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P-K · 12-20-2004, 06:49 PM

Hey guys, I know this is not the board for such posts but I was wondering if any of you, especially if you own a company and are in charge of hiring people can help me tweak my resume.

I've been applying for jobs lately and getting no feedback. I had some guy take a look at it and have been told it's too "dry".

Any way I can edit up this resume to make it stand out more and make it a winner? Thanks for anyone who can help out!

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EDUCATION

College Name
B.S. Computer Information Systems
GPA: 3.26/4.0

COMPUTER KNOWLEDGE

Systems: Windows (XP, 2000, NT, 9x, ME), Windows 2000 Server, DOS
Applications: Microsoft Office, FrontPage, Adobe Photoshop, Ace FTP
Languages: HTML, CSS, JavaScript, RSS

WORK EXPERIENCE

Web Developer October, 2003 ? August 2004
?Developed and maintained a successful e-commerce business using a variety of web development software while remaining vigilant in my pursuit of a college education; which focused primarily on e-commerce marketing relative to generating online exposure and revenue.

Content Manager
Meds Inc Solutions August, 2003 ? April 2004
? Oversaw and implemented content solutions across several different Internet properties while managing complex projects within deadlines.

Microsoft Access Database Designer
Suburban Health Care; City, State June, 2003 ? Oct, 2003
?Successfully designed a fully functioning database to keep track of client records on a Windows XP/2000 platform using Microsoft Access and Adobe Photoshop.

Pharmacist Assistant
Pharmacy Name, City, State September, 1999 - 2002
? Assisted the pharmacist(s) by providing customer support (taking phone calls and prescription orders).
? Maintained and organized customer records on file.
? Provided help with counting and packing medicine for clients and nursing homes.

SPECIAL SKILLS & INTERESTS

? Proficient at Search Engine Optimization (SEO) for major search engines including Google, Yahoo, MSN, Altavista (3 Years Experience)
? Web Design and Site Traffic analysis (5 years experience)
? Typing Skills: 108 WPM
? Internet Sales Skills
? Website Marketing Techniques
? Fluent in Russian Language

References will be furnished upon request

European Lee · 12-20-2004, 07:28 PM

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EDUCATION

College Name
B.S. Computer Information Systems
GPA: 3.26/4.0

COMPUTER KNOWLEDGE

A strong candidate who is computer literate, i am able to use a wide reach of computer systems including, but not limited to th following: Windows (XP, 2000, NT, 9x, ME) and, Windows 2000 Server.

In addition i am proficient in the use of the following applications and have demonstrated on a regulalr basis my ability to utilize these programs to create a variety of documents in a range of formats for past and current clients, Microsoft Office, FrontPage, Adobe Photoshop, Ace FTP.

I am also fluent in the following programming languages which i have used on a daily basis for the last [X amount of years] HTML, CSS, JavaScript, RSS whilst keeping up to date with the latest technological advances and am constantly looking to furter my understanding of alternative programming languages.

WORK EXPERIENCE

Web Developer - October, 2003 ? August 2004

- My main role whilst employed by [nsert company name here] was to develop, initiate and, oversee the implementation of several aspects of a large ecommerce orientated business.

- I gained hands on experience in a wide reach of ecommerce related applications, programming languages and software packages to a level of understanding that allowed me to complete assigned tasks within the alloted time frames.

- I implemented marketing campaign for the ecommerce sites through utilizing my knowlege of the search engine SERPs and a variety of cross marketing techniques, including, but not limited to, affiliate aquisitions, highly targeted advertising campaigns and a mixture of other protocols in order to drive vistors to the companies online commerce properties which resulted in constant increases in revenue for the company over a sustained period of time.

Content Manager - August, 2003 ? April 2004

- Oversaw and implemented content solutions across several different ecommerce properties while managing multiple complex projects within alloted deadlines.

- Was involved in the development and deployment of a wide reach of content types from multifuntional plugins through to gneric static based web server content.

Microsoft Access Database Designer - June, 2003 ? Oct, 2003

- Developed and implemented a programming application that would allow the company to mainstain a large client management list on a variety of platforms including Windows.

SPECIAL SKILLS & INTERESTS

- Have a strong interest in continuing my education of developing and implementing traffic generation techniques ranging from cross promotional opportunities through to utilizing search enine algorythms to attract new levels of site visitors.

- I have a keen eye for design and am able to work un-assisted for lengthy periods of time.

- I am keen to utilize my understanding of foregn languages, specifically Russian in order to further my career development.

References will be furnished upon request

Basically, just expand on what you have and use power words to drive home the message that you are fully capable of the tasks you have been assigned and that you are eager to continually develop your understanding of new technologies.

Thats the best i could come up with at such short notice but im sure youll agree it sounds a lot more interesting than what you had to start with ;)

When we hire individuals as a company my main focus when looking of resumes is to see firstly, how well written the individual is, followed by the basic skill sets they have available. If you can peak my interest in a specific topic or, make me look at it twice, the chances are you will be the one who gets a follow-up instead of a person who just sends me a resume full of generic information.

