Rate my design please. (my first one, pop my cherry for me)
 

Tell me what you think.

The whole page you see there will be split into 3 tour pages. I will be adding updates as I update the site. This is for a AVS.

My work is not done. I will be adding text to the tables and also some clear join links and continue tour buttons.... I also have to add some pages to help the stuff sell, what you get when you signup etc... and I have to make a join page.

Anyways, pop my cherry and give me advice. (I already know it's the same girl up top. I'm going to have that changed.)

THANKS!

http://blacksexland.com/AVP/

call me old school. but i like it when the girls pic (face, full body shot) is the main pic. you have a different idea though...just might take time for surfers to get used to.

everything else looks good. nice clean design.

If you really want to know. Start over. Every site out there has that basic design. The one large photo, with 3 or 4 , and a link to a video. Come up with something new. There has to be some idea in your mind, that you have just never tried.

The text is a bit hard to read. Maybe a wider font?

slow and poor

TV ruined my imagination.

slow: won't be hosted there.

poor: any tips and pointers?