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Michella · 08-03-2005, 10:14 AM

Hi guys
Wondering if I could get some feedback on the following site... it's the first time I've designed a TGP. (used to more main stream stuff)
Anyway, feedback good or bad would be greatly appericated.
Michella

www.cherriteen.com

xxxice · 08-03-2005, 10:17 AM

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Originally Posted by Michella

Hi guys
Wondering if I could get some feedback on the following site... it's the first time I've designed a TGP. (used to more main stream stuff)
Anyway, feedback good or bad would be greatly appericated.
Michella

www.cherriteen.com

looks good I like the mix of thumbs and text

Michella · 08-04-2005, 12:57 PM

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Originally Posted by vanderweb

looks good I like the mix of thumbs and text

Thanks for the complement.
Also wondering if anyway can suggest a good place to buy traffic.

Nazgrel · 08-04-2005, 12:59 PM

Looks werry good. GW

nexcom28 · 08-04-2005, 01:08 PM

I noticed a few missing images and that it looks exactly the same as every other TGP.. Part from that..

Good work..

xxxice · 08-04-2005, 01:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Michella

Thanks for the complement.
Also wondering if anyway can suggest a good place to buy traffic.

contact me icq 69422300 or check out my site

rogerbo · 08-04-2005, 02:18 PM

THe is O.k. but you won't make anything as long you have the links like this.
hxxp://www.littlethumbs.com/samples/ally/teen-boobs/?coupon=959808&e=1&l=1|Sweet%20teen%20in%20a%20tub %20lathers%20lotion%20all%20over%20her%20soft%20sk in%20and%20then%20washes%20it%20off%20oh%20so%20ca refully|ally_teen-boobs_90.jpg

You'r NOT suposed to copy paste the link like that.
this also won't give you $$ coupon=XXXXXX

Just work that over again

Sosa · 08-04-2005, 02:18 PM

design looks good, that was all I checked out

Reak AGV · 08-04-2005, 02:31 PM

Dont try to sell anime/cartoon/comix sites to teen surfers.

BigRod · 08-04-2005, 02:34 PM

Yeah very nice design

demented · 08-04-2005, 02:39 PM

I like it alot. The cartoon chick at the top is awesome. Keep up the good work

Dirty Dane · 08-04-2005, 02:53 PM

Design is very nice

If I were you, I would not use POTDs thumbs. Use textlinks instead, because remote thumbs slow down the page load and sometimes they don't work. Or use 3-4 "reliable" and fast thumbs and rest textlinks. You can also rotate fewer thumbs, just for the variation.

List some of your best converting paysites. Sending surfers to paysites makes more sales than sending them to galleries. And make a second page with ALL your paysite links. Its good for SE traffic, trust me

I assume you gonna put some trade links there sooner or later

Good luck!
DD

Michella · 08-05-2005, 12:44 PM

Hi guys! Thanks for the great feedback and suggestions

I've started to make some changes based on your opinions (and will be making more as the day goes on) and hopefully they will make a big difference in terms of sales.

Michella

herself432 · 08-05-2005, 01:01 PM

Do you have permission to use the nitrocomix logo on your site ?

Nitrocomix is your site also ?

Thumbking · 08-05-2005, 01:07 PM

design is very nice, top sites list very hard to read, change text to white/grey..

Michella · 08-05-2005, 01:35 PM

lol yep I'm one of the creators (owners) of Nitro Comix as well. As for the text, I agree and I'll make that change today

You guys ROCK!!!!!

longbrick · 08-05-2005, 01:39 PM

looks very nice and clean

good luck

tranza · 08-05-2005, 01:42 PM

Looks pretty cool...

Corleone · 08-05-2005, 01:47 PM

looks great

and really good thumbs

The Dawg · 08-05-2005, 03:03 PM

Nice looking setup.

