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Paul Markham · 12-09-2004, 02:21 AM

So we are days away from launching the paysite and I need some input on the TGP pages we are designing.

http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/tgp/tgp-1

Take a look and post your comments.

Would you list these if you had a TGP site?

Would you be happy to get them as FHGs?

What am I doing wrong?

All comments welcomed.

Femme Fa'tale · 12-09-2004, 02:43 AM

...hhmm...too much red...and its kinda sharp...but its nice though...

Quote:

Would you list these if you had a TGP site?

Yes

Do you have any title in mind than "paulmarkhamteens" ? ...too long and not that catchy....

12-09-2004, 02:45 AM

I like the thumbs all 1 universal size... Not switching between vertical and horizontal thumbs. Also, the surfer shouldn't have to scroll down to see the first pics. Let him see the top row of pics at least. I like the design though.

Paul Markham · 12-09-2004, 02:59 AM

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Originally posted by Femme Fa'tale
...hhmm...too much red...and its kinda sharp...but its nice though...

Yes

Do you have any title in mind than "paulmarkhamteens" ? ...too long and not that catchy....

Well if you noticed the site is wrapped around me and my exploits/life, well the fantasy people think I live, so the name is appropriate.

Catchy, like Karups, Alsscan, ATM, I suppose.

Paul Markham · 12-09-2004, 03:05 AM

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Originally posted by shermsshack
I like the thumbs all 1 universal size... Not switching between vertical and horizontal thumbs. Also, the surfer shouldn't have to scroll down to see the first pics. Let him see the top row of pics at least. I like the design though.

We can do galleries with one type of thumb, landscape or portrait.

And moving a few things down the page might give them a better view of the thumbs, thanks.

Paul Markham · 12-09-2004, 03:38 AM

Problem is that by default we have to have one landscape and one portrait picture in every set, will look at it closer though.

BVF · 12-09-2004, 03:48 AM

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Originally posted by charly

Catchy, like Karups, Alsscan, ATM, I suppose.

Yeah but unlike them, you're launching in 2006, not 1996....Think of a catchier name.

My site is based around my adventures with these crackheads but you don't see me calling them "leonscrackheads"

CumSensei · 12-09-2004, 03:48 AM

I like it alot!

coolfuck · 12-09-2004, 03:52 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Femme Fa'tale
...hhmm...too much red...and its kinda sharp...but its nice though...

Yes

Do you have any title in mind than "paulmarkhamteens" ? ...too long and not that catchy....

that what i think too

Paul Markham · 12-09-2004, 03:57 AM

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Originally posted by BVF
Yeah but unlike them, you're launching in 2006, not 1996....Think of a catchier name.

My site is based around my adventures with these crackheads but you don't see me calling them "leonscrackheads"

The name Paul Markham has been appearing in magazines for decades and I'm thinking along the lines of giving sets to magazines to promote my site, will make it better if it has my name with it.

The next site is www.bestteeny.com might just do a front page and TGPs and see which ones soak up the best traffic.

Paul Markham · 12-09-2004, 05:09 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by shermsshack
I like the thumbs all 1 universal size... Not switching between vertical and horizontal thumbs. Also, the surfer shouldn't have to scroll down to see the first pics. Let him see the top row of pics at least. I like the design though.

Just had a thought about this and how it relates to the surfer.

By showing both landscape and portrait pictures doesn't this show the surfer the range and scope of the content?

What's your thoughts?

Paul Markham · 12-09-2004, 06:28 AM

LadyMischief · 12-09-2004, 06:40 AM

Why bother starting a thread asking for advice when you already know all the answers? This isn't magazines, Paul, and the teen niche marketing to SURFERS instead of WEBMASTERS is far different than what you seem to think you know so well.

Good luck with it though, when you are actually ready to HEAR some advice, hit me up :P

devilspost · 12-09-2004, 06:40 AM

surfers dont give a fuck about your name and will click out when they dont see thumbs. but I like it more free porn yo!

plyndrty · 12-09-2004, 06:49 AM

When you mouse over the thumbs "test" appears. I would get rid of that. But other than that I think it's just fine.

Shoehorn! · 12-09-2004, 06:53 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by charly
So we are days away from launching the paysite and I need some input on the TGP pages we are designing.

http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/tgp/tgp-1

Take a look and post your comments.

Would you list these if you had a TGP site?

Would you be happy to get them as FHGs?

What am I doing wrong?

All comments welcomed.

Looks like a lot of wasted space to me. I also don't think 98% of surfers cruising TGP galleries are going to read any of all that writing.

BVF · 12-09-2004, 06:57 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by charly
The name Paul Markham has been appearing in magazines for decades

Doesn't matter. I've never heard of you until I came to GFY..And even if I saw your name in a magazine before, I'm not going to remember it because I'm looking at a chick's tits. I couldn't give a rats ass what the photographer's name was.

But do what you do....

Shoehorn! · 12-09-2004, 07:00 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by BVF
Doesn't matter. I've never heard of you until I came to GFY..And even if I saw your name in a magazine before, I'm not going to remember it because I'm looking at a chick's tits. I couldn't give a rats ass what the photographer's name was.

Very true.

