Some Design input PLease - GoFuckYourself.com

Forest · 01-31-2002, 09:53 AM

http://www2.easyfreeporn.com/design/wegetyoulaid/

what do you think???

Fro · 01-31-2002, 09:56 AM

I don't think I've ever seen a clitoris that sparkly!

Fro

optikalz · 01-31-2002, 12:56 PM

Use better graphics. Also the color scheme probably won't convert well since its not "off" enough. For inspiration, look at TeenDreamer or IndiaExposed Very scientific [or close to it] use of composition and text to achieve a "must sign up" feeling.

Wizzo · 01-31-2002, 01:01 PM

It looks like another boring square paysite tour...

dropped9 · 01-31-2002, 01:02 PM

It looks decent... All you need is the logo to be touched up a bit and the menu bar... The insides of the square are well composed. IE The content fading into each other, and text.

Amputate Your Head · 01-31-2002, 01:05 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by linkyd
Use better graphics. Also the color scheme probably won't convert well since its not "off" enough. For inspiration, look at TeenDreamer or IndiaExposed Very scientific [or close to it] use of composition and text to achieve a "must sign up" feeling.

I disagree somewhat.... I think it looks pretty good... it's got potential for greatness there somewhere... just needs a little fine tuning... it's kinda,.... flat. Looks good, but uninspiring.

...but to say the TeenDreamer is a *scientific* composition is ludicrous. There is nothing outstanding about it. TeenDreamer is "nice". But that's all. It certainly wouldn't inspire a *must signup* urge in me.

The IndiaExposed site however, is much better... far superior to TeenDreamer.

Jakke PNG · 01-31-2002, 01:09 PM

It's a nice looking design, but 2 things bother me.
1. the colors remind me of old cybererotica
2. because of that, it looks 'ancient'

I'd chose different color scheme, not black at all maybe.

Verbal · 01-31-2002, 01:18 PM

Hi,

You might want to compress the graphics a little further as well...your page is running at about 200K which might deter the average surfer from hanging around.

Good Luck!

Verbal

funkmaster · 01-31-2002, 01:22 PM

it looks ok, thing is it is nothing new, in fact it looks kinda ancient ... how long did it take you to build that? honest answer prefered.

onlyreal · 01-31-2002, 01:35 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Wizzo
It looks like another boring square paysite tour...

Wizoo
can you look to
http://www.awpost.com/tngirls.jpg ( 250kb)
this guy is new in industry
this is his first pron site try made it in two hours

we donot want him to write texts
just one page design what do you think about his design

xsun · 01-31-2002, 06:23 PM

Actually, I did the design, did it in about 3 hours.. I'm far to be a pro's and Forest just wanted to know if i'm ok...

I appreciate your comments guys.. But it's good to have in every comments some positive things.. Not only a: Another boring tour site!

I'm open to any suggestion and I open to tips and tricks..

Thanks

-yaN

neewwman · 01-31-2002, 06:35 PM

"Length" is misspelled at the bottom where it says "Full Length Movies"

Forest · 02-01-2002, 07:36 AM

Yan

U did a great Job man!!!!

and the price is MORE than right

you and I are gonna rock some roll together brotha

;)))))))))))))

goodgirl · 02-01-2002, 07:45 AM

I think it looks great, the only thing I don't care for is the We Get You at the top, makes my eyes blurry but that might just be me getting old... damn now I'm starting to feel depressed....

It looks good ;)

gg

theBitch · 02-01-2002, 08:10 AM

two things:

1. on a 800x600 screen you have to scroll to see the buttons.

2. who gives a flying fuck what a bunch of webmasters think of it. Its what the surfer thinks that matters. throw it up and send a whack of targetted traffic at it and you'll find out how good or bad it really is.

kai-tracid · 02-01-2002, 12:52 PM

Hi there. It is quite nice...
I have to say you got a typo in the upper text.
Tirp??=trip. I have to... I agree with the people that it looks like another boring website... What do u offer with this sites?? I think you offer what millions of other sites offer. Be more creative and exclusive with your designs... Peace out ! kai Tracid

MrBrian · 02-01-2002, 01:07 PM

i agree with wizzo

my screen is 1600 by 1200 and the tour is about 3 inches high

get rid of the silver bars, and add some more color to the tour as well as enlarging it about 25%

just my 2 cents and some lent

Forest · 02-01-2002, 08:25 PM

Thanx to everyone for your Input

TwoKool ( the guy who designed it) had never done a sit like this and i wanted some critic

If i can do anything for any of you just hitt me up
and Thanx again

FADE19 · 02-01-2002, 08:31 PM

Run...Forest...Run!

SNOW · 02-01-2002, 08:35 PM

I like it.....

Forest · 02-01-2002, 09:33 PM

Thanx Snow

and the run bit got old yearsss ago

common you can do better than that right

Lev · 02-02-2002, 12:52 AM

It's alright. Nothing special.

