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Some Design input PLease
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I don't think I've ever seen a clitoris that sparkly!
Fro |
Use better graphics. Also the color scheme probably won't convert well since its not "off" enough. For inspiration, look at TeenDreamer or IndiaExposed Very scientific [or close to it] use of composition and text to achieve a "must sign up" feeling.
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It looks like another boring square paysite tour...
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It looks decent... All you need is the logo to be touched up a bit and the menu bar... The insides of the square are well composed. IE The content fading into each other, and text.
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...but to say the TeenDreamer is a *scientific* composition is ludicrous. There is nothing outstanding about it. TeenDreamer is "nice". But that's all. It certainly wouldn't inspire a *must signup* urge in me. The IndiaExposed site however, is much better... far superior to TeenDreamer. |
It's a nice looking design, but 2 things bother me.
1. the colors remind me of old cybererotica 2. because of that, it looks 'ancient' I'd chose different color scheme, not black at all maybe. |
Hi,
You might want to compress the graphics a little further as well...your page is running at about 200K which might deter the average surfer from hanging around. Good Luck! Verbal |
it looks ok, thing is it is nothing new, in fact it looks kinda ancient ... how long did it take you to build that? honest answer prefered.
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can you look to http://www.awpost.com/tngirls.jpg ( 250kb) this guy is new in industry this is his first pron site try made it in two hours we donot want him to write texts just one page design what do you think about his design |
Actually, I did the design, did it in about 3 hours.. I'm far to be a pro's and Forest just wanted to know if i'm ok...
I appreciate your comments guys.. But it's good to have in every comments some positive things.. Not only a: Another boring tour site! I'm open to any suggestion and I open to tips and tricks.. Thanks -yaN |
"Length" is misspelled at the bottom where it says "Full Length Movies" :eek7
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Yan
U did a great Job man!!!! and the price is MORE than right you and I are gonna rock some roll together brotha ;))))))))))))) |
I think it looks great, the only thing I don't care for is the We Get You at the top, makes my eyes blurry but that might just be me getting old... damn now I'm starting to feel depressed....
It looks good ;) gg |
two things:
1. on a 800x600 screen you have to scroll to see the buttons. 2. who gives a flying fuck what a bunch of webmasters think of it. Its what the surfer thinks that matters. throw it up and send a whack of targetted traffic at it and you'll find out how good or bad it really is. |
Hi there. It is quite nice...
I have to say you got a typo in the upper text. Tirp??=trip. I have to... I agree with the people that it looks like another boring website... What do u offer with this sites?? I think you offer what millions of other sites offer. Be more creative and exclusive with your designs... Peace out ! kai Tracid |
i agree with wizzo
my screen is 1600 by 1200 and the tour is about 3 inches high get rid of the silver bars, and add some more color to the tour as well as enlarging it about 25% just my 2 cents and some lent |
Thanx to everyone for your Input
TwoKool ( the guy who designed it) had never done a sit like this and i wanted some critic If i can do anything for any of you just hitt me up and Thanx again |
Run...Forest...Run!
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I like it.....
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Thanx Snow
and the run bit got old yearsss ago common you can do better than that right |
It's alright. Nothing special.
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