Comments About My New WebSite Please - GoFuckYourself.com

stfuvt · 08-23-2001, 04:31 PM

The url is http://amateurs.redclouds.com/estories/

Thanks

Wizzo · 08-23-2001, 04:34 PM

I ended up at Yahoo?

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Wizzo · 08-23-2001, 04:35 PM

Does yahoo send you alot of traffic?

Wizzo · 08-23-2001, 04:36 PM

Where are the naked pictures?

Amputate Your Head · 08-23-2001, 04:36 PM

Well, three things from me:

1. The pink on orange in the story list is sort of hard on the eyes. Wouldn't be my choice of color blending.

2. The stories look great, but some of us have really big monitors and have to go all the way from one side to the other to read them. Maybe you could condense the text towards the middle a little more.

3. Personally, I would put more sponsor links throughout.

boneprone · 08-23-2001, 04:38 PM

Too much reading. I hate reading.
Show me the twat.

And its also too damn Orange. Orange makes my nuts itch.

The preview page, I cant read casue of the font.

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boneprone · 08-23-2001, 04:40 PM

If im gunna read something it has to be written my Red or Tit.

Wizzo · 08-23-2001, 04:42 PM

Hey Bone, can you read with one hand?

I find that it's very tough...

gaby · 08-23-2001, 04:45 PM

Try a different layout Ivan, something that will be more pleasing to the eye. I see your page and it makes me want to leave without taking a look at it.. sorry for being so brutally honest but you asked for my opinion, didn't you?

I would change the background color, it makes it difficult to read the text. And I would use a table, so the text won't cover the whole width of the screen.

As for the "Preview", "Enter", "Leave" images.. hmm they're not centred. Try something else.. maybe a button.. I don't know.

oh my god.. just entered the preview area.. purple text on a brown background? no no no!!

gaby

damn.. I want my own signature

boneprone · 08-23-2001, 04:46 PM

I can read with one hand, its the typing I find difficult. The keys get a bit oily.

Banzai · 08-23-2001, 04:48 PM

what is the stories inside??
and if you make preview, let us pre-read, for what we must pay for???
and absolutely agree with GODFATHER : "Orange makes my nuts itch"
Hehe ;-))
try #000080 or so...

Amputate Your Head · 08-23-2001, 04:49 PM

I also put up another site today. (One every day ya know) Perhaps some of you would care to critique mine as well while we're at it? www.prettypix.net/money

All comments are welcome.

gaby · 08-23-2001, 04:57 PM

amputate, is the front page girl taking a shit? *L* looks like it!

Banzai · 08-23-2001, 04:58 PM

inside...
1)do not use middle page bonus! it's fucking shit!! guarantee
2)put text into table, width no more 80%,
3)align justify looks better
4)text must be white on black or yellow on black or black on white
5)GFY to webmaster school for first

tha_timinator · 08-23-2001, 05:42 PM

Ivan are you color-blind or what man!?!?

Having a orange/brown background, why the h#ck choosing for red and purple foreground?!?! Didn't you get a headache from reading just one line of it, just like I did?!!?

Really man, don't wanna be rude but if you make only ONE signup with that site I will eat my hat, coz I know it won't happen...

Just give me ONE reason why a surfer, ending up at this site, would consider PAYING MONEY to enter!?!?

Please don't feel offended,

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Amputate Your Head · 08-23-2001, 05:59 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by tha_timinator:
Really man, don't wanna be rude but if you make only ONE signup with that site I will eat my hat

I just signed up with Ivan.
Please send photos of the meal.

tha_timinator · 08-23-2001, 06:09 PM

no prob, eating it right now

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08-23-2001, 04:31 PM	#1
stfuvt Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: my website Posts: 856	Comments About My New WebSite Please The url is http://amateurs.redclouds.com/estories/ Thanks

08-23-2001, 04:34 PM	#2
Wizzo 2011 GFY Hall of Fame! Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2000 Location: Back in Texas! Posts: 15,224	I ended up at Yahoo? ------------------ Don't Fuck Yourself, get paid 71%... JOIN CASHTOUR

08-23-2001, 04:35 PM	#3
Wizzo 2011 GFY Hall of Fame! Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2000 Location: Back in Texas! Posts: 15,224	Does yahoo send you alot of traffic?

