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Paul Markham · 03-07-2005, 07:27 AM

Let me know if there are any bugs or problems with it.

http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/freetour/

Also if you have any comments fell free to make them.

Johny Traffic · 03-07-2005, 07:48 AM

Hi Charley

Its got the makings of a decent tour. I like the black board and the lined paper and the hand writen heading etc. But there is some stuff letting it down. Like about half way down there is a really horrible flash banner, that doesnt fit in your design at all. Then just below the nasty banner is a nice bit again. With the writing paper etc. But the heading again is like the nastiest font I have seen and again doesnt fit in with the tour.

The tour looks like it has been done by two designers. The first one started a nice looking design, very relevent to your niche and after he finished you then let someone else who didnt have a clue finish it off.

Pages two and three and infact the rest of the tour follow this same rule. Really nice designed profiles then the nasty flash banner rears its ugly head again

LadyMischief · 03-07-2005, 07:59 AM

Too much variation on design.. doesn't flow together as one piece. Looks like patchwork. The concept is good, but the eye gets distracted by TOO much color and information being presented at once. A good start.

Paul Markham · 03-07-2005, 08:01 AM

Thanks for that.

Good point about the Flash banner, will try the tour for a few days with and without and see if it effects sign ups, got to think it will not. The surfer is looking for girls not banners.

Good poing about the type, but do you meant the girls names or the flashing "Click on one of the thumbs" part?

Johny Traffic · 03-07-2005, 08:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by charly

Good poing about the type, but do you meant the girls names or the flashing "Click on one of the thumbs" part?

The horrible fury type "click on the thumbs...." the nadwriten stuff is nice on the writing paper. You have a nice theme there, just loose the other stuff that was added later and that doesnt fit in the tour and youll have a nice tour in my opinion

Dalai lama · 03-07-2005, 08:17 AM

There are too much tour pages charly, keep it too 1 maximum. 1 enter and 1 tour, nothing more.

Give it a try

Paul Markham · 03-07-2005, 10:26 AM

Thanks guys, I will try it without the banner in a few days and see what difference it makes.

GotGauge · 03-07-2005, 11:33 AM

URL: http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/freetour/
Total Page Size: 673351 bytes
Total Graphics: 651334 bytes - 125 images

14.4Kbps 376.08 seconds
28.8Kbps 189.04 seconds
56Kbps 97.17 seconds
ISDN (128Kbps) 44.08 seconds
Cable (512 Kbps) 12.52 seconds
T1 (1.44 Mbps) 5.74 seconds
SDSL (1.544 Mbps) 5.49 seconds
ADSL (2.0 Mbps) 4.69 seconds

MandyBlake · 03-07-2005, 11:38 AM

looks good to me.
i didn't see any spelling errors in the quick scan i did of it and those are the things that usually stand out for me.
i like the look of it.
very cool.

Minte · 03-07-2005, 11:55 AM

Only thing I noticed was that the signup page doesn't load for me.

http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/payment/index.php

beemk · 03-07-2005, 12:03 PM

i dont think its very good

Paul Markham · 03-07-2005, 10:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Minte

Only thing I noticed was that the signup page doesn't load for me.

http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/payment/index.php

Loads for me, what browser are you using?

As for size that is a good point. but I believe squeezing it down will reduce the impact of the pages. So it's a balancing act.

Maybe get rid of the banner.

JakeR · 03-07-2005, 10:34 PM

FOR THE LAST 27 YEARS I'VE BEEN SHOOTING PORN FOR A LIVING AND TOMORROW I'LL STILL BE AT IT. I DO TEEN PORN AND PUBLISHED IN ALL MAJOR TEEN PORN MAGAZINES AND I DO PORN MOVIES.

DOING IT 27 YEARS IS TOUGH, YOU HAVE TO SHOOT WHAT PEOPLE WANT, CHANGE WITH THE TIME AND FIND GREAT GIRLS. SO YOU CAN BE SURE I'VE GOT WHAT YOU WANT INSIDE MY SITE.

did a 7th grader type that out?

Shooting_Manic · 03-07-2005, 10:35 PM

http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/freetour/tour1.htm

Kate makes me really horny! Nice Girl!

Paul Markham · 03-07-2005, 10:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JakeR

FOR THE LAST 27 YEARS I'VE BEEN SHOOTING PORN FOR A LIVING AND TOMORROW I'LL STILL BE AT IT. I DO TEEN PORN AND PUBLISHED IN ALL MAJOR TEEN PORN MAGAZINES AND I DO PORN MOVIES.

DOING IT 27 YEARS IS TOUGH, YOU HAVE TO SHOOT WHAT PEOPLE WANT, CHANGE WITH THE TIME AND FIND GREAT GIRLS. SO YOU CAN BE SURE I'VE GOT WHAT YOU WANT INSIDE MY SITE.

did a 7th grader type that out?

No I did and I'm selling to a guy with his dick in his hand, doubt if he's going to be marking me for English composition.

Paul Markham · 03-07-2005, 11:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shooting_Manic

http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/freetour/tour1.htm

Kate makes me really horny! Nice Girl!

What I tried to do on the tour is present a range of the girls we have. I kept to the good ones of course.

The new tour seems to be working as sign ups are up over the old tour, however I'm still looking to improve it and will see if I can get it working better. But I will launch the affiliate system very soon.

Still need a text writer for the other tour, had people contact me and they all never came back. Maybe I put them off.

James White · 03-07-2005, 11:43 PM

The main theme is good, but it needs to tone down and stick to one direction.. too much change in colors and style.

Paul Markham · 03-07-2005, 11:49 PM

Just looked at thwe stats very closely and from what I can see this tour is doing already 100% better than the previous one.

