Critique Wanted
 

take a look at this site, it's not finished but that's the basic layout and style http://www.wantongirls.com/wantondotcom

giving me a big headache :helpme

Looks a bit boring to me.

Not bad. I don't really like the rollovers on the menu buttons all that much. The diagonal scanline BG seems a bit "chunky", like it's more that a single-pixel image.

On the bright side, I love the nipples on that girl! :winkwink:

The design looks good, I am not diggin' the font though.
The n in wanton (after the a) looks spaced different then the rest of the word.
Also the wanton photography logo looks to me a little unbalanced.
It kinda looks odd being at the top and all the blank space in left under it.
looks good so far!

I really like the art on the front page:
http://www.wantongirls.com/

diagonal pinstripe is only one pixel so it's gotta be the colors that are making it look 'chunky' to you.

you're right, the spacing between the 'a' and 'n' is a booboo.

the space below the word Wanton being empty - only on the first page - i like the sparseness.

thanks for the critiques - gonna change some things and be done with it. it's a site for models mostly which is why i wanted it to look artsy.

who fired your old designer? I like dthe stuff you had up like last yr

Just make sure Wanton Media and Pancho Dog don't sue you for any similarities...

Got to admit that with Brians photography you could have done better.

What are you trying to achieve with the site?

Hey Mutt how do I contact you guys about producing some content for me?

Looks half pro half candy half boring ... dunno honestly I dont appreciate the feeling too much ... but its still better then 90 % of the sites the newbs arround here are posting

the only purpose right now is to recruit girls which is why it's designed not to look like a porn site and kind of feminine.

i'm gonna do it over again with the devil girl logo more prominent.

Lenny ICQ me #174-676-830 or email me at [email protected]

thanks

Sometimes, boring is good. It's very user friendly. Nothing to cluttered which is great. :)

Then go for less arty and more "Soft Nude" Calendar shots.

The pro's will still answer and the new ones will not come thinking it's all arty.

We have this up on the Net, the English version is at the end.
It does well, remember they need the money. :Graucho

I liked the one with Luna on the front better.

The rollover flash buttons made me dizzy. Everything else was ok.

The buttons are a big noob mistake. That's web design 101.

the first page looks good, the buttons are pretty cheezy though

can't beat Luna :thumbsup

yeah, gonna put softcore shots of some average looking girls and some pretty girls - don't want girls to think they have to be Jenna Jameson to get paid to do nude modeling.

I like it.... boring can be good for the right sites. Content sites should be focused on the content, not on the design. A clean, easy to use layout is more important.

simple clean and elegant.

B&W image juxtaposed to color images is unique touch.

easy navigation scheme.

hard to beat for effectiveness.


usually simpler is better when it comes to making coin on the web.

I like the simplicity of it. Not a down side for me.

I like the site simple looking decent colors, good job.

looks very classy, definetly going for the business like approach :thumbsup

look http://www.camacstudios.com/portfolio.html

look http://www.wantongirls.com/wantondotcom/portfolio.html

i'm a thief :BangBang:

thanks for the feedback, i have to scrap this design.

Mike AI's right. Design doesn't matter except for ease of navigation, clarity, and speed.

It loads fairly slow for me as well? Anyone else?

Cheers,
Matt