Redesigned Website. Looking for constructive criticism - GoFuckYourself.com

trisnap · 02-08-2002, 09:44 PM

Hey people, I just redeisgned my website and I am looking for some constructive criticism. This is a brand new affiliate program that takes porn to a whole new level of enjoyment and security for the end user.

Rather then me trying to sell you on the finer points of the software and what it can do, I would appreciate any feedback you could provide about the site look, the actual pitch and the product itself.

many thanks in advance..

http://www.trisnap.com

Trisnap

Fro · 02-08-2002, 09:48 PM

Mega fuck off.

trisnap · 02-08-2002, 09:53 PM

well.. I see your constructive criticism doesnt get you very far Fro..

Thanks for your time...

Amputate Your Head · 02-08-2002, 09:57 PM

I can't comment on your product, because I have no idea what it is.

Why?

Because your site is B-O-R-I-N-G.

It looks like a fuckin' FrontPage template. It was, in fact, so uninteresting, that I couldn't even bring myself to read your sales pitch or take the time to learn anything about your product.

format c: and start over.

Fro · 02-08-2002, 09:58 PM

No prob!

vegasdude · 02-08-2002, 10:01 PM

can u -->S P E L L<-- F R E E W E B T E M P L A T E S

JackFoley · 02-08-2002, 10:01 PM

Looks like Fro is trying to up his post count any way he can...

Dude, you'll get the t-shirt, don't worry about it.

That site is in fact made from a template, I've seen it before, and it's impossible to navigate because the links are hidden by that fucking javascript roll-over.

It sounds like you might have an interesting product, but spend $500 to get a better design before you try to market it.

trisnap · 02-08-2002, 10:03 PM

Thanks JackFoley, thats the information I need..

Fro · 02-08-2002, 10:04 PM

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Looks like Fro is trying to up his post count any way he can... Dude, you'll get the t-shirt, don't worry about it.

T-shirt?! FUCK! I was paying $9.95 per month to access this GFY forum and NOW you tell me I'm getting a free t-shirt.

What a deal.

Fro

Forest · 02-08-2002, 10:05 PM

Dude

If your looking to impress the surfer that site wont

it needs work to GRAB the surfers attention

LONG text like that is boring

Amputate Your Head · 02-08-2002, 10:08 PM

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Originally posted by trisnap
Thanks JackFoley, thats the information I need..

While everything Foley said is true, technical details come last. Initial IMPACT is King. If you can't hold someone's attention for more time than it takes to load the site, you've failed miserably. I highly recommend you delete that site and start from scratch if you ever intend to actually sell something from it.

^R3K^ · 02-08-2002, 10:11 PM

Looks like DooDoo

trisnap · 02-08-2002, 10:13 PM

I think all of you are correct.. except FRO of course... and your right, it is a template from frontpage... I program in VB... not web design.. so i will definitly take your advice.. thanks !!!

Amputate Your Head · 02-08-2002, 10:14 PM

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Originally posted by trisnap
and your right, it is a template from frontpage...

gawd I'm good.... scary good....

Fro · 02-08-2002, 10:15 PM

Stud.

meta name="GENERATOR" content="Microsoft FrontPage 4.0"

Nbritte · 02-08-2002, 10:18 PM

pretty on the top and left but then I lost instest what was the site about anyway

trisnap · 02-08-2002, 10:26 PM

Fro, I was asking for constructive criticism on the site.. who cares what editor is used.. Big deal.. its front page...

quite frankly from the other posts I have read of yours.. You have absolutly nothing interesting to say... criticism... sheesh.. If I wanted attitdue.. I would of posted it...

Amputate Your Head · 02-08-2002, 10:30 PM

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Originally posted by trisnap
who cares what editor is used.. Big deal.. its front page...

actually no one cares... but it does make a difference. FrontPage is a piece of shit geared towards mid-life crisis housewives who can't think for themselves. It also adds alot of shitty code that will only fuck you in the end, and it's a pain in the ass to even use.

Get a USEFUL wysiwyg or use notepad.

Fro · 02-08-2002, 10:41 PM

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Fro, I was asking for constructive criticism on the site..

