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I'll assume its the galleries because Im leaving in a few...
I wouldn't want them as a FHGs as they are now.
Some ideas on changes for you:
I like text a lot. With that said and no offense meant, but lose the whole Paul shit. These dudes want the chicks referring to them and the whole fantasy that they are going to be working the fresh chick who just figured out her pussy. They don't care about "Paul" or any other dude's name in the text. It has no flow in the gallery. Your top logo... H1 text that's off base except for SE and then some pics and text that jumps to thoughts on you. For a surfer that doesnt know you're basing it on her thoughts on the photo shoot, it's a turn off or loses their attention quick because it doesnt make sense with the flow.
Same goes for your thoughts section on each gallery. A surfer thinks again... "who the fuck is Paul?" And why do they care about his thoughts...
So if you want to go that route you need to brand it clearly that you're coming from the photographer angle and the site is all the hot poontang you've photographed (vs hoping the surfer figures that out). A more horny photographer charley approach. Your logo at the top now with a chick doesn't show any of that approach...
I'm running out of time... Your galleries need some tweaking and your paysite design (imho). Feedback and experimenting is always good though.
Other quick things...
I'd drop your "get membership... more... latest" links to the bottom.
Text like "See the whole set and more of..." should be linked to your paysite.
Your banner at the bottom needs replaced. Content store doesnt cut it and "store" says "spend" to a customer... Let them get hornier before you say "spend".
Agreed that the domain could be bettter. You can brand any name, but currently yours it too long. Not to mention your splash at the top leaves out the m at the end of your name.
just my opinions and 2 cents... take it for what its worth to you.
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