01-31-2002, 09:53 AM	#1
Forest Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Hollywood Fl. Posts: 8,988	Some Design input PLease http://www2.easyfreeporn.com/design/wegetyoulaid/ what do you think???

01-31-2002, 09:56 AM	#2
Fro Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Mee-chi-gaan Posts: 709	I don't think I've ever seen a clitoris that sparkly! Fro __________________ I miss [Labret].

01-31-2002, 01:01 PM	#4
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01-31-2002, 01:09 PM	#7
Jakke PNG ex-TeenGodFather Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Suomi Finland Perkele Posts: 20,306	It's a nice looking design, but 2 things bother me. 1. the colors remind me of old cybererotica 2. because of that, it looks 'ancient' I'd chose different color scheme, not black at all maybe. __________________ ..and I'm off.

02-01-2002, 07:45 AM	#14
goodgirl Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Behind the monitor since 1988 Posts: 1,679	I think it looks great, the only thing I don't care for is the We Get You at the top, makes my eyes blurry but that might just be me getting old... damn now I'm starting to feel depressed.... It looks good ;) gg __________________ Got Web Host providing Website Hosting since 2002.

01-31-2002, 12:56 PM	#3
optikalz Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Lost Angelez Posts: 555	Use better graphics. Also the color scheme probably won't convert well since its not "off" enough. For inspiration, look at TeenDreamer or IndiaExposed Very scientific [or close to it] use of composition and text to achieve a "must sign up" feeling.

01-31-2002, 01:02 PM	#5
dropped9 Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Your moms box Posts: 26,727	It looks decent... All you need is the logo to be touched up a bit and the menu bar... The insides of the square are well composed. IE The content fading into each other, and text.

01-31-2002, 01:18 PM	#8
Verbal Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 3,420	Hi, You might want to compress the graphics a little further as well...your page is running at about 200K which might deter the average surfer from hanging around. Good Luck! Verbal

01-31-2002, 01:22 PM	#9
funkmaster So Fucking Banned Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: shell beach Posts: 7,938	it looks ok, thing is it is nothing new, in fact it looks kinda ancient ... how long did it take you to build that? honest answer prefered.

01-31-2002, 06:23 PM	#11
xsun Registered User Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Montreal Posts: 21	Actually, I did the design, did it in about 3 hours.. I'm far to be a pro's and Forest just wanted to know if i'm ok... I appreciate your comments guys.. But it's good to have in every comments some positive things.. Not only a: Another boring tour site! I'm open to any suggestion and I open to tips and tricks.. Thanks -yaN

01-31-2002, 06:35 PM	#12
neewwman Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Los Angeles, CA, USA Posts: 1,737	"Length" is misspelled at the bottom where it says "Full Length Movies"

02-01-2002, 07:36 AM	#13
Forest Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Hollywood Fl. Posts: 8,988	Yan U did a great Job man!!!! and the price is MORE than right you and I are gonna rock some roll together brotha ;)))))))))))))

02-01-2002, 08:10 AM	#15
theBitch Registered User Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: in your fucking nightmares Posts: 12	two things: 1. on a 800x600 screen you have to scroll to see the buttons. 2. who gives a flying fuck what a bunch of webmasters think of it. Its what the surfer thinks that matters. throw it up and send a whack of targetted traffic at it and you'll find out how good or bad it really is.

02-01-2002, 12:52 PM	#16
kai-tracid Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Bali, Indonesia Posts: 331	Hi there. It is quite nice... I have to say you got a typo in the upper text. Tirp??=trip. I have to... I agree with the people that it looks like another boring website... What do u offer with this sites?? I think you offer what millions of other sites offer. Be more creative and exclusive with your designs... Peace out ! kai Tracid __________________ • [email protected] • Hit him again Jack!He's crazy

02-01-2002, 01:07 PM	#17
MrBrian Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2001 Posts: 1,215	i agree with wizzo my screen is 1600 by 1200 and the tour is about 3 inches high get rid of the silver bars, and add some more color to the tour as well as enlarging it about 25% just my 2 cents and some lent __________________ ICQ #971-2561

02-01-2002, 08:25 PM	#18
Forest Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Hollywood Fl. Posts: 8,988	Thanx to everyone for your Input TwoKool ( the guy who designed it) had never done a sit like this and i wanted some critic If i can do anything for any of you just hitt me up and Thanx again

02-01-2002, 08:31 PM	#19
FADE19 Snow's Parole Officer Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: mud hut next to Bin Laden's Posts: 1,161	Run...Forest...Run!

02-01-2002, 08:35 PM	#20
SNOW Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2001 Posts: 3,963	I like it.....

02-01-2002, 09:33 PM	#21
Forest Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Hollywood Fl. Posts: 8,988	Thanx Snow and the run bit got old yearsss ago common you can do better than that right

02-02-2002, 12:52 AM	#22
Lev Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,545	It's alright. Nothing special.