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Mutt · 06-26-2004, 07:16 PM

take a look at this site, it's not finished but that's the basic layout and style http://www.wantongirls.com/wantondotcom

giving me a big headache

TheWildcard · 06-26-2004, 07:18 PM

Looks a bit boring to me.

pine · 06-26-2004, 07:25 PM

Not bad. I don't really like the rollovers on the menu buttons all that much. The diagonal scanline BG seems a bit "chunky", like it's more that a single-pixel image.

On the bright side, I love the nipples on that girl!

Slutworks-Lester · 06-26-2004, 07:43 PM

The design looks good, I am not diggin' the font though.
The n in wanton (after the a) looks spaced different then the rest of the word.
Also the wanton photography logo looks to me a little unbalanced.
It kinda looks odd being at the top and all the blank space in left under it.
looks good so far!

I really like the art on the front page:
http://www.wantongirls.com/

Mutt · 06-26-2004, 08:01 PM

diagonal pinstripe is only one pixel so it's gotta be the colors that are making it look 'chunky' to you.

you're right, the spacing between the 'a' and 'n' is a booboo.

the space below the word Wanton being empty - only on the first page - i like the sparseness.

thanks for the critiques - gonna change some things and be done with it. it's a site for models mostly which is why i wanted it to look artsy.

infectd · 06-26-2004, 08:36 PM

who fired your old designer? I like dthe stuff you had up like last yr

V_RocKs · 06-26-2004, 11:00 PM

Just make sure Wanton Media and Pancho Dog don't sue you for any similarities...

Paul Markham · 06-26-2004, 11:16 PM

Got to admit that with Brians photography you could have done better.

What are you trying to achieve with the site?

Snake Doctor · 06-26-2004, 11:21 PM

Hey Mutt how do I contact you guys about producing some content for me?

Doctor Dre · 06-26-2004, 11:24 PM

Looks half pro half candy half boring ... dunno honestly I dont appreciate the feeling too much ... but its still better then 90 % of the sites the newbs arround here are posting

Mutt · 06-26-2004, 11:30 PM

the only purpose right now is to recruit girls which is why it's designed not to look like a porn site and kind of feminine.

i'm gonna do it over again with the devil girl logo more prominent.

Mutt · 06-26-2004, 11:35 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Lenny2
Hey Mutt how do I contact you guys about producing some content for me?

Lenny ICQ me #174-676-830 or email me at [email protected]

thanks

Vitasoy · 06-26-2004, 11:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by TheWildcard
Looks a bit boring to me.

Sometimes, boring is good. It's very user friendly. Nothing to cluttered which is great.

Paul Markham · 06-26-2004, 11:42 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Mutt
the only purpose right now is to recruit girls which is why it's designed not to look like a porn site and kind of feminine.

i'm gonna do it over again with the devil girl logo more prominent.

Then go for less arty and more "Soft Nude" Calendar shots.

The pro's will still answer and the new ones will not come thinking it's all arty.

We have this up on the Net, the English version is at the end.
It does well, remember they need the money.

Peter Romero · 06-27-2004, 12:50 AM

I liked the one with Luna on the front better.

KRL · 06-27-2004, 01:44 AM

The rollover flash buttons made me dizzy. Everything else was ok.

V_RocKs · 06-27-2004, 01:46 AM

The buttons are a big noob mistake. That's web design 101.

Ash@phpFX · 06-27-2004, 02:42 AM

the first page looks good, the buttons are pretty cheezy though

Mutt · 06-27-2004, 09:49 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by POV Porn guy
I liked the one with Luna on the front better.

can't beat Luna

Mutt · 06-27-2004, 09:52 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by charly
Then go for less arty and more "Soft Nude" Calendar shots.

The pro's will still answer and the new ones will not come thinking it's all arty.

We have this up on the Net, the English version is at the end.
It does well, remember they need the money.

yeah, gonna put softcore shots of some average looking girls and some pretty girls - don't want girls to think they have to be Jenna Jameson to get paid to do nude modeling.

Mike AI · 06-27-2004, 10:45 AM

I like it.... boring can be good for the right sites. Content sites should be focused on the content, not on the design. A clean, easy to use layout is more important.

latinasojourn · 06-27-2004, 01:14 PM

simple clean and elegant.

B&W image juxtaposed to color images is unique touch.

easy navigation scheme.

hard to beat for effectiveness.

usually simpler is better when it comes to making coin on the web.

Khun · 06-27-2004, 01:18 PM

I like the simplicity of it. Not a down side for me.

SlickRick · 06-27-2004, 01:20 PM

I like the site simple looking decent colors, good job.

Manowar · 06-27-2004, 01:21 PM

looks very classy, definetly going for the business like approach

Mutt · 06-27-2004, 03:18 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Mike AI
I like it.... boring can be good for the right sites. Content sites should be focused on the content, not on the design. A clean, easy to use layout is more important.

look http://www.camacstudios.com/portfolio.html

look http://www.wantongirls.com/wantondotcom/portfolio.html

i'm a thief

thanks for the feedback, i have to scrap this design.

Nysus · 06-27-2004, 03:20 PM

Mike AI's right. Design doesn't matter except for ease of navigation, clarity, and speed.

It loads fairly slow for me as well? Anyone else?

