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What do you think of this mainstream splash page?
Going for simplicity here.. it's for a site for a musician (rapper).
http://www.dxmgroup.com/drafts/deepc.jpg |
The question is not if we like it ... the question isnt even if YOU like it ... the question is does the rapper or people you are making this for like it
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It looks like he's shitting out the enter button.
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its a bit to simple for my liking. maybe you should make it abit easier for the surfer to veiw ? make it a bit easier to see.
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It could be better, just skip the splash anyway.. .:2 cents:
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it needs MORE red
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I'm not a designer but it looks a bit light ...i'd make it just a bit easer to see...:2 cents:
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I was going for big contrast. Vast amounts of red with black/white focal points attract the eye to the image of the rapper. |
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http://www.dxmgroup.com/drafts/deepc2.jpg |
Put some kind of fade [black bottom to current color top] into the lettering and then darken him up a bit.. .
Nothing wrong with having the dude be off center either, I'd move him to the left a little closer to those lines or incorporate the 2. |
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http://www.dxmgroup.com/drafts/deepc3.jpg |
The image of the rapper is just plain whack! It looks like there should be something underneath him...it doesn't look like a natural position. :2 cents:
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