Rate my design please. (my first one, pop my cherry for me) - GoFuckYourself.com

Paraskass · 03-20-2005, 08:48 PM

Tell me what you think.

The whole page you see there will be split into 3 tour pages. I will be adding updates as I update the site. This is for a AVS.

My work is not done. I will be adding text to the tables and also some clear join links and continue tour buttons.... I also have to add some pages to help the stuff sell, what you get when you signup etc... and I have to make a join page.

Anyways, pop my cherry and give me advice. (I already know it's the same girl up top. I'm going to have that changed.)

THANKS!

http://blacksexland.com/AVP/

Young · 03-20-2005, 08:51 PM

call me old school. but i like it when the girls pic (face, full body shot) is the main pic. you have a different idea though...just might take time for surfers to get used to.

everything else looks good. nice clean design.

pornguy · 03-20-2005, 08:52 PM

If you really want to know. Start over. Every site out there has that basic design. The one large photo, with 3 or 4 , and a link to a video. Come up with something new. There has to be some idea in your mind, that you have just never tried.

NickPapageorgio · 03-20-2005, 08:52 PM

The text is a bit hard to read. Maybe a wider font?

foxxx · 03-20-2005, 08:59 PM

slow and poor

Paraskass · 03-20-2005, 09:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pornguy

If you really want to know. Start over. Every site out there has that basic design. The one large photo, with 3 or 4 , and a link to a video. Come up with something new. There has to be some idea in your mind, that you have just never tried.

TV ruined my imagination.

Paraskass · 03-20-2005, 09:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by foxxx

slow and poor

slow: won't be hosted there.

poor: any tips and pointers?

03-20-2005, 08:48 PM	#1
Paraskass Confirmed User Join Date: May 2002 Location: QC Posts: 5,829	Rate my design please. (my first one, pop my cherry for me) Tell me what you think. The whole page you see there will be split into 3 tour pages. I will be adding updates as I update the site. This is for a AVS. My work is not done. I will be adding text to the tables and also some clear join links and continue tour buttons.... I also have to add some pages to help the stuff sell, what you get when you signup etc... and I have to make a join page. Anyways, pop my cherry and give me advice. (I already know it's the same girl up top. I'm going to have that changed.) THANKS! http://blacksexland.com/AVP/ __________________

03-20-2005, 08:51 PM	#2
Young Bland for life Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,468	call me old school. but i like it when the girls pic (face, full body shot) is the main pic. you have a different idea though...just might take time for surfers to get used to. everything else looks good. nice clean design. __________________ ★★★

03-20-2005, 08:52 PM	#3
pornguy Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Homeless Posts: 62,911	If you really want to know. Start over. Every site out there has that basic design. The one large photo, with 3 or 4 , and a link to a video. Come up with something new. There has to be some idea in your mind, that you have just never tried. __________________ PornGuy skype me pornguy_epic AmateurDough The Hottes Shemales online! TChicks.com \| Angeles Cid \| Mariana Cordoba \| MAILERS WELCOME!

03-20-2005, 08:52 PM	#4
NickPapageorgio Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: NC Posts: 8,323	The text is a bit hard to read. Maybe a wider font? __________________

03-20-2005, 08:59 PM	#5
foxxx Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Gold Coast, Australia Posts: 573	slow and poor