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MarkTiarra · 07-12-2005, 09:36 PM

Is this any good, just eh or does it suck the llama's flaming piles?

http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/No%20Liquid%20Savior.mp3

Ice · 07-12-2005, 09:42 PM

The intro was a bit messy, then when the vocals kicked in the mix for the guitar was too low, couldn't really hear the bass... I like what ya did around the 2:18 mark... maybe add a guitar solo in there....

Just play with the mix a bit and it would be much better

Tylo · 07-12-2005, 09:45 PM

Yo Mark listening to it now.. Like Ice said.. little off at first but kinda catchy along the way.

MarkTiarra · 07-12-2005, 09:48 PM

Thanks for taking the time to listen and make intelligent comments. =]

Ice · 07-12-2005, 09:51 PM

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Originally Posted by MarkTiarra

Thanks for taking the time to listen and make intelligent comments. =]

No prob man... I love music... I play guitar and keyboards and dabble in recording/mixing when I can find the time.

Is that your band?

nofx · 07-12-2005, 09:53 PM

sounds like the next wannabe nu-metal crappy Creed/Staind type band IMO

MarkTiarra · 07-12-2005, 09:56 PM

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Originally Posted by iceicebaby

No prob man... I love music... I play guitar and keyboards and dabble in recording/mixing when I can find the time.

Is that your band?

It's just me messing around in my studio. I haven't done music professionally in years and mostly I do jazz/fusion when I record. But, my daughter had me teaching her alot of the "numetal" stuff lately so I ended up writing this on a riff I was messing with. I just wondered if it was any good. I can judge the jazz/fusion stuff since it's what I love most but newer rock sounding stuff I have no good barometer.

MarkTiarra · 07-12-2005, 09:58 PM

BTW - this is more like what I've been doing the last few years:
http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/stormchaser.mp3

Ice · 07-12-2005, 10:10 PM

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Originally Posted by MarkTiarra

It's just me messing around in my studio. I haven't done music professionally in years and mostly I do jazz/fusion when I record. But, my daughter had me teaching her alot of the "numetal" stuff lately so I ended up writing this on a riff I was messing with. I just wondered if it was any good. I can judge the jazz/fusion stuff since it's what I love most but newer rock sounding stuff I have no good barometer.

Pretty fucking decent for you messing around man.

d/l stormchaser now

badmunchkin · 07-12-2005, 10:10 PM

not bad, esp. if this isn't your first choice of music. The chord changes in the bridge section aren't really working for me. Like Ice said, the breakdown section after the 2nd chorus is a high point and could be expanded on.

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MarkTiarra · 07-12-2005, 10:21 PM

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Originally Posted by iceicebaby

Pretty fucking decent for you messing around man.

d/l stormchaser now

Thanks. Curious to see what you think of the one that's more my bag.

Ice · 07-12-2005, 10:36 PM

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Originally Posted by MarkTiarra

Thanks. Curious to see what you think of the one that's more my bag.

Interesting man.... Dream Theater meets Frank Gambale and Robben Ford with some mad drums... I like it

MarkTiarra · 07-12-2005, 10:45 PM

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Originally Posted by iceicebaby

Interesting man.... Dream Theater meets Frank Gambale and Robben Ford with some mad drums... I like it

=] I had a blast doing those drums. Took me two days to get them how I wanted. You got anything online I can hear too? It's always good to trade.

Ice · 07-12-2005, 10:50 PM

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Originally Posted by MarkTiarra

=] I had a blast doing those drums. Took me two days to get them how I wanted. You got anything online I can hear too? It's always good to trade.

Nothing online.... it's all on my other computer that is still in Toronto. It would be fun to jam with ya one day though. I'm still trying to get the recording/mix thing down... I'm more old school... plug a Les Paul into my Marshall and rock it out.... but there is so much you can do with the stuff out these days....

Ice · 07-13-2005, 07:48 AM

Post more songs Mark

LittleSassy · 07-13-2005, 09:09 AM

pretty good since its quite a new turn for ya music...post some more please

MarkTiarra · 07-13-2005, 10:09 AM

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Originally Posted by LittleSassy

pretty good since its quite a new turn for ya music...post some more please

Well okay cool. =] I've got stuff up there all the way back from the 1990 hairband days.

Here's another jazz/fusion one:
http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/ageb4beauty.mp3

And a one with vox that's kinda old:
http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/highwaytonowhere.mp3

Ice · 07-13-2005, 10:16 AM

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Originally Posted by MarkTiarra

Well okay cool. =] I've got stuff up there all the way back from the 1990 hairband days.

Here's another jazz/fusion one:
http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/ageb4beauty.mp3

And a one with vox that's kinda old:
http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/highwaytonowhere.mp3

d/l now

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