Twist my friggin' arm...

It's not clear what product you're selling. If you're selling a piece of software, let us know on the first page we see.

Put a "Buy Now!" button on every page. Make it prominent.

Make the site's feedback forms-based. An email link is OK, but surfers are more comfortable with "anonymous" forms.

Your meta tags could use some work... But this is probably less critical than this other stuff. Decent <title>s.

Dump the mouseover javascript. It will probably lower your search engine ranking. It's a small bit of code, but it might make a difference.

...Did I already talk about the "Buy Now!" buttons?

Fro

trisnap · 02-08-2002, 11:11 PM

Fro, Thank you.... Im looking at having the site redone for me.. My vain attempt at something that stands out.. well.. didnt quite see the light of day

Ill take your advice...

02-08-2002, 09:44 PM	#1
trisnap Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: florida Posts: 6	Redesigned Website. Looking for constructive criticism Hey people, I just redeisgned my website and I am looking for some constructive criticism. This is a brand new affiliate program that takes porn to a whole new level of enjoyment and security for the end user. Rather then me trying to sell you on the finer points of the software and what it can do, I would appreciate any feedback you could provide about the site look, the actual pitch and the product itself. many thanks in advance.. http://www.trisnap.com Trisnap

02-08-2002, 09:48 PM	#2
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JackFoley Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Pac-land Posts: 858	Looks like Fro is trying to up his post count any way he can... Dude, you'll get the t-shirt, don't worry about it. That site is in fact made from a template, I've seen it before, and it's impossible to navigate because the links are hidden by that fucking javascript roll-over. It sounds like you might have an interesting product, but spend $500 to get a better design before you try to market it. __________________ SUBMIT \| TRADE \| CONTACT

02-08-2002, 09:53 PM	#3
trisnap Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: florida Posts: 6	well.. I see your constructive criticism doesnt get you very far Fro.. Thanks for your time...

02-08-2002, 09:57 PM	#4
Amputate Your Head There can be only one Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Somewhere else Posts: 39,075	I can't comment on your product, because I have no idea what it is. Why? Because your site is B-O-R-I-N-G. It looks like a fuckin' FrontPage template. It was, in fact, so uninteresting, that I couldn't even bring myself to read your sales pitch or take the time to learn anything about your product. format c: and start over.

02-08-2002, 10:03 PM	#8
trisnap Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: florida Posts: 6	Thanks JackFoley, thats the information I need..

02-08-2002, 10:05 PM	#10
Forest Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Hollywood Fl. Posts: 9,017	Dude If your looking to impress the surfer that site wont it needs work to GRAB the surfers attention LONG text like that is boring

02-08-2002, 10:11 PM	#12
^R3K^ Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: North Carolina Posts: 2,815	Looks like DooDoo __________________ no business like ho business Http://www.natnet.com No Hype, Just Results

02-08-2002, 10:13 PM	#13
trisnap Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: florida Posts: 6	I think all of you are correct.. except FRO of course... and your right, it is a template from frontpage... I program in VB... not web design.. so i will definitly take your advice.. thanks !!!

02-08-2002, 10:15 PM	#15
Fro Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Mee-chi-gaan Posts: 709	Stud. meta name="GENERATOR" content="Microsoft FrontPage 4.0" __________________ I miss [Labret].

02-08-2002, 10:18 PM	#16
Nbritte Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: Kentucky USA Posts: 689	pretty on the top and left but then I lost instest what was the site about anyway __________________ SexyCityCash gets in Bed with PornoDan

02-08-2002, 10:26 PM	#17
trisnap Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: florida Posts: 6	Fro, I was asking for constructive criticism on the site.. who cares what editor is used.. Big deal.. its front page... quite frankly from the other posts I have read of yours.. You have absolutly nothing interesting to say... criticism... sheesh.. If I wanted attitdue.. I would of posted it...

02-08-2002, 11:11 PM	#20
trisnap Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: florida Posts: 6	Fro, Thank you.... Im looking at having the site redone for me.. My vain attempt at something that stands out.. well.. didnt quite see the light of day Ill take your advice...