What do you think of this mainstream splash page? - GoFuckYourself.com

Dynamix · 11-09-2004, 05:12 PM

Going for simplicity here.. it's for a site for a musician (rapper).

Yug · 11-09-2004, 05:15 PM

The question is not if we like it ... the question isnt even if YOU like it ... the question is does the rapper or people you are making this for like it

Dynamix · 11-09-2004, 05:16 PM

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Originally posted by Yug
The question is not if we like it ... the question isnt even if YOU like it ... the question is does the rapper or people you are making this for like it

Neither he nor the person I'm doing business with are online, so I'm kind of at a setback.. trying to get this wrapped up tonight.

Rob · 11-09-2004, 05:16 PM

It looks like he's shitting out the enter button.

Spudman · 11-09-2004, 05:17 PM

its a bit to simple for my liking. maybe you should make it abit easier for the surfer to veiw ? make it a bit easier to see.

Dynamix · 11-09-2004, 05:18 PM

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Originally posted by HighOnAcid
It looks like he's shitting out the enter button.

LOL noted. I'm just gonna take off the button methinks.

alias · 11-09-2004, 05:19 PM

It could be better, just skip the splash anyway.. .

Dynamix · 11-09-2004, 05:20 PM

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Originally posted by alias
It could be better, just skip the splash anyway.. .

I hate splash pages.. reduce bookmarks, take up server space, and most of all piss people off. But they asked for both a splash design and design for the main interface

slavdogg · 11-09-2004, 05:21 PM

it needs MORE red

MikeVega · 11-09-2004, 05:22 PM

I'm not a designer but it looks a bit light ...i'd make it just a bit easer to see...

Dynamix · 11-09-2004, 05:23 PM

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Originally posted by slavdogg
it needs MORE red

I was going for big contrast. Vast amounts of red with black/white focal points attract the eye to the image of the rapper.

Dynamix · 11-09-2004, 05:24 PM

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Originally posted by mvega325
I'm not a designer but it looks a bit light ...i'd make it just a bit easer to see...

how's this...

alias · 11-09-2004, 05:25 PM

Put some kind of fade [black bottom to current color top] into the lettering and then darken him up a bit.. .

Nothing wrong with having the dude be off center either, I'd move him to the left a little closer to those lines or incorporate the 2.

Dynamix · 11-09-2004, 05:29 PM

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Originally posted by alias
Put some kind of fade [black bottom to current color top] into the lettering and then darken him up a bit.. .

Nothing wrong with having the dude be off center either, I'd move him to the left a little closer to those lines or incorporate the 2.

Better?

Rob · 11-09-2004, 05:30 PM

The image of the rapper is just plain whack! It looks like there should be something underneath him...it doesn't look like a natural position.

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alias aliasx Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 19,010	Put some kind of fade [black bottom to current color top] into the lettering and then darken him up a bit.. . Nothing wrong with having the dude be off center either, I'd move him to the left a little closer to those lines or incorporate the 2. __________________ https://porncorporation.com

11-09-2004, 05:30 PM	#15
Rob I'm a great bowler. Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Right Outside of Normal. Posts: 13,309	The image of the rapper is just plain whack! It looks like there should be something underneath him...it doesn't look like a natural position. __________________