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Originally posted by LegendaryLars
thasnk I guess i shoulda been more clear
this is what we have now I am throwing this out and starting over
if ya were to start from scratch what would you keep and what would ya toss
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Starting from scratch? (If it ain't broke don't fix it, but what the hell.)
I'd add at least one more picture to the page. Change the background color from black to something a bit more "standard", for lack of something better to call it. Maybe white or a very light gray.
If you're going to have all that text on the page, then I like the idea of a separate color for the tables where the text will be, but you might also try just an outline around the table in an eye-catching, (not blinding), color.
Please take the text size down a notch.
The rating idea is good, but how about sliding it under her picture? Rating then availability maybe?
I'm going to shut up now. Hopefully this is the kind of feedback you were looking to get.
Good thing my boss doesn't read GFY or I'd be up shit creek.
