new logo for tog.com, what do you think (clothing brand) - GoFuckYourself.com

oberheimer · 05-05-2005, 09:05 AM

What do you think about my new logo for tog.com (clothing brand)
I know i need to do some more work on it, but i thought i needed some feedback first

CynthiaB · 05-05-2005, 09:44 AM

I don't get the shield, it doesn't seem to fit with the logo. Not sure what its supposed to be.

Cyn

Trax · 05-05-2005, 09:48 AM

looks cheap and weakly done

thediablo · 05-05-2005, 09:50 AM

dosen'y look like a clothing brand logo.
dont like the font u using and sup with the shield?

you should only focus on the font for this.
go with TOG and something simple around it... thats what stays. :D

sickkittens · 05-05-2005, 09:51 AM

I don't like it. Sorry.

Nysus · 05-05-2005, 09:56 AM

I'm never harsh, but it's pretty horrible. I imagine TOG is going to be a high-end brand if you're using a shield? Put money into a good logo..

Make a contest on GFY for $250-$500; show some pictures of the clothing and where the logos will go, the size of them, and what kind of feel and what kind of clients you want to target / attract... and then let designers show you their contest entries..

And honestly you should offer $500 because you'll get a lot more entries to chose from, and you're likely investing a fair amount, so $500 for the company logo / branding of the company name, is definitely worth it.

Good luck..

Matt

Nysus · 05-05-2005, 10:00 AM

I'd also call it TOG New York or TOG NY though togny.com is taken.

Matt

Basic_man · 05-05-2005, 10:02 AM

Looks like you did it with Paint ! ..

Nysus · 05-05-2005, 10:06 AM

Think someone may have.

Matt

sickkittens · 05-05-2005, 10:17 AM

you can actualy get a decent design made up fairly cheap at designoutpost.

oberheimer · 05-05-2005, 11:38 AM

I just made the logo in a few minutes. I know i should do more work on in and i own tog.com I just needed some feedback

GirlNinja · 05-05-2005, 11:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Basic_man

Looks like you did it with Paint ! ..

that's what i was thinking

oberheimer · 05-05-2005, 11:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GirlNinja

that's what i was thinking

You never use paint for a logo

So everything is done in ilustrator

galleryseek · 05-05-2005, 11:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by oberheimer

You never use paint for a logo

So everything is done in ilustrator

i'll do one for you for $150. garysimon.net

Kapitan Ivanov II · 05-05-2005, 11:59 AM

Pathetic.

thumbdesigner · 05-05-2005, 03:04 PM

make it stonger and more brief...and remove orange shadow, make new york tog with kinf of grotesk font ... (grotesk is font without serif..like arial or verdana). Success..

thumbdesigner · 05-05-2005, 03:05 PM

sorry new york tag is grotesk ..heh..

oberheimer · 05-06-2005, 03:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by thumbdesigner

make it stonger and more brief...and remove orange shadow, make new york tog with kinf of grotesk font ... (grotesk is font without serif..like arial or verdana). Success..

This is a sans serif, but im going to do some more work on it. I defenently don't need a designer for this because i have done alot of work before and as i said i made the logo quick so...

05-05-2005, 09:05 AM	#1
oberheimer So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: sweden Posts: 791	new logo for tog.com, what do you think (clothing brand) What do you think about my new logo for tog.com (clothing brand) I know i need to do some more work on it, but i thought i needed some feedback first

05-05-2005, 09:50 AM	#4
thediablo Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 630	dosen'y look like a clothing brand logo. dont like the font u using and sup with the shield? you should only focus on the font for this. go with TOG and something simple around it... thats what stays. :D __________________ Webdesign, Custom Wordpress Designs, Programming... you name it. ICQ: 19730496

05-05-2005, 09:51 AM	#5
sickkittens I am a meat popsicle. Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 25,100	I don't like it. Sorry. __________________ HIGHEST PAYOUTS FOR NO-CONSOLE TOURS IN THE ENTIRE INDUSTRY! THIS SIG CAN BE YOURS FOR $200 - ICQ: 78881543