Paul Markham · 12-09-2004, 08:31 AM

So other than my name being in the URL and title thare seems to be little wrong, I will cut down the wording though. That was meant to make the whole thing more personal and other people told me to put it in.

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When you mouse over the thumbs "test" appears. I would get rid of that. But other than that I think it's just fine.

I will get rid of that completely. No need for anything to come up.

PantieZ · 12-09-2004, 09:00 AM

sorry , but I don´t like it . The colores and the whole design look very unprofessional ... hire a designer

I wouldn´t join that site if it´s for free .

Double L · 12-09-2004, 09:18 AM

your thread title refers to a tgp and then your msg the galleries... You want comments on the galleries? Or you thinking that your hub style page is going to be a TGP?

Double L · 12-09-2004, 10:18 AM

I'll assume its the galleries because Im leaving in a few...

I wouldn't want them as a FHGs as they are now.

Some ideas on changes for you:

I like text a lot. With that said and no offense meant, but lose the whole Paul shit. These dudes want the chicks referring to them and the whole fantasy that they are going to be working the fresh chick who just figured out her pussy. They don't care about "Paul" or any other dude's name in the text. It has no flow in the gallery. Your top logo... H1 text that's off base except for SE and then some pics and text that jumps to thoughts on you. For a surfer that doesnt know you're basing it on her thoughts on the photo shoot, it's a turn off or loses their attention quick because it doesnt make sense with the flow.

Same goes for your thoughts section on each gallery. A surfer thinks again... "who the fuck is Paul?" And why do they care about his thoughts...

So if you want to go that route you need to brand it clearly that you're coming from the photographer angle and the site is all the hot poontang you've photographed (vs hoping the surfer figures that out). A more horny photographer charley approach. Your logo at the top now with a chick doesn't show any of that approach...

I'm running out of time... Your galleries need some tweaking and your paysite design (imho). Feedback and experimenting is always good though.

Other quick things...

I'd drop your "get membership... more... latest" links to the bottom.

Text like "See the whole set and more of..." should be linked to your paysite.

Your banner at the bottom needs replaced. Content store doesnt cut it and "store" says "spend" to a customer... Let them get hornier before you say "spend".

Agreed that the domain could be bettter. You can brand any name, but currently yours it too long. Not to mention your splash at the top leaves out the m at the end of your name.

just my opinions and 2 cents... take it for what its worth to you.

12-09-2004, 02:21 AM	#1
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LadyMischief Orgasms N Such! Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Oakville, Ontario Posts: 18,135	Why bother starting a thread asking for advice when you already know all the answers? This isn't magazines, Paul, and the teen niche marketing to SURFERS instead of WEBMASTERS is far different than what you seem to think you know so well. Good luck with it though, when you are actually ready to HEAR some advice, hit me up :P __________________ ICQ 3522039 Content Manager - orgasm.com [email protected]

12-09-2004, 02:45 AM	#3
shermo Guest Posts: n/a	I like the thumbs all 1 universal size... Not switching between vertical and horizontal thumbs. Also, the surfer shouldn't have to scroll down to see the first pics. Let him see the top row of pics at least. I like the design though.

12-09-2004, 06:40 AM	#14
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12-09-2004, 09:00 AM	#20
PantieZ Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Panty Land Posts: 1,441	sorry , but I don´t like it . The colores and the whole design look very unprofessional ... hire a designer I wouldn´t join that site if it´s for free .

12-09-2004, 09:18 AM	#21
Double L Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: US Posts: 349	your thread title refers to a tgp and then your msg the galleries... You want comments on the galleries? Or you thinking that your hub style page is going to be a TGP?

12-09-2004, 10:18 AM	#22
Double L Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: US Posts: 349	I'll assume its the galleries because Im leaving in a few... I wouldn't want them as a FHGs as they are now. Some ideas on changes for you: I like text a lot. With that said and no offense meant, but lose the whole Paul shit. These dudes want the chicks referring to them and the whole fantasy that they are going to be working the fresh chick who just figured out her pussy. They don't care about "Paul" or any other dude's name in the text. It has no flow in the gallery. Your top logo... H1 text that's off base except for SE and then some pics and text that jumps to thoughts on you. For a surfer that doesnt know you're basing it on her thoughts on the photo shoot, it's a turn off or loses their attention quick because it doesnt make sense with the flow. Same goes for your thoughts section on each gallery. A surfer thinks again... "who the fuck is Paul?" And why do they care about his thoughts... So if you want to go that route you need to brand it clearly that you're coming from the photographer angle and the site is all the hot poontang you've photographed (vs hoping the surfer figures that out). A more horny photographer charley approach. Your logo at the top now with a chick doesn't show any of that approach... I'm running out of time... Your galleries need some tweaking and your paysite design (imho). Feedback and experimenting is always good though. Other quick things... I'd drop your "get membership... more... latest" links to the bottom. Text like "See the whole set and more of..." should be linked to your paysite. Your banner at the bottom needs replaced. Content store doesnt cut it and "store" says "spend" to a customer... Let them get hornier before you say "spend". Agreed that the domain could be bettter. You can brand any name, but currently yours it too long. Not to mention your splash at the top leaves out the m at the end of your name. just my opinions and 2 cents... take it for what its worth to you.