Regards,

Lee

European Lee · 12-20-2004, 07:38 PM

Oh and one other thing.

When we get a resume sent to us, if it doesnt have at least 3 pages of information and a coversheet, it doesnt even get looked at.

If it has more than 4 pages in total [including the coversheet] it doesnt get looked at either.

To few pages = Not enough experience.

To many pages = Not able to hold a job down for longer than a year.

Regards,

Lee

chase · 12-20-2004, 08:12 PM

Good pointers, Lee. (We seem to be on the same wavelength with advice today.)
Words like "dynamic"...."discovered"...."rejuvinated"..."repl enished"
(not necessarily THOSE words, just those types of exciting, energy driven words) will give your resume some oomph, too.

SureFire · 12-20-2004, 08:34 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by European Lee
Oh and one other thing.

When we get a resume sent to us, if it doesnt have at least 3 pages of information and a coversheet, it doesnt even get looked at.

If it has more than 4 pages in total [including the coversheet] it doesnt get looked at either.

To few pages = Not enough experience.

To many pages = Not able to hold a job down for longer than a year.

Regards,

Lee

A cover letter and a one page resume is the norm for HR firms unless a CV is submitted two pages.

Seems like the poster, is right out of college or still attending since no date is mentioned. Also, no objective is given. GPA should not be mentioned unless it is over 3.5. He/she should state where he saved or made the company money. References available is a waste, because it is a given.

Otherwise, you added lots of bs that is good.

gigi · 12-20-2004, 09:35 PM

I agree. Employers don't want to have to read a book to get to the qualifications. 1 cover and 1 (MAX 2) page resume is all that's needed.

I'd also use point form alot more in the experience section....Short, sweet and to the point is best.

Thoughts:

Web Developer AND MARKETER - October, 2003 ? August 2004

* where is the company name? it should be at the top. Also, the description you've put is more than just web development, it's also web marketing.

- My main role whilst employed by [nsert company name here] was to develop, initiate and, oversee the implementation of several aspects of a large ecommerce orientated business.

* this is all fluff and basically says you are a web developer...get rid of it. You explain your job in more detail below.

- I gained hands on experience in a wide reach of ecommerce related applications, programming languages and software packages to a level of understanding that allowed me to complete assigned tasks within the alloted time frames.

* What applications, programs and software? Be specific. Get rid of the 'complete assigned tasks within the alloted time frame' part.

- I implemented marketing campaign for the ecommerce sites through utilizing my knowlege of the search engine SERPs and a variety of cross marketing techniques, including, but not limited to, affiliate aquisitions, highly targeted advertising campaigns and a mixture of other protocols in order to drive vistors to the companies online commerce properties which resulted in constant increases in revenue for the company over a sustained period of time.

* be more point blank here. Instead of a huge paragraph, give your marketing strategies in point form...

ie:
* development of an ecommerce based website using html, CGI, Java, CSS, mySQL yadda yadda
* search engine optimization
* creating and maintaining affiliate program
* recruiting affiliates
* email marketing
*etc

Point form is where it's at as far as resumes are concerned. When I hire, I don't want to read paragraph upon paragraph in order to figure out your skills. Tell me with short and sweet points.

Education should be BELOW Experience, not above. And, yes, definitely include an Objective at the top.

Do a search on google for 'resume templates' and you'll find a bunch that cater to today's employer desires.

Good luck.

P-K · 12-21-2004, 09:17 PM

Guys thanks a lot for your advice, much appreciated.

Can't believe I actually got some serious responses in return.

Illicit · 12-21-2004, 09:31 PM

Warwick, RI ? Small world... I work in West Warwick near the Showcase...

P-K · 12-21-2004, 09:48 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ajpiii
Warwick, RI ? Small world... I work in West Warwick near the Showcase...

oh wow... I lived 5min from showcase there, I got done with school and just moved back to Mass

what kind of sites do ya run?

Violetta · 12-21-2004, 09:53 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by P-K

I've been applying for jobs lately and getting no feedback. I had some guy take a look at it and have been told it's too "dry".

Getting no feedback? Well... the advice we got, was to call them and ask how things went. That shows that you are interested, and got some guts and it also shows that you really want the job. Perhaps the guy that are supposed to hire people, just are really buzy with other stuff...

Pick up the phone mate...

