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Xenophage · 07-15-2004, 02:06 PM

http://www.camgirlslive.com/layout0/...izen=ShyInLove

heya I am rebuilding all our bio pages.

we are gonna add a lot more pics and clean it up and make it
sexier but what else should I do here to make it sexy.

WiredGuy · 07-15-2004, 02:08 PM

Looks good to me.
WG

Tala · 07-15-2004, 02:11 PM

Professionally speaking?

It looks really nice, Lars. Good text. Well done.

Now I'm going to go back to my unprofessional existence. Cheers.

SlickCash Sarah · 07-15-2004, 02:12 PM

It does look appealing...but WTF do I know!

BradM · 07-15-2004, 02:14 PM

Text is really big I find... very black.

I find it really boring.
White is a much more appealing background.

Could use some more graphics somewhere. the 1pixel bordered pink buttons dont do it for me

This is MY

and doesnt mean jack shit. But my opinion... meh

Xenophage · 07-15-2004, 02:15 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BradM
Text is really big I find... very black.

I find it really boring.
White is a much more appealing background.

Could use some more graphics somewhere. the 1pixel bordered pink buttons dont do it for me

This is MY and doesnt mean jack shit. But my opinion... meh

thasnk I guess i shoulda been more clear

this is what we have now I am throwing this out and starting over

if ya were to start from scratch what would you keep and what would ya toss

BradM · 07-15-2004, 02:21 PM

Ah, gotcha. Sorry big guy.

I would keep the pictures. Heh.

I would make it brighter, more colorful. Blues, pinks, greens... I would use 1px soft borders on tables. I'd use smaller font

Im not a designer but in my mind it would look really soft, with the girls pic (or a big one and 4-5 smaller ones somewhere in the profile)

Tala · 07-15-2004, 02:22 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by LegendaryLars
thasnk I guess i shoulda been more clear

this is what we have now I am throwing this out and starting over

if ya were to start from scratch what would you keep and what would ya toss

Starting from scratch? (If it ain't broke don't fix it, but what the hell.)

I'd add at least one more picture to the page. Change the background color from black to something a bit more "standard", for lack of something better to call it. Maybe white or a very light gray.

If you're going to have all that text on the page, then I like the idea of a separate color for the tables where the text will be, but you might also try just an outline around the table in an eye-catching, (not blinding), color.

Please take the text size down a notch.

The rating idea is good, but how about sliding it under her picture? Rating then availability maybe?

I'm going to shut up now. Hopefully this is the kind of feedback you were looking to get.

Good thing my boss doesn't read GFY or I'd be up shit creek.

BRISK · 07-15-2004, 02:24 PM

It needs a dancing Jesus

Sosa · 07-15-2004, 02:25 PM

looks good lars

DrGuile · 07-15-2004, 02:26 PM

Copy off of us...

;)

Xenophage · 07-15-2004, 02:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BRISK
It needs a dancing Jesus

oh oh oh yeah

Xenophage · 07-15-2004, 02:28 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by DrGuile
Copy off of us...

;)

ok show me what ya got

DrGuile · 07-15-2004, 02:31 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by LegendaryLars
ok show me what ya got

We offer our webmasters a "Build your own bio page" feature...

http://hosted.privatefeeds.com/?E=SU...JmhpZD0zMjI%3D

here is just one of 10000's bios you could make with it.

zanycash Pete · 07-15-2004, 02:31 PM

Looks good!

Xenophage · 07-15-2004, 02:34 PM

looks good this is what we are trying to accomplish..

I dont want to write the profiles for the 5000 models int he system though

I gotta hire some offshore dudes to do that

but yes this is closer to what I want more salesish

Xenophage · 07-15-2004, 02:35 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by DrGuile
We offer our webmasters a "Build your own bio page" feature...

http://hosted.privatefeeds.com/?E=SU...JmhpZD0zMjI%3D

here is just one of 10000's bios you could make with it.

oh I see the webmasters have a form template and write their own bio info..

I like that also...

Ice · 07-15-2004, 02:37 PM

Include a pic of your man boobs with a caption "Lars approved"

DrGuile · 07-15-2004, 02:39 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by LegendaryLars
oh I see the webmasters have a form template and write their own bio info..

I like that also...

Nope... not a bad idea though

It inputs the right model's bio in the page.

....

Ill have to charge you 100$/hour for anymore advice ;)

Xenophage · 07-15-2004, 02:44 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by DrGuile
Nope... not a bad idea though

It inputs the right model's bio in the page.

....

Ill have to charge you 100$/hour for anymore advice ;)

thats cheap

I am going to mesh the webcam galleries
http://www.legendarylars.com/promo/r...m=1&Ref=cglbar

with the bio pages a bit more and see what gives.

pornstar2pac · 07-15-2004, 03:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by LegendaryLars
looks good this is what we are trying to accomplish..

I dont want to write the profiles for the 5000 models int he system though

I gotta hire some offshore dudes to do that

but yes this is closer to what I want more salesish

India has some cheap labor. i

Xenophage · 07-15-2004, 04:55 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by pornstar2pac
India has some cheap labor. i

I hear that

07-15-2004, 02:06 PM	#1
Xenophage Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 12,122	your professional input http://www.camgirlslive.com/layout0/...izen=ShyInLove heya I am rebuilding all our bio pages. we are gonna add a lot more pics and clean it up and make it sexier but what else should I do here to make it sexy.

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07-15-2004, 02:21 PM	#7
BradM Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: 1123,6536,5231 Posts: 3,397	Ah, gotcha. Sorry big guy. I would keep the pictures. Heh. I would make it brighter, more colorful. Blues, pinks, greens... I would use 1px soft borders on tables. I'd use smaller font Im not a designer but in my mind it would look really soft, with the girls pic (or a big one and 4-5 smaller ones somewhere in the profile)

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Xenophage Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 12,122	looks good this is what we are trying to accomplish.. I dont want to write the profiles for the 5000 models int he system though I gotta hire some offshore dudes to do that but yes this is closer to what I want more salesish

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