VeriSexy · 08-05-2005, 05:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Michella

Hi guys
Wondering if I could get some feedback on the following site... it's the first time I've designed a TGP. (used to more main stream stuff)
Anyway, feedback good or bad would be greatly appericated.
Michella

www.cherriteen.com

Looks really good, love the cartoon

FilthyRob · 08-05-2005, 05:58 PM

Looking good!

Spunky · 08-05-2005, 06:09 PM

That actually looks pretty good..nice job

08-03-2005, 10:14 AM	#1
Michella Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 45	Feedback on my TGP please. Hi guys Wondering if I could get some feedback on the following site... it's the first time I've designed a TGP. (used to more main stream stuff) Anyway, feedback good or bad would be greatly appericated. Michella www.cherriteen.com

08-04-2005, 12:59 PM	#4
Nazgrel Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 724	Looks werry good. GW __________________ [email protected]

08-04-2005, 02:18 PM	#7
rogerbo Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 193	THe is O.k. but you won't make anything as long you have the links like this. hxxp://www.littlethumbs.com/samples/ally/teen-boobs/?coupon=959808&e=1&l=1\|Sweet%20teen%20in%20a%20tub %20lathers%20lotion%20all%20over%20her%20soft%20sk in%20and%20then%20washes%20it%20off%20oh%20so%20ca refully\|ally_teen-boobs_90.jpg You'r NOT suposed to copy paste the link like that. this also won't give you $$ coupon=XXXXXX Just work that over again __________________ Teen Elf's Blog Teenhouse<br> MAKE ME RICH NOW ------ ICOO

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08-04-2005, 01:08 PM	#5
nexcom28 So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 3,716	I noticed a few missing images and that it looks exactly the same as every other TGP.. Part from that.. Good work..

08-04-2005, 02:18 PM	#8
Sosa In Tushy Land Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Nebraska Posts: 40,149	design looks good, that was all I checked out

08-04-2005, 02:39 PM	#11
demented Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Cincinnati Ohio Posts: 2,388	I like it alot. The cartoon chick at the top is awesome. Keep up the good work

08-04-2005, 02:53 PM	#12
Dirty Dane Sick Fuck Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: www Posts: 9,491	Design is very nice If I were you, I would not use POTDs thumbs. Use textlinks instead, because remote thumbs slow down the page load and sometimes they don't work. Or use 3-4 "reliable" and fast thumbs and rest textlinks. You can also rotate fewer thumbs, just for the variation. List some of your best converting paysites. Sending surfers to paysites makes more sales than sending them to galleries. And make a second page with ALL your paysite links. Its good for SE traffic, trust me I assume you gonna put some trade links there sooner or later Good luck! DD

08-05-2005, 12:44 PM	#13
Michella Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 45	Hi guys! Thanks for the great feedback and suggestions I've started to make some changes based on your opinions (and will be making more as the day goes on) and hopefully they will make a big difference in terms of sales. Michella __________________ http://nitrocomix.com/home.html

08-05-2005, 01:01 PM	#14
herself432 Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 125	Do you have permission to use the nitrocomix logo on your site ? Nitrocomix is your site also ? __________________ MensNiche Soulcash EpicCash

08-05-2005, 01:07 PM	#15
Thumbking Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Canadabis Posts: 1,067	design is very nice, top sites list very hard to read, change text to white/grey..

08-05-2005, 01:35 PM	#16
Michella Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 45	lol yep I'm one of the creators (owners) of Nitro Comix as well. As for the text, I agree and I'll make that change today You guys ROCK!!!!! __________________ http://nitrocomix.com/home.html

08-05-2005, 01:39 PM	#17
longbrick Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Toronto Posts: 913	looks very nice and clean good luck __________________ Porn Site Reviews

08-05-2005, 01:42 PM	#18
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08-05-2005, 01:47 PM	#19
Corleone C.R.E.A.M Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,262	looks great and really good thumbs

08-05-2005, 03:03 PM	#20
The Dawg Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: State Of Bliss Posts: 2,438	Nice looking setup.

08-05-2005, 05:58 PM	#22
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