Think I Got too WORDY on this promo gallery? - GoFuckYourself.com

Donny · 03-21-2005, 11:15 PM

I guess I'll find out. This is tomorrow's "gallery of the day":

http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...7/karma032205/

Donny · 03-21-2005, 11:29 PM

Guess so...

Sly · 03-21-2005, 11:30 PM

Once again, I read the whole thing.

Babagirls · 03-21-2005, 11:31 PM

lol just a little ;)

Donny · 03-21-2005, 11:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sly

Once again, I read the whole thing.

I figure if a surfer reads that entire thing I have a higher chance of getting a join out of them. We'll see what happens.

emthree · 03-22-2005, 02:49 AM

Leave a reason for the surfer to read ... add some pictorials and images on the way down.

reynold · 03-22-2005, 02:52 AM

It's wordy alright.

xclusive · 03-22-2005, 02:55 AM

Hey it's always good to try new things good job

PHPdude · 03-22-2005, 03:36 AM

that's way too wordy indeed

Mefo · 03-22-2005, 04:05 AM

might try to add some pics at the bottom

V_RocKs · 03-22-2005, 05:20 AM

Right after the barn I got tired... and I wouldn't tell people she just blows their money in 1 day... I thought 4 to 5 would be acceptable.

BVF · 03-22-2005, 05:32 AM

All of my galleries are wordy. They're good for search engines.

Donny · 03-22-2005, 11:55 AM

I think I will add some more pics throughout the story. Good idea.

sickkittens · 03-22-2005, 11:58 AM

Maybe bold some of the words and change some to red?

iwantchixx · 03-22-2005, 12:01 PM

wow

yeah, definately add more pics if your going to make them read that novel lol

DateDoc · 03-22-2005, 12:10 PM

Why not include the pics withing the text? So they are reading and get a visual at the same time.

corvette · 03-22-2005, 12:17 PM

a day in the life of donny and karma

pornguy · 03-22-2005, 12:19 PM

Looks like it may be a bit much, but the SE's will love it.

Donny · 03-22-2005, 01:00 PM

Which one do you think I should use?

http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...7/karma032205/

or

http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...05/index2.html

AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE · 03-22-2005, 01:18 PM

EHhe ya got kinda carried away with the text I think.

Remember its the Photo and Video content they want.

Donny · 03-22-2005, 01:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DonovanPhillips

Which one do you think I should use?

http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...7/karma032205/

or

http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...05/index2.html

I chose the "index2" version. Changed it to the main index. The second one doesn't exist anymore.

DateDoc · 03-22-2005, 01:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DonovanPhillips

I chose the "index2" version. Changed it to the main index. The second one doesn't exist anymore.

Good choice!

03-21-2005, 11:15 PM	#1
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03-21-2005, 11:29 PM	#2
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