12-20-2004, 06:49 PM	#1
P-K Confirmed User Join Date: May 2001 Location: Boston, MA Posts: 328	Help me with my Resume! Hey guys, I know this is not the board for such posts but I was wondering if any of you, especially if you own a company and are in charge of hiring people can help me tweak my resume. I've been applying for jobs lately and getting no feedback. I had some guy take a look at it and have been told it's too "dry". Any way I can edit up this resume to make it stand out more and make it a winner? Thanks for anyone who can help out! ------------------------------------------------------------- EDUCATION College Name B.S. Computer Information Systems GPA: 3.26/4.0 COMPUTER KNOWLEDGE Systems: Windows (XP, 2000, NT, 9x, ME), Windows 2000 Server, DOS Applications: Microsoft Office, FrontPage, Adobe Photoshop, Ace FTP Languages: HTML, CSS, JavaScript, RSS WORK EXPERIENCE Web Developer October, 2003 ? August 2004 ?Developed and maintained a successful e-commerce business using a variety of web development software while remaining vigilant in my pursuit of a college education; which focused primarily on e-commerce marketing relative to generating online exposure and revenue. Content Manager Meds Inc Solutions August, 2003 ? April 2004 ? Oversaw and implemented content solutions across several different Internet properties while managing complex projects within deadlines. Microsoft Access Database Designer Suburban Health Care; City, State June, 2003 ? Oct, 2003 ?Successfully designed a fully functioning database to keep track of client records on a Windows XP/2000 platform using Microsoft Access and Adobe Photoshop. Pharmacist Assistant Pharmacy Name, City, State September, 1999 - 2002 ? Assisted the pharmacist(s) by providing customer support (taking phone calls and prescription orders). ? Maintained and organized customer records on file. ? Provided help with counting and packing medicine for clients and nursing homes. SPECIAL SKILLS & INTERESTS ? Proficient at Search Engine Optimization (SEO) for major search engines including Google, Yahoo, MSN, Altavista (3 Years Experience) ? Web Design and Site Traffic analysis (5 years experience) ? Typing Skills: 108 WPM ? Internet Sales Skills ? Website Marketing Techniques ? Fluent in Russian Language References will be furnished upon request __________________ Fuck all these other self proclaimed SEO posers. My SEO knowledge delivers real results. Click here to learn more... ICQ: 143661052

12-20-2004, 07:38 PM	#3
European Lee Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Daytona Beach Posts: 7,133	Oh and one other thing. When we get a resume sent to us, if it doesnt have at least 3 pages of information and a coversheet, it doesnt even get looked at. If it has more than 4 pages in total [including the coversheet] it doesnt get looked at either. To few pages = Not enough experience. To many pages = Not able to hold a job down for longer than a year. Regards, Lee __________________ YOUR TRAFFIC IS SAFE WITH US - CONDOM CASH PUTTING THE GAY ADULT INDUSTRY ON YOUR PC!! AFFORDABLE 2257 COMPLIANT GAY + BI CONTENT

12-20-2004, 08:12 PM	#4
chase Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Tampa Bay Posts: 6,019	Good pointers, Lee. (We seem to be on the same wavelength with advice today.) Words like "dynamic"...."discovered"...."rejuvinated"..."repl enished" (not necessarily THOSE words, just those types of exciting, energy driven words) will give your resume some oomph, too. __________________ Need Hosting? Reality Check Network services me purrrfectly!

12-20-2004, 09:35 PM	#6
gigi Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Vancouver, BC, Canada Posts: 691	I agree. Employers don't want to have to read a book to get to the qualifications. 1 cover and 1 (MAX 2) page resume is all that's needed. I'd also use point form alot more in the experience section....Short, sweet and to the point is best. Thoughts: Web Developer AND MARKETER - October, 2003 ? August 2004 * where is the company name? it should be at the top. Also, the description you've put is more than just web development, it's also web marketing. - My main role whilst employed by [nsert company name here] was to develop, initiate and, oversee the implementation of several aspects of a large ecommerce orientated business. * this is all fluff and basically says you are a web developer...get rid of it. You explain your job in more detail below. - I gained hands on experience in a wide reach of ecommerce related applications, programming languages and software packages to a level of understanding that allowed me to complete assigned tasks within the alloted time frames. * What applications, programs and software? Be specific. Get rid of the 'complete assigned tasks within the alloted time frame' part. - I implemented marketing campaign for the ecommerce sites through utilizing my knowlege of the search engine SERPs and a variety of cross marketing techniques, including, but not limited to, affiliate aquisitions, highly targeted advertising campaigns and a mixture of other protocols in order to drive vistors to the companies online commerce properties which resulted in constant increases in revenue for the company over a sustained period of time. * be more point blank here. Instead of a huge paragraph, give your marketing strategies in point form... ie: * development of an ecommerce based website using html, CGI, Java, CSS, mySQL yadda yadda * search engine optimization * creating and maintaining affiliate program * recruiting affiliates * email marketing *etc Point form is where it's at as far as resumes are concerned. When I hire, I don't want to read paragraph upon paragraph in order to figure out your skills. Tell me with short and sweet points. Education should be BELOW Experience, not above. And, yes, definitely include an Objective at the top. Do a search on google for 'resume templates' and you'll find a bunch that cater to today's employer desires. Good luck. __________________ eMail ICQ: 32862272

12-21-2004, 09:17 PM	#7
P-K Confirmed User Join Date: May 2001 Location: Boston, MA Posts: 328	Guys thanks a lot for your advice, much appreciated. Can't believe I actually got some serious responses in return. __________________ Fuck all these other self proclaimed SEO posers. My SEO knowledge delivers real results. Click here to learn more... ICQ: 143661052

12-21-2004, 09:31 PM	#8
Illicit wtf ? Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: GFY Posts: 11,895	Warwick, RI ? Small world... I work in West Warwick near the Showcase... __________________ Insert Sig Here