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Hi Charley
Its got the makings of a decent tour. I like the black board and the lined paper and the hand writen heading etc. But there is some stuff letting it down. Like about half way down there is a really horrible flash banner, that doesnt fit in your design at all. Then just below the nasty banner is a nice bit again. With the writing paper etc. But the heading again is like the nastiest font I have seen and again doesnt fit in with the tour.
The tour looks like it has been done by two designers. The first one started a nice looking design, very relevent to your niche and after he finished you then let someone else who didnt have a clue finish it off.
Pages two and three and infact the rest of the tour follow this same rule. Really nice designed profiles then the nasty flash banner rears its ugly head again
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