08-23-2001, 04:36 PM	#4
Wizzo 2011 GFY Hall of Fame! Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2000 Location: Back in Texas! Posts: 15,224	Where are the naked pictures?

08-23-2001, 04:36 PM	#5
Amputate Your Head There can be only one Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Somewhere else Posts: 39,075	Well, three things from me: 1. The pink on orange in the story list is sort of hard on the eyes. Wouldn't be my choice of color blending. 2. The stories look great, but some of us have really big monitors and have to go all the way from one side to the other to read them. Maybe you could condense the text towards the middle a little more. 3. Personally, I would put more sponsor links throughout.

08-23-2001, 04:38 PM	#6
boneprone Hall Of Fame Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Portland Oregon USA Posts: 34,415	Too much reading. I hate reading. Show me the twat. And its also too damn Orange. Orange makes my nuts itch. The preview page, I cant read casue of the font. ------------------ And That's The Bottom Line Cause Boneprone Said So.

08-23-2001, 04:40 PM	#7
boneprone Hall Of Fame Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Portland Oregon USA Posts: 34,415	If im gunna read something it has to be written my Red or Tit.

08-23-2001, 04:42 PM	#8
Wizzo 2011 GFY Hall of Fame! Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2000 Location: Back in Texas! Posts: 15,224	Hey Bone, can you read with one hand? I find that it's very tough...

08-23-2001, 04:45 PM	#9
gaby Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 712	Try a different layout Ivan, something that will be more pleasing to the eye. I see your page and it makes me want to leave without taking a look at it.. sorry for being so brutally honest but you asked for my opinion, didn't you? I would change the background color, it makes it difficult to read the text. And I would use a table, so the text won't cover the whole width of the screen. As for the "Preview", "Enter", "Leave" images.. hmm they're not centred. Try something else.. maybe a button.. I don't know. oh my god.. just entered the preview area.. purple text on a brown background? no no no!! gaby damn.. I want my own signature

08-23-2001, 04:46 PM	#10
boneprone Hall Of Fame Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Portland Oregon USA Posts: 34,415	I can read with one hand, its the typing I find difficult. The keys get a bit oily.

08-23-2001, 04:48 PM	#11
Banzai Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: RUSSIAN FEDERATION Posts: 119	what is the stories inside?? and if you make preview, let us pre-read, for what we must pay for??? and absolutely agree with GODFATHER : "Orange makes my nuts itch" Hehe ;-)) try #000080 or so...

08-23-2001, 04:49 PM	#12
Amputate Your Head There can be only one Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Somewhere else Posts: 39,075	I also put up another site today. (One every day ya know) Perhaps some of you would care to critique mine as well while we're at it? www.prettypix.net/money All comments are welcome.

08-23-2001, 04:57 PM	#13
gaby Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 712	amputate, is the front page girl taking a shit? L looks like it!

08-23-2001, 04:58 PM	#14
Banzai Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: RUSSIAN FEDERATION Posts: 119	inside... 1)do not use middle page bonus! it's fucking shit!! guarantee 2)put text into table, width no more 80%, 3)align justify looks better 4)text must be white on black or yellow on black or black on white 5)GFY to webmaster school for first

08-23-2001, 05:42 PM	#15
tha_timinator Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Amsterdam, the Netherlands Posts: 590	Ivan are you color-blind or what man!?!? Having a orange/brown background, why the h#ck choosing for red and purple foreground?!?! Didn't you get a headache from reading just one line of it, just like I did?!!? Really man, don't wanna be rude but if you make only ONE signup with that site I will eat my hat, coz I know it won't happen... Just give me ONE reason why a surfer, ending up at this site, would consider PAYING MONEY to enter!?!? Please don't feel offended, ------------------ sXonic - premium webhosting "Kicking major ass!"

08-23-2001, 06:09 PM	#17
tha_timinator Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Amsterdam, the Netherlands Posts: 590	no prob, eating it right now ------------------ sXonic - premium webhosting "Kicking major ass!"