Redesigned Website. Looking for constructive criticism
 

Hey people, I just redeisgned my website and I am looking for some constructive criticism. This is a brand new affiliate program that takes porn to a whole new level of enjoyment and security for the end user.

Rather then me trying to sell you on the finer points of the software and what it can do, I would appreciate any feedback you could provide about the site look, the actual pitch and the product itself.

many thanks in advance..

http://www.trisnap.com

Trisnap

Mega fuck off.

well.. I see your constructive criticism doesnt get you very far Fro..

Thanks for your time...

I can't comment on your product, because I have no idea what it is.

Why?

Because your site is B-O-R-I-N-G.

It looks like a fuckin' FrontPage template. It was, in fact, so uninteresting, that I couldn't even bring myself to read your sales pitch or take the time to learn anything about your product.

format c: and start over.

No prob!

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Looks like Fro is trying to up his post count any way he can... :1orglaugh Dude, you'll get the t-shirt, don't worry about it.

That site is in fact made from a template, I've seen it before, and it's impossible to navigate because the links are hidden by that fucking javascript roll-over.

It sounds like you might have an interesting product, but spend $500 to get a better design before you try to market it.

Thanks JackFoley, thats the information I need..

T-shirt?! FUCK! I was paying $9.95 per month to access this GFY forum and NOW you tell me I'm getting a free t-shirt.

What a deal.

Fro

Dude

If your looking to impress the surfer that site wont

it needs work to GRAB the surfers attention

LONG text like that is boring

While everything Foley said is true, technical details come last. Initial IMPACT is King. If you can't hold someone's attention for more time than it takes to load the site, you've failed miserably. I highly recommend you delete that site and start from scratch if you ever intend to actually sell something from it.

Looks like DooDoo

I think all of you are correct.. except FRO of course... and your right, it is a template from frontpage... I program in VB... not web design.. so i will definitly take your advice.. thanks !!!

gawd I'm good.... scary good.... :smokin

Stud.

meta name="GENERATOR" content="Microsoft FrontPage 4.0"

pretty on the top and left but then I lost instest what was the site about anyway

Fro, I was asking for constructive criticism on the site.. who cares what editor is used.. Big deal.. its front page...

quite frankly from the other posts I have read of yours.. You have absolutly nothing interesting to say... criticism... sheesh.. If I wanted attitdue.. I would of posted it...

actually no one cares... but it does make a difference. FrontPage is a piece of shit geared towards mid-life crisis housewives who can't think for themselves. It also adds alot of shitty code that will only fuck you in the end, and it's a pain in the ass to even use.

Get a USEFUL wysiwyg or use notepad.

Twist my friggin' arm...

It's not clear what product you're selling. If you're selling a piece of software, let us know on the first page we see.

Put a "Buy Now!" button on every page. Make it prominent.

Make the site's feedback forms-based. An email link is OK, but surfers are more comfortable with "anonymous" forms.

Your meta tags could use some work... But this is probably less critical than this other stuff. Decent <title>s.

Dump the mouseover javascript. It will probably lower your search engine ranking. It's a small bit of code, but it might make a difference.

...Did I already talk about the "Buy Now!" buttons?

Fro

Fro, Thank you.... Im looking at having the site redone for me.. My vain attempt at something that stands out.. well.. didnt quite see the light of day :) Ill take your advice...