With very little traffic the site seems to be converting nicely, in fact in the last few days we had 1200 unique visits to this page Tour start and 24 sign ups.

But I think those figures are inflated because the weekend was very good for sign ups. Checked all the IP addresses of the sign ups and the email addresses and nothing seems out of place.

What will be interesting is to see what happens with a week of this new tour.

But I thinkit's good enough to launch the affiliate program.

baddog · 03-07-2005, 11:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by charly

No I did and I'm selling to a guy with his dick in his hand, doubt if he's going to be marking me for English composition.

good excuse

slipkid · 03-07-2005, 11:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by charly

Just looked at thwe stats very closely and from what I can see this tour is doing already 100% better than the previous one.

With very little traffic the site seems to be converting nicely, in fact in the last few days we had 1200 unique visits to this page Tour start and 24 sign ups.

But I think those figures are inflated because the weekend was very good for sign ups. Checked all the IP addresses of the sign ups and the email addresses and nothing seems out of place.

What will be interesting is to see what happens with a week of this new tour.

But I thinkit's good enough to launch the affiliate program.

Nice start. Looks good to me, lots of faces = lots of content = $$$

dirtydesignz · 03-08-2005, 12:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by charly

Let me know if there are any bugs or problems with it.

http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/freetour/

Also if you have any comments fell free to make them.

Just wondering who did your design work?

webcrawler · 03-08-2005, 12:45 AM

You have 4 tour pages there. At least 2 will do.

Paul Markham · 03-08-2005, 12:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JakeR

FOR THE LAST 27 YEARS I'VE BEEN SHOOTING PORN FOR A LIVING AND TOMORROW I'LL STILL BE AT IT. I DO TEEN PORN AND PUBLISHED IN ALL MAJOR TEEN PORN MAGAZINES AND I DO PORN MOVIES.

DOING IT 27 YEARS IS TOUGH, YOU HAVE TO SHOOT WHAT PEOPLE WANT, CHANGE WITH THE TIME AND FIND GREAT GIRLS. SO YOU CAN BE SURE I'VE GOT WHAT YOU WANT INSIDE MY SITE.

did a 7th grader type that out?

the other problem I had was getting people to write script/text for our other tour. had people contact me, some were worse than me and others did not follow it up. But I will look at the text on the banner.

reynold · 03-08-2005, 02:23 AM

Love the site. The color is fine but there's always room for improvement.

spideriux · 03-08-2005, 10:47 AM

looks good for me too

Fletch XXX · 03-08-2005, 10:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by charly

the other problem I had was getting people to write script/text for our other tour. had people contact me, some were worse than me and others did not follow it up. But I will look at the text on the banner.

charly you dont know how to write english text?

i thought you were English?

Fletch XXX · 03-08-2005, 10:49 AM

we can do your text

http://www.overmindesign.com

;)

03-07-2005, 07:27 AM	#1
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03-07-2005, 07:48 AM	#2
Johny Traffic Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 5,461	Hi Charley Its got the makings of a decent tour. I like the black board and the lined paper and the hand writen heading etc. But there is some stuff letting it down. Like about half way down there is a really horrible flash banner, that doesnt fit in your design at all. Then just below the nasty banner is a nice bit again. With the writing paper etc. But the heading again is like the nastiest font I have seen and again doesnt fit in with the tour. The tour looks like it has been done by two designers. The first one started a nice looking design, very relevent to your niche and after he finished you then let someone else who didnt have a clue finish it off. Pages two and three and infact the rest of the tour follow this same rule. Really nice designed profiles then the nasty flash banner rears its ugly head again __________________ hosted flv's, hosted galleries, morphing rss feeds, free content, free sites, hosted blog

03-07-2005, 07:59 AM	#3
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03-07-2005, 08:01 AM	#4
Paul Markham Too old to care Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: On the sofa, watching TV or doing my jigsaws. Posts: 52,943	Thanks for that. Good point about the Flash banner, will try the tour for a few days with and without and see if it effects sign ups, got to think it will not. The surfer is looking for girls not banners. Good poing about the type, but do you meant the girls names or the flashing "Click on one of the thumbs" part? __________________ Blowout deal. 880 videos, 2,400 image sets, plus many RAW videos. $500. PM me for a deal. Skype Paulmarkham70

03-07-2005, 08:17 AM	#6
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03-07-2005, 10:26 AM	#7
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03-07-2005, 11:33 AM	#8
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03-07-2005, 11:38 AM	#9
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03-07-2005, 11:55 AM	#10
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03-07-2005, 10:34 PM	#13
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03-07-2005, 10:35 PM	#14
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03-07-2005, 11:49 PM	#18
Paul Markham Too old to care Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: On the sofa, watching TV or doing my jigsaws. Posts: 52,943	Just looked at thwe stats very closely and from what I can see this tour is doing already 100% better than the previous one. With very little traffic the site seems to be converting nicely, in fact in the last few days we had 1200 unique visits to this page Tour start and 24 sign ups. But I think those figures are inflated because the weekend was very good for sign ups. Checked all the IP addresses of the sign ups and the email addresses and nothing seems out of place. What will be interesting is to see what happens with a week of this new tour. But I thinkit's good enough to launch the affiliate program. __________________ Blowout deal. 880 videos, 2,400 image sets, plus many RAW videos. $500. PM me for a deal. Skype Paulmarkham70

03-08-2005, 12:45 AM	#22
webcrawler Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: ICQ .:. 286608143 Posts: 2,692	You have 4 tour pages there. At least 2 will do.

03-08-2005, 02:23 AM	#24
reynold Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Global Traveler Posts: 51,271	Love the site. The color is fine but there's always room for improvement.

03-08-2005, 10:47 AM	#25
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