as Balls" but all i saw was pussy, then out of confusion, i re-read the title (Drunk as Balls Presents...) so you're advertising both your website & givemepink.com ..not good.

the text didnt stick out, all the text (even the recip links) are the same color & it all just blends in together & its too much to read & its all over the place.

theres no link at the bottom of the pics, the surfer would have to scroll back up a little bit to find somewhere to click.

just my advice, take it or leave it.

no one will read the text, pictures are good

:1orglaugh

doesn't look bad. I'm sure it woudl get accepted most of the places.