Think I Got too WORDY on this promo gallery?
 

I guess I'll find out. This is tomorrow's "gallery of the day":

http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...7/karma032205/

Guess so...

Once again, I read the whole thing.

lol just a little ;)

I figure if a surfer reads that entire thing I have a higher chance of getting a join out of them. We'll see what happens. :)

Leave a reason for the surfer to read ... add some pictorials and images on the way down.

It's wordy alright. :1orglaugh

Hey it's always good to try new things good job

that's way too wordy indeed

might try to add some pics at the bottom

Right after the barn I got tired... and I wouldn't tell people she just blows their money in 1 day... I thought 4 to 5 would be acceptable.

All of my galleries are wordy. They're good for search engines.

I think I will add some more pics throughout the story. Good idea.

Maybe bold some of the words and change some to red?

wow

yeah, definately add more pics if your going to make them read that novel lol

Why not include the pics withing the text? So they are reading and get a visual at the same time. :2 cents:

a day in the life of donny and karma

Looks like it may be a bit much, but the SE's will love it.

Which one do you think I should use?

http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...7/karma032205/

or

http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...05/index2.html

EHhe ya got kinda carried away with the text I think.

Remember its the Photo and Video content they want.

I chose the "index2" version. Changed it to the main index. The second one doesn't exist anymore.

Good choice! :thumbsup