05-05-2005, 09:56 AM	#6
Nysus Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 7,817	I'm never harsh, but it's pretty horrible. I imagine TOG is going to be a high-end brand if you're using a shield? Put money into a good logo.. Make a contest on GFY for $250-$500; show some pictures of the clothing and where the logos will go, the size of them, and what kind of feel and what kind of clients you want to target / attract... and then let designers show you their contest entries.. And honestly you should offer $500 because you'll get a lot more entries to chose from, and you're likely investing a fair amount, so $500 for the company logo / branding of the company name, is definitely worth it. Good luck.. Matt __________________ What name is pr0 / Untouched Markets using these days? Untouched Markets - pr0 - Refund My Money Now Someone owes me $2,000 because they didn't do any work that was paid for pointing at pr0 / William / UntouchedMarkets See https://gfy.com/fucking-around-and-business-discussion/948258-untouchedmarkets-pr0-refund-money-post16744521.html and for more detailed see https://gfy.com/fucking-around-and-business-discussion/948645-re-recent-bullshit-drama-explained-detail-pr0-untouched-markets.html

05-05-2005, 10:00 AM	#7
Nysus Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 7,817	I'd also call it TOG New York or TOG NY though togny.com is taken. Matt __________________ What name is pr0 / Untouched Markets using these days? Untouched Markets - pr0 - Refund My Money Now Someone owes me $2,000 because they didn't do any work that was paid for pointing at pr0 / William / UntouchedMarkets See https://gfy.com/fucking-around-and-business-discussion/948258-untouchedmarkets-pr0-refund-money-post16744521.html and for more detailed see https://gfy.com/fucking-around-and-business-discussion/948645-re-recent-bullshit-drama-explained-detail-pr0-untouched-markets.html

05-05-2005, 09:44 AM	#2
CynthiaB Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The OC Posts: 1,274	I don't get the shield, it doesn't seem to fit with the logo. Not sure what its supposed to be. Cyn

05-05-2005, 09:48 AM	#3
Trax [----------------------] Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 14,486	looks cheap and weakly done

05-05-2005, 10:02 AM	#8
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05-05-2005, 10:06 AM	#9
Nysus Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 7,817	Think someone may have. Matt __________________ What name is pr0 / Untouched Markets using these days? Untouched Markets - pr0 - Refund My Money Now Someone owes me $2,000 because they didn't do any work that was paid for pointing at pr0 / William / UntouchedMarkets See https://gfy.com/fucking-around-and-business-discussion/948258-untouchedmarkets-pr0-refund-money-post16744521.html and for more detailed see https://gfy.com/fucking-around-and-business-discussion/948645-re-recent-bullshit-drama-explained-detail-pr0-untouched-markets.html

05-05-2005, 10:17 AM	#10
sickkittens I am a meat popsicle. Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 25,100	you can actualy get a decent design made up fairly cheap at designoutpost. __________________ HIGHEST PAYOUTS FOR NO-CONSOLE TOURS IN THE ENTIRE INDUSTRY! THIS SIG CAN BE YOURS FOR $200 - ICQ: 78881543

05-05-2005, 11:38 AM	#11
oberheimer So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: sweden Posts: 791	I just made the logo in a few minutes. I know i should do more work on in and i own tog.com I just needed some feedback

05-05-2005, 11:59 AM	#15
Kapitan Ivanov II Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 763	Pathetic. __________________ Ivanov - The Original Russian Board Guy

05-05-2005, 03:04 PM	#16
thumbdesigner Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Europe Posts: 1,070	make it stonger and more brief...and remove orange shadow, make new york tog with kinf of grotesk font ... (grotesk is font without serif..like arial or verdana). Success.. __________________ ICQ: 342 - 571 - 754 OR MSN: thumbdesigner(@hotmail.com)

05-05-2005, 03:05 PM	#17
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