Cheers,
Matt

06-26-2004, 07:25 PM	#3
pine Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: The Falls, eh Posts: 1,373	Not bad. I don't really like the rollovers on the menu buttons all that much. The diagonal scanline BG seems a bit "chunky", like it's more that a single-pixel image. On the bright side, I love the nipples on that girl! __________________ unattended error: ID 10 T. Check connection between keyboard and chair.

06-26-2004, 08:01 PM	#5
Mutt Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 34,431	diagonal pinstripe is only one pixel so it's gotta be the colors that are making it look 'chunky' to you. you're right, the spacing between the 'a' and 'n' is a booboo. the space below the word Wanton being empty - only on the first page - i like the sparseness. thanks for the critiques - gonna change some things and be done with it. it's a site for models mostly which is why i wanted it to look artsy. __________________ I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

06-26-2004, 11:16 PM	#8
Paul Markham Too old to care Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: On the sofa, watching TV or doing my jigsaws. Posts: 52,943	Got to admit that with Brians photography you could have done better. What are you trying to achieve with the site? __________________ Blowout deal. 880 videos, 2,400 image sets, plus many RAW videos. $500. PM me for a deal. Skype Paulmarkham70

06-26-2004, 11:21 PM	#9
Snake Doctor I'm Lenny2 Bitch Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: On top of my soapbox Posts: 13,449	Hey Mutt how do I contact you guys about producing some content for me? __________________ sig too big

06-26-2004, 11:30 PM	#11
Mutt Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 34,431	the only purpose right now is to recruit girls which is why it's designed not to look like a porn site and kind of feminine. i'm gonna do it over again with the devil girl logo more prominent. __________________ I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

06-26-2004, 07:16 PM	#1
Mutt Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 34,431	Critique Wanted take a look at this site, it's not finished but that's the basic layout and style http://www.wantongirls.com/wantondotcom giving me a big headache __________________ I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

06-26-2004, 07:18 PM	#2
TheWildcard So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 4,759	Looks a bit boring to me.

06-26-2004, 07:43 PM	#4
Slutworks-Lester Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Midwest, USA Posts: 38	The design looks good, I am not diggin' the font though. The n in wanton (after the a) looks spaced different then the rest of the word. Also the wanton photography logo looks to me a little unbalanced. It kinda looks odd being at the top and all the blank space in left under it. looks good so far! I really like the art on the front page: http://www.wantongirls.com/

06-26-2004, 08:36 PM	#6
infectd Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Canerda Posts: 1,122	who fired your old designer? I like dthe stuff you had up like last yr

06-26-2004, 11:00 PM	#7
V_RocKs Damn Right I Kiss Ass! Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Cowtown, USA Posts: 32,409	Just make sure Wanton Media and Pancho Dog don't sue you for any similarities...

06-27-2004, 12:50 AM	#15
Peter Romero Long time no happy ending Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: San Diego CA Posts: 10,578	I liked the one with Luna on the front better. __________________ POVCash [email protected] See them all here: http://www.Petergirls.com

06-27-2004, 01:44 AM	#16
KRL Entrepreneur Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 31,429	The rollover flash buttons made me dizzy. Everything else was ok. __________________ If you would like to develop your domains, you can lease inexpensive foreign labor from the leaders in the field at iWebmasters.com TO LOWER YOUR COSTS AND INCREASE YOUR PRODUCTION! * * * * * * * * * * * * Domains Adult News KRL's Newsletter Biz Tips Just Listed Domains

06-27-2004, 01:46 AM	#17
V_RocKs Damn Right I Kiss Ass! Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Cowtown, USA Posts: 32,409	The buttons are a big noob mistake. That's web design 101.

06-27-2004, 02:42 AM	#18
Ash@phpFX Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 4,292	the first page looks good, the buttons are pretty cheezy though

06-27-2004, 10:45 AM	#21
Mike AI Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Elysian Fields Posts: 3,624	I like it.... boring can be good for the right sites. Content sites should be focused on the content, not on the design. A clean, easy to use layout is more important. __________________ Make big money on your Domains! Why wait 40 days to get paid with the other guys? Parked.com pays the most for your traffic, and cuts checks twice a month!

06-27-2004, 01:14 PM	#22
latinasojourn Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 3,191	simple clean and elegant. B&W image juxtaposed to color images is unique touch. easy navigation scheme. hard to beat for effectiveness. usually simpler is better when it comes to making coin on the web.

06-27-2004, 01:18 PM	#23
Khun Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: TN Posts: 1,239	I like the simplicity of it. Not a down side for me. __________________ Sig is on vacation... (I wish I could vacation as long as my sig has...)

06-27-2004, 01:20 PM	#24
SlickRick Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Kingman AZ Posts: 2,849	I like the site simple looking decent colors, good job.

06-27-2004, 01:21 PM	#25
Manowar jellyfish Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 71,528	looks very classy, definetly going for the business like approach

06-27-2004, 03:20 PM	#27
Nysus Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 7,817	Mike AI's right. Design doesn't matter except for ease of navigation, clarity, and speed. It loads fairly slow for me as well? Anyone else? Cheers, Matt __________________ What name is pr0 / Untouched Markets using these days? Untouched Markets - pr0 - Refund My Money Now Someone owes me $2,000 because they didn't do any work that was paid for pointing at pr0 / William / UntouchedMarkets See https://gfy.com/fucking-around-and-business-discussion/948258-untouchedmarkets-pr0-refund-money-post16744521.html and for more detailed see https://gfy.com/fucking-around-and-business-discussion/948645-re-recent-bullshit-drama-explained-detail-pr0